Halloween brothers - chapter 2

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Info! If you haven't read chapter 1 yet please go read it before any spoiler Alart happen thanks!

https://brokenlens.xyz/forums/threads/halloween-brothers-chapter-1.33417/

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Previously:

HOW COULD YOU- YOU FAKE BROTHER GET AWAY FROM US! No please calm down I'll tell you the truth on me just understand please? Fine -.- But you better be telling the truth now start talking!



Chapter 2 - Are you the Phantom?
Ok it's all started in a cold, dark, cruel place we're all the kids go when there "parents" abandoned there kids. And there I was in a cell like jail but in kids way. Everyday we wake up, got into our dirty clothes and walk into the cafeteria. We ate Rotten apples, dirt, dry up rice and all that awful stuff you imagine.

How long was I there? Welp I can't exactly say how long but for my instant I say I was there for 2-4 years. Look I was 6 I didn't know was going on at the time! The only thing I remember is getting beat up everyday at recess and that was life for me until that very day. It's was 9:00am I was getting dressed for another awful day until a woman came up to me and that when I realized I was getting adopted.
But I didn't knew at the time that was actually happening!

All I saw her doing is filling out "paper work" and a stack of then just piled on her. 5 hours later I was finally free with a family, a new home, and a new life except...well you guys were there but at that time you guys were also 6 so you didn't know what was going on at the time. A few years past we grow and you guys treating me like a real brother and I never got this experience in my life.

So let's me get this straight said James you were stuck in a child horror place until OUR mom ya your heard me right our mom went there and saw you and planned to adopt you and them after that she brought home and you were became part of the family. Is this true or am I missing anything?

*Sigh* nope you got everything right that how I was brought here to the family. My real "parents" dumped me like I was trash to them and was forever alone until your mom came and adopt me and ya that my life story.

Hmhmmmmm I see now so should we give him a chance to know more absolutely us John? Said James. Well rather that we have to or not he part of the family and we should treat him like he part of the family. *John and James look at Tommy* from here and now on we will treat you has our brother no matter what happen you safe with us.

Thanks you guys for understanding what I said. I wasn't really fun telling you guys this but one way or another I had to and the truth is out there now so thank you guys! Anytime brother now let's go to sleep it's 11:45pm. Mom and dad are already asleep so let's go now tommorow we have school.

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*Alarm rings at 6:30am* *Tommy stop the timer* Welp brother's it's time to wake up! Ugh already but can't we sleep for another 10min? No I mean sorry but if you sleep any longer your be late for school beside it's Friday! Fine I'll get up. And make sure to wake up John to please and thank you. *Boys come downstairs to eat breakfast!* Coming mom! *At breakfast* So boys everything alright? Ya mom Tommy told us everything and before you say anything we understand what he going through and we accept his response now we're be going to school.

A...a..... In speechless Said mom. Honey they understand let's then just experience his childhood before we crush more of there dreams ok? *Deep breath* ok I understand now. *In bus* Soooooo Tommy everything alright? Ya everything good it's just I can't believe my real parents ditched me like I was nothing to them it's make fell bad.

Well Tommy here my advice try not to think about it that much and your be fine beside there better thing to think of then the bad ones. Ya I guess so but let get our work done in school. And on the other hand it's Friday today so let's have some fun today!

Summary on what happened in school~
Got in trouble 3 times, talk to Lily about what happened, John got beat up by bully's and ya all it!
*At bus to the ride home* Ok ok blah blah blah we got in trouble 3 time just for trowing toilet paper around so what? Um the fact that our best friend told on us? Ya who care because I don't -.-. And remember John got beat up but we scard the bully away remember? Yup I like that part of the Friday but we could been better. I guess so but let bye gone be bye gone and enjoy our rest or our day and weekend!

Yaa let's have fun! 2 hours later. 10 days before Halloween! I'm so excited for it! *Mom knock on door* umm boys your ready for tomorrow? Um what are we doing tomorrow? We're getting your costume for Halloween! Ugh I remembered I mean sorry it just we didn't want to were costume bit since you said we will, we won't fight about it were just deal with it. Ok boys sorry to interrupt *close door slowly* Come guys let's deal with it and move on said John. Yes let's just go with it.

Saturday:

Ok mom were ready and all dressed up to go to Walmart to get our costume! Ok honey were ready to go! *In the car* So boys what kind of costume are your picking this year? Well we really don't know since we weren't planning to were costume but when we get there were see what type of costume fits us the best. *Parks cars*

Ok boys were here now remember pick the right costume you want because we're be taking selfies (photos) before you guys trick or treat all right?

Ok dad *Sayed all 3 boys* now lets go in and see what "hot" to pick for a costume. Ok boys these are the choices you can pick! There point of view:
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So boys what will it's be? We have 6 choice we can pick! Well umm there all good but none of them fits us great plus there expensive here! Boys I don't want to fight so just pick one and let's go *in a angry tune*. Fine wee pick and lets go! A few minutes later.... So this is what they pick:

Tommy.........
Creeper costume

John....... Steve costume

James...... Pumpkin costume

*Back at home* So boys did you like your new costume. Well sorry to admit this but I like my costume said Tommy it's fits me, it suits me and everything thanks Mom and Dad! Well John and me did like our costume actually so ya thank you Mom and Dad. YEEEEE i knew your like it's ^•^ said mom. Well the family is ready for Halloween In 9 days so let's Roger into tr fest!

We're start decorating tomorrow on Sunday! This is going to me.. *something brakes upstairs* *EVERYONE FREEZES* ummm were all here right? Um yaa.. so what was that thing the broke upstairs? *Light turn off* AAAAAA MOM! kids kids clam down there must me a logical explanation. *Phantom voice* Hello children ;D it's is me the Phantom! *Scary piano music starts playing*.

What do you want from us you stupid Phantom leave us alone! Ohh sweetie your see soon enough poof! *Light turn on again* Kids it's will be over soon....

{ Edit } CHAPTER 3 IS OUT!:
https://brokenlens.xyz/forums/threads/halloween-brother-chapter-3.34597/


And to be continue xD I'm so sorry tell me how this chapter is going I'll like to see your feedback!
 
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One thing u need to do is put speech marks when a person is talking because I was getting extremely confused and I also wasn't sure who was talking where.

Other then that it was ok :)
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chu should do paragraphs .-.
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Nothing really, I thought the flow was smooth but like they said. xD
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Phantom? Am I being called? LOL , anyways nice job. I just saw "Phantom" so I commented.
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