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Happy Halloween!!!
Sooooooooo we have gone this far people... Chapter 1 to 4 was done, if you miss them.. they will be a link to them ↓↓. Anyway Eric has gone through the journey of it and made a Improvement of the story and did well so I'm shall end it :3 Btw tomorrow's there will be sign up for my Thanksgiving friend war story, if anyone want to be part of it but furthermore lets get started!
Chapter 1:
https://brokenlens.xyz/forums/threads/halloween-brothers-chapter-1.33417/
Chapter 2:
https://brokenlens.xyz/forums/threads/halloween-brothers-chapter-2.34106/
Chapter 3:
https://brokenlens.xyz/forums/threads/halloween-brother-chapter-3.34597/
(Long one) Chapter 4:
https://brokenlens.xyz/forums/threads/i-shall-not-give-up-halloween-brother-chapter-4.35343/
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Now previously on chapter 4:
"But there also good news too!" "We will need to do the commend but we will need to type a special code to get it started again said John" "So did the phantom need to type a code too?" "Um no cause if you decide to turn it off, then it's think your the owner if it and ya you know..."
"So let's type the command and get it started so we save Halloween and Tommy! "And I got even more good news but I'll tell you later." "Now let's get the code in!" *John types code: /Power hevely gills 3200 Holly 45,000 on *clicks*
"You are now activating the power line, please enter the code to start it." "No, I don't know the code said John." "Oh I know what the code let me type it said Tommy" ;3
THE FINIAL CHAPTER!!!!!
*Tommy types the code* "Omg the light turn on!" OMG we did it! We save Halloween!" *Tommy and John dance*. But then the power station manager just came inside. "Boys I'm speechless hear, you save Halloween! You done the world a favor! I'm so happy for both of you that we will have a party at town hall to celebrate!"
He leave at that point after he was done talking. "Ok John, so what the good news now?" " Ok so now *gets excited* "WE CAN TRACK DOWN THE PHANTOM WITH THE PEOPLE TRACKER DEVICE!!!!! XD". "Omg that the best news I heard! Now, lest track him down and get James back! Said Tommy." *Clicking code*..
"Look! I found wear he hiding! The phantom is 12 miles from hear!". "Ok so what are we waiting for? Lets go!." So the 2 boys rode on there bikes until they got there.
1 hour later....
"Ugh.. This place gives me the creeps... said Tommy" "Tommy shut up and be quite or else the phantom will hear us!" "Ok fine Jesse's you don't have to be so serious -_-." *They step into the abandoned Hotel wear they found the phantom* "Ok so wear will a phantom be hiding?" "Why are you ask me? Said Tommy."
"Hay, I just thought ok?" "Whatever, anyway lets keep go..." *So they wear off, on a mission to save James and put a end to the phantom*. "Woo said Tommy, this hallway is so big!" "Yup indeed." *They enter a room* "Ohhhhhh look! Potions! Said John." "Hay be careful with those! They can be dangerous and can probably kill you said Tommy."
"That true said John *puts it down"." 'Ok let's look at the last door in the hallway and get out if hear" *they open the door*
"Omg this is so creepy! I don't want to be hear! Said Tommy." Hello said a voice above" "umm hello? Said Tommy, Who gose there?"
"Ohh you know me but do you know I am?" "Umm yes we do said John and Tommy, we know who your are! You are the phan- *The phantom of the Opera music starts playing*." YES! I AM THE PHANTOM! AMD I HAVE James with me >;D" "Give him back now before I break all your bones that you have?"
"Aww that cute.. a 5 year old trying to hurt me.. That so nice." "Shut the fu-". "Woah woah Tommy! Watch your language please... "Ugh, how can you worry about that when wear trying to save James! "Oh your look for James hu... Well I'm afraid he not hear or at least that what I seen.. *evil laugh*."
"Wear the hell is James!!! Speak now!" "Well I done want other tell you yet until you give me the code." "Nev.....Neve....*sigh*" "Tommy.. said John I think it's time to give it to him.. I mean let's give it to him.... It's the only way to save Jame..... "Oh speaking of James I think you might to see him now!"
"Finally! It's was about time you do something! *Cover blanket* HEAR IS JAMES >;D." *Everyone stops*. They start starts crying. No..no.noo.. That can't be James!!!! nNOO!!!! *Police sounds come* "WTF DID YOU DO TO JAMES!!" "HAHH I killed him ;D".
