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Jc remembered the sweet scent of Lia's hair.
The way her eyes sparkled like diamonds.
The numbing sensation when she held him.
The cute laughter that came from her soft lips when he told a dumb joke.

The way he supposedly broke her heart.

That day, Jc had stepped into the kitchen to get his breakfast, like any other day. Except this time, he'd been surprised by a girl rummaging through his fridge. She had long, silky brown hair, and she wore a lime green jacket, with grey sweatpants. Jc recognized her immediately.

"Um, Lia?" Jc curiously peeked into the fridge from above her head. He saw that Lia had taken almost all the eggs. "What the frick are you going to do with all those eggs?"

Lia expertly but cautiously ducked below Jc's arm to escape to the stove. She grabbed a pan and started cracking the eggs. Jc took hold of her arm and shook her slightly.

"Lia? You're creeping me out. What are you doing here? How did you get in? Why are you -" Jc paused. Lia had turned up to look at him, tears threatening to fall from her eyes. Jc quickly grabbed a tissue and wiped her tears away. "Lia? Are you okay? What's wrong?" He had so many questions... but he was only answered with yet another:

"Do you love me?" Lia's eyes teared up again, which made Jc nervous.

"Of course I do... you know that, don't you?" Jc bit his lip - what had he done wrong? Lia shoved a crumpled piece of paper in his direction. She was crying now. Jc took the paper and unfolded it. As soon as he saw the picture, he froze.

"If you really do, then explain that." Lia shook slightly, tears pouring from her eyes like water from a river to a waterfall. Jc simple stood, motionless, staring at the picture.

The picture depicted Jc kissing another girl - she had dark brown hair which reached just under her waist, and her arms were wrapped around Jc's neck. Shielo. They seemed to be at a party, but away from where everyone's attention was at.

Well, not everyone's.

"I... Lia, I wasn't... This isn't me -" Jc was cut short by Lia's yell, her voice cutting through the air, booming like an explosion. "HOW CAN IT NOT BE YOU?!"

"I don't know... Maybe someone's framing me?" Jc was bitting his lip so hard, it had started to bleed. Lia stared at him, speechless, tears still falling from her eyes to her tender cheeks, to the cold, hard floor.

"Frame... You're horrible with excuses. Just admit, you were out drinking with another girl, and I was here, sitting on my dumb ♥♥♥, thinking I could trust you." Lia looked away in disgust. Jc reached for her hand, but she pulled away.

"I swear I wasn't drinking with her. I'm not even that person. I swear to God, I haven't kissed anyone in the past 48 hours except you." Jc's vision turned blurry, and he wiped away his tears.

Lia looked back at him, her eyes red, her cheeks wet. "You always made up excuses when you did something wrong. Or, you just blamed someone else. It's really a wonder that you've never been caught until now." She turned around and focused on the eggs again.

"I know you love eggs, so I decided to cook you one last breakfast before I let you go," Lia said. Then, she was like a robot, just cooking eggs, refusing to talk to anyone. Jc sat at the dining table, trying to figure out what to do. When Lia served him the plate of eggs, he knew her smile was karma at work.

"I guess I'll see you at school later. Hey, maybe I can spread the news - Jc Garcia is a cheater." Lia smiled at him, but he could see behind her disguise. He knew tears were bulding up behind her eyes. One last time, he tried.

"Lia, please -" Jc started, but Lia just shook her head.

"It's okay, really. I understand if you got tired of me, I am a rather boring person after all..." Lia smiled, then headed for the door.

"Lia! Please, just -" But all he heard was a door slam shut. Then he knew.

She was gone, forever.

Now, Jc was just a loner. Apparently, Lia had meant it when she said she was going to spread the news. Everyone at their school found out - which wrecked Jc's reputation. One moment he ruled the school, the next he was a nobody. Those fangirls he used to have? Now they shied away from him, worried he'd do the same to them.

There were just two people who stuck by him, and whose existence he truly appreciated. Strike and Shielo. There was another girl, but she switched schools, and they almost never talked now.

As Jc walked towards his locker, someone threw their arm around his shoulder. He swatted the arm away, only to find that it belong to a girl he used to hang out with - the girl I was just talking about.

"Lauren? I thought -" Jc was cut off by Lauren's snicker. She took her hand off him, and dragged it along with her.

"You always think wrong. Especially when it comes to fighting." Lauren smiled at him, while he just glared at her. He tried to punch her, but she sidestepped his hand, which almost made him fall.

"What did I say? Horrible at fighting," Lauren grinned. She rummaged through her jeans pocket, and took out a neatly folded paper, just as they reached Jc's locker. As he got some stuff out and put some stuff in, Jc spied Lauren from the corner of his eye - he could see her staring at something, or possibly, someone. Then he realised the paper.

"Whatcha got there? A love letter to Ray?" Jc teased. He expected a reaction - like a friendly punch or kick - but received none. "Hey, it was just a joke, you know." Lauren shrugged the topic off like it was nothing. She handed the paper - apparently a picture - to Jc.

"You know that photo that someone took which wrecked your relationship with Lia and also your reputation? Well, it was photoshopped. The photo I just gave you is the real thing." Lauren looked at him, waiting for him to look at the photo, for his reaction.

Jc gulped, then looked at the picture. There was Shielo, with her dark brown hair, and her hands wrapped around...

"Strike?" Jc looked up at Lauren again, confused. "I don't get it. You're sure this is the original?"

Lauren nodded. "Really Jc, are you seriously going to doubt the person who took that photo?" Jc looked at her. Then at the photo. Then back at Lauren.

"But who..." Jc tilted his head. Lauren just smiled sadly at him. Then it hit him, like a stone in the head.

"Ray. That b -"

"No, you idiot." Lauren facepalmed, then shook her head. "Tantastic. Remember Lia's old boyfriend? Yeah, that guy. I had shown that picture of Strike and Shielo to a couple people, Tan included. He is probably the person who stole Lia from you. And unfortunately, due to both your and Lia's stupidity, he has won this little game."

Lauren handed Jc another photo - this one of Lia and Tan sitting on a bench. Jc could see Tan's hand wandering places he'd never been to before, making him green with envy.

Suddenly, the bell rang, signifying the end of school for Jc. "Shoot," Lauren muttered. "Gotta run, I'll cya around sometime, ay?" Then she was gone, disappeared into thin air. Jc looked at the photo in his hand. The original. Not the fake Tan showed to Lia. Using this, he could win Lia back.

Well, maybe. It could fail, but let's not think about that.

Jc dumped all his books into his locker. Then, he grabbed the photo and ran out like a damn mad man. He looked for Lia everywhere - in the park by the bench they used to eat ice cream and joke around on, the tree they would sit under and talk, the back yard of the school, where the football field was. But she was nowhere to be seen.

There was a small "Ding!" sound. Jc's iPhone. He took it out and quickly typed in his password, then dialed Lia's number, ignoring the worried message from his mom. "Please, please, please answer," Jc mumbled.

"... Hello?" Lia's voice sounded nervous, and afraid. "I don't have much time, please be quick." She didn't recognize Jc's number either, which meant she'd deleted him from her contacts.

"Hey? I'm waiting." That brought Jc back to earth.

"Um, hi Lia. I'd just like to -" Jc stopped. He heard Lia scream. "Lia? LIA!" Jc panicked. A muffled voice answered him.

"If you want her back, come down to the docks, where all the abandoned warehouses are. Then just wait there." Then Jc heard a "Click!" and the call was ended.

He was already running to the docks. The docks - the place which was once a beautiful view, where Jc would take Lia fishing sometimes. In the past month, some sort of crime happened there, and suddenly nobody dared go there. It was strange - what type of crime scared everyone away from a certain place?

As he reached the docks, Jc was breathing hard, his breath shaky. He looked around, for some sign of life, of Lia, but he saw nothing. He turned to the warehouse where the crimes had happened. Maybe they'd be in there.

Jc approached the warehouse, cautious of any suspicious people lurking around. He crouched down low beneath a broken window, just enough so he could still see inside. He grabbed a nearby stick as a weapon, just in case, then focused on what was going on inside.

There was a girl - Lia, Jc figured. Without lights, it was hard to tell - who was strapped to a chair with rough-looking string. Her hands and legs were tied, too, and her mouth taped as well.

A man came into view. He had light brown hair, and emerald green eyes. He crouched down so he could look up at the girl. From this distance, Jc couldn't really hear what he said, but he could make out a few words.

"If he doesn't show up... doesn't love you... played... love me..." Jc realised what he was saying - if he didn't show up, that meant that he didn't love Lia (the girl), and that he had just played with her. Tan would treat her better, love her truly, and be a better boyfriend, if Lia was willing to love him.

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"Hey," a voice said from behind Jc, which made him jump - and fall. "Jeezus, am I that scary?" Staring down at Jc was Lauren. She had a bow and a quiver filled with arrows. She took a knife from a pocket in the quiver and handed it to Jc.

"That'll be a better weapon than that stick," Lauren motioned to the stick which Jc had forgotten he still had. He blushed, and took the knife. Then, he looked back at the window. Lia still sat there, trying to untie her hands, but Tan was nowhere to be seen. Jc looked back at Lauren - she was the better fighter here. She nodded, and Jc jumped in.