I hang him on a rope until he couldn't breathe and *pop* he was dead from that like he was so easy to kill." " YOU SON OF A B.." *Police knock down the door* *Police shoots Phantom at gunpoint* BAM! *Everyone stops and see what happens* "kids, everything is over now.. it's 12:00pm.. Halloween is over.. is November 1...
"No James can't be dead! He can't! "John what do we do D:...." But once he turn around everyone was gone" "my life.. what did become..." *See the gun* "I think it's time" "goodbye world" *shoots gun at him*
*Wake up* wwwwaaa? Wait what Happen? Was all that a dream? *Gets up* Eyy Tommy my boy! Said John. Um hello... Did something happen like a phantom came? "Pff Tommy your so funny xD I think all that trick or treat candy made you a little you know... Now lets get dressed". "It's November 6, the day we have a big test today!
"But wear James?" "James? We never had someone name James, but we do have someone name John, which is me xD now get dressed" "But it felt all real and..." "Well time for a normal day." Let's go Tommy xD last one to the bus stop is a rotten egg! Ohh I will win! And that when the 2 boys were only the best one of there living dreams cause it was all a.. ~Dream~
And on that day nobody knew who James was but the memory of the young Tommy will be always in his mind or he thought James wasn't real.. *muahahahah*
The end of all the chapter of 1 to 5 and it's was all the work of magic and it was all a dream for him of Halloween... Or he thought it was.... Thank you all for reading the chapter!
Tommorow!!
Will be a sign up on my The Thanksgiving war party story! There will be up to 10 people! 1 team of 5 and team 2 of 5 and it will be another awesome story but for now this will all made of me! If you have any QnA of the story tell me
How long did the chapter take?
Chapter 1 - 55 minutes
Chapter 2 - 1 hour and 20 minutes
Chapter 3 - 1 hour and 40 minutes
(Longest one) Chapter 4 - 2 hours and 25 minutes
(Last one) chapter 5 - 1 hour And 30 minutes
And that all from your buddy,
~Ericthewriter~
Sooooooooo we have gone this far people... Chapter 1 to 4 was done, if you miss them.. they will be a link to them ↓↓. Anyway Eric has gone through the journey of it and made a Improvement of the story and did well so I'm shall end it :3 Btw tomorrow's there will be sign up for my Thanksgiving friend war story, if anyone want to be part of it but furthermore lets get started!
Chapter 1:
https://brokenlens.xyz/forums/threads/halloween-brothers-chapter-1.33417/
Chapter 2:
https://brokenlens.xyz/forums/threads/halloween-brothers-chapter-2.34106/
Chapter 3:
https://brokenlens.xyz/forums/threads/halloween-brother-chapter-3.34597/
(Long one) Chapter 4:
https://brokenlens.xyz/forums/threads/i-shall-not-give-up-halloween-brother-chapter-4.35343/
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Now previously on chapter 4:
"But there also good news too!" "We will need to do the commend but we will need to type a special code to get it started again said John" "So did the phantom need to type a code too?" "Um no cause if you decide to turn it off, then it's think your the owner if it and ya you know..."
"So let's type the command and get it started so we save Halloween and Tommy! "And I got even more good news but I'll tell you later." "Now let's get the code in!" *John types code: /Power hevely gills 3200 Holly 45,000 on *clicks*
"You are now activating the power line, please enter the code to start it." "No, I don't know the code said John." "Oh I know what the code let me type it said Tommy" ;3
THE FINIAL CHAPTER!!!!!
Finial Chapter! Chapter 5: The death of him:
"Wh-what do you mean? Said John" "John it's SO easy! It's the code we been holding on! The one we hack!" "Omg that the code?!?! No wonder it's was so important to keep it safe!" "Now lets type in that code and run the city again and then tell me the good news!" "Ok let me type it now"
*Tommy types the code* "Omg the light turn on!" OMG we did it! We save Halloween!" *Tommy and John dance*. But then the power station manager just came inside. "Boys I'm speechless hear, you save Halloween! You done the world a favor! I'm so happy for both of you that we will have a party at town hall to celebrate!"
He leave at that point after he was done talking. "Ok John, so what the good news now?" " Ok so now *gets excited* "WE CAN TRACK DOWN THE PHANTOM WITH THE PEOPLE TRACKER DEVICE!!!!! XD". "Omg that the best news I heard! Now, lest track him down and get James back! Said Tommy." *Clicking code*..