He ran to Lia, and cautiously cut the rope using the knife Lauren had given him. After he'd freed Lia, he removed the tape from her mouth. Then, he hugged her. He inhaled the sweet scent of her perfume, and got lost in her mess of tangled hair. Jc started crying into Lia's hair, apologizing over and over again. Lia just stood there, crying, but doing nothing else.

"Jc!" Lauren loudly whispered into his ear, which brought him back to earth. He let go of Lia, apologizing for wetting her hair. Lauren kicked his leg.

"What?!" Jc whispered back. Lauren nodded to a door - someone was coming. Jc set Lia back on the chair, and promised to come back for her. Then, he looked at the door. Tan had come in while he wasn't looking.

"Why, hello there. It's nice to see you. I guess you really do love her. The question is, does she love you?" Tan smiled, and looked at Lia. "I do hope you thanked him for freeing you. I'm too tired to re-tie you, so you're free to go, ciao, adios!"

Jc glared at Tan. "You liar. You lied to Lia, didn't you?" He took out the picture, and showed it to Lia. "This is the real photo. Tan showed you a photoshopped version." Lauren nodded.

"Ah, so you discovered my plan. That was very clever of you. But, you are very late," Tan said. He took out a revolver, and aimed it at Jc. "I doubt you really love her. You never chased after her, tried to figure out what really happened, until now. It's sad, really, to know that she still loves you with all her heart."

"The reason," Lauren spoke up, "is because he is the dumbest idiot on the planet, and he didn't know how, or even where, to start." Lia smiled. Tan aimed the revolver at Lauren.

"Very funny. I'm sure we all know that's not true. Well, half of it is, the other half not. You know, I bet the only reason you're protecting him is because you like him."

Jc blushed, but Lauren rolled her eyes. "I'm surprised you're saying that, considering you claimed you're an anti-shipper. Also, do you really want to know why he never found any starting points, any clues? It's because I covered them all up. I was a genuine Liastic shipper, but now... I think Garzalia has more chances. I never thought you to be the violent type, but hey, everyone's got secrets.

"Now, I'm sure you'd like to shoot me, 20 times over. And you know what? You can. You can shoot me until I'm full of holes, unrecognisable. Wanna know why? Because then, you'll be charged not only with kidnapping, but manslaughter too. Which means about at least 1 decade in jail. Which means Liastic will turn to dust, and Garzalia will sail. I'd really pity Lia if she ended up with someone like you." Lauren smiled. Tan was speechless. He knew she was good at comebacks, but not that good.

Tan looked at Lia. He swung the revolver over to her. "This all happened because of your existence. If you didn't exist, none of this would've happened. You deserve to die, Lia Zalia." And with that, he pulled the trigger. Thankfully, he had one of those things which make gun sounds quieter, so he didn't break any ears.

Lia backed up, and Jc jumped in front of her. The bullet rammed itself right into his chest, and he fell to the ground, motionless. Lia dropped to her knees and started shakng him, begging him to stay with her, begging him not to die.

"Lia..." Jc whispered. His eyes tried opening, but failed. Blood poured from his mouth. "I love you." His voice was barely audible, but Lia heard him just fine.

"Jc, do not die on me now. Please. You aren't supposed to die. I love you, too. You promised you'd never leave me." Lia said so many things, but in the end, all of it was worth nothing.

After a while, an ambulance and the police arrived. The paramedics took Jc and quickly brought him to the hospital. Lauren told the police Lia was unstable for questioning, and that she would answer all their questions until Lia was okay.

Lia stood near Lauren when the police questioned her, making sure she had the whole thing right. After they finished, Lauren saw Lia looking at her, begging for a ride home with her eyes. She smiled. "Of course."

Lauren brought Lia to her car and let her in. Lia sat in the back passenger seat and put on her seat belt, then started questioning Lauren herself.

"Did you really ship Liastic?" Lia started with the basics. Lauren started up the car then sighed.

"Yeah. I see I was wrong now. I'm so, so sorry. This is all my fault," Lauren drove out of the docks, making sure to avoid the places where sharp rocks stuck out the gravel. "I shouldn't have shown that photo to Tan. If I'd just kept Shielo and Strike to myself, none of this would've happened. Again, I'm really sorry."

Lia giggled. "Hah, as if. It's really all my fault. I should never have dated Tan. If I hadn't, we wouldn't even know him, and none of this would've happened. I'm so sorry to have asked so much of you. Really, this is all my fault."