"Look! I found wear he hiding! The phantom is 12 miles from hear!". "Ok so what are we waiting for? Lets go!." So the 2 boys rode on there bikes until they got there.
1 hour later....
"Ugh.. This place gives me the creeps... said Tommy" "Tommy shut up and be quite or else the phantom will hear us!" "Ok fine Jesse's you don't have to be so serious -_-." *They step into the abandoned Hotel wear they found the phantom* "Ok so wear will a phantom be hiding?" "Why are you ask me? Said Tommy."
"Hay, I just thought ok?" "Whatever, anyway lets keep go..." *So they wear off, on a mission to save James and put a end to the phantom*. "Woo said Tommy, this hallway is so big!" "Yup indeed." *They enter a room* "Ohhhhhh look! Potions! Said John." "Hay be careful with those! They can be dangerous and can probably kill you said Tommy."
"That true said John *puts it down"." 'Ok let's look at the last door in the hallway and get out if hear" *they open the door*
"Omg this is so creepy! I don't want to be hear! Said Tommy." Hello said a voice above" "umm hello? Said Tommy, Who gose there?"
"Ohh you know me but do you know I am?" "Umm yes we do said John and Tommy, we know who your are! You are the phan- *The phantom of the Opera music starts playing*." YES! I AM THE PHANTOM! AMD I HAVE James with me >;D" "Give him back now before I break all your bones that you have?"
"Aww that cute.. a 5 year old trying to hurt me.. That so nice." "Shut the fu-". "Woah woah Tommy! Watch your language please... "Ugh, how can you worry about that when wear trying to save James! "Oh your look for James hu... Well I'm afraid he not hear or at least that what I seen.. *evil laugh*."
"Wear the hell is James!!! Speak now!" "Well I done want other tell you yet until you give me the code." "Nev.....Neve....*sigh*" "Tommy.. said John I think it's time to give it to him.. I mean let's give it to him.... It's the only way to save Jame..... "Oh speaking of James I think you might to see him now!"
"Finally! It's was about time you do something! *Cover blanket* HEAR IS JAMES >;D." *Everyone stops*. They start starts crying. No..no.noo.. That can't be James!!!! nNOO!!!! *Police sounds come* "WTF DID YOU DO TO JAMES!!" "HAHH I killed him ;D".
I hang him on a rope until he couldn't breathe and *pop* he was dead from that like he was so easy to kill." " YOU SON OF A B.." *Police knock down the door* *Police shoots Phantom at gunpoint* BAM! *Everyone stops and see what happens* "kids, everything is over now.. it's 12:00pm.. Halloween is over.. is November 1...
"No James can't be dead! He can't! "John what do we do D:...." But once he turn around everyone was gone" "my life.. what did become..." *See the gun* "I think it's time" "goodbye world" *shoots gun at him*
*Wake up* wwwwaaa? Wait what Happen? Was all that a dream? *Gets up* Eyy Tommy my boy! Said John. Um hello... Did something happen like a phantom came? "Pff Tommy your so funny xD I think all that trick or treat candy made you a little you know... Now lets get dressed". "It's November 6, the day we have a big test today!
"But wear James?" "James? We never had someone name James, but we do have someone name John, which is me xD now get dressed" "But it felt all real and..." "Well time for a normal day." Let's go Tommy xD last one to the bus stop is a rotten egg! Ohh I will win! And that when the 2 boys were only the best one of there living dreams cause it was all a.. ~Dream~
And on that day nobody knew who James was but the memory of the young Tommy will be always in his mind or he thought James wasn't real.. *muahahahah*
The end
The end of all the chapter of 1 to 5 and it's was all the work of magic and it was all a dream for him of Halloween... Or he thought it was.... Thank you all for reading the chapter!
Tommorow!!
Will be a sign up on my The Thanksgiving war party story! There will be up to 10 people! 1 team of 5 and team 2 of 5 and it will be another awesome story but for now this will all made of me! If you have any QnA of the story tell me
How long did the chapter take?
Chapter 1 - 55 minutes
Chapter 2 - 1 hour and 20 minutes
Chapter 3 - 1 hour and 40 minutes
(Longest one) Chapter 4 - 2 hours and 25 minutes
(Last one) chapter 5 - 1 hour And 30 minutes
And that all from your buddy,
~Ericthewriter~