"Let's just say we were both in the wrong, yeah? Next question," Lauren stealthily swerved to avoid an idiotic driver. Lia faked thought for a second.

"Do you like Jc?"

"Hmm? Now, who put that in your mind?" Lauren asked, genuinely curious. She didn't like Jc that way, but she knew some people suspected she did.

"It's just what Tan said..." Lia trailed off. Lauren laughed.

"Oh, that. He always say I protect someone 'cause I like them. It's his thing," Lauren shrugged. She parked her car in front of Lia's place. "Hey, I'm coming for you tomorrow. We're going to go to Jc's place, because I think we should probably tell his fam what happened, if they haven't yet been informed," Lauren said. Lia nodded, then walked into her apartment complex.

The next day, Lauren arrived for Lia later than she expected. As they drove by the park, Lia caught Lauren's eye in the rearview mirror. Lauren looked away immediately, but Lia already saw the bags under her eyes.

"Hey, um, what have you been doing all night?" Lia asked, genuinely worried. Lauren just shrugged.

"Stuff you probably shouldn't know of." Then she just drove on, refusing to answer any further questions regarding the topic.

When they reached Jc's place, Lauren called out a "Helloooo?" and banged on the door. Someone inside answered with, "If you're here to give your condolences, go away!" Lauren facepalmed. She could tell it was Jaymes, Jc's idiotic younger brother.

"It's Lauren."

"Hey," Jaymes opened the door. He almost slammed it shut as soon as he saw Lia. "Oh. You." Lia looked down to hide her fear.

"Jaymes, seriously. So you know about Jc's death, eh?" Lauren said. Jaymes nodded, and invited her and Lia in. When Lia entered, Jaymes glared at her, but looked away a second later.

"So what d'ya got planned? I assume the pros of this includes being able to skip school, or is your parents doing it on the weekends?" Lauren slid into a chair at the dining table and picked an apple from the fruit bowl. Lia awkwardly sat in the chair opposite her and started chewing on a watermelon.

"Yeah, dad said he'd plan the funeral on a Wednesday. Which is awesome," Jaymes sat next to Lauren. "So, what's up with you and her? Isn't she the girl who wrecked Jc's life?"

Lia looked away. She knew Jaymes hated her, and that he thought Jc's death was her fault. That was fact. Lauren kicked Jaymes from under the table.

"Jeezus, it wasn't her. Jc got framed for cheating on her, it's not her fault. Besides, it wasn't like she did anything spectacularly bad. All she did was wreck his reputation, so what? Who gives a damn about what people think about him?" Lauren asked. Jaymes blushed and looked down to think of something clever to say back. Lia smiled at Lauren, and mouthed a "Thanks". Lauren shrugged.

"Oh, by the way, the hospital said there's a slight chance Jc can survive. Like, a 12% chance. Most likely he won't so don't get your hopes up, but... yeah," Jaymes shrugged, but Lia looked at him, hope filling her veins, colour filling her vision.

"He can survive?!" Lia practically shouted, she was that happy. Jaymes rolled his eyes.

"It's only a 12/100% chance, don't freak like that. Also, I'm right here, you don't have to shout," Jaymes said, which got him kicked again. He glared at Lauren, who stuck her tongue out at him. Jaymes sighed.

"Do you wanna see him?" He asked. Both Lia and Lauren nodded, Lia adding the extra scream, "YES!!"

When they reached the hospital, Jaymes lead them to a small room which was locked, but you could see the person inside through a glass window to the side of the door. Inside, Lia could see Jc surrounded by medical iteams she didn't know the names or use of. Tears sprang from her eyes, which she quickly wiped away.

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"They won't allow many inside. Only the doctor and nurses, and the family, along with people who the family agree to let in," Jaymes stated. He waved down a nurse and asked if he could enter with Lia and Lauren. The nurse nodded, and Lia barely just stopped herself from running inside and hugging the life out of Jc... literally.

Lauren let Lia sit on the chair beside Jc's bed, while she leaned on the wall. Most of the time, Lia cried on Jc and begged him to survive, while Lauren almost fell asleep, just leaning on the wall. Lia glared at her when she did, and kicked her awake.

"This isn't your own personal bedroom, don't fall asleep here," Lia said. Lauren rolled her eyes. She ruffled Jc's hair as a silent goodbye then left Lia with him.

Lia looked at Jc one last time, and that was when she saw his eye twitch. She rushed out the room and told Lauren, who looked through the window at Jc. She checked his heartbeat on a monitor next to him - it looked steady enough for him to be alive. She caught a nurse passing by and told her.

"Thank you. Really, just thank you for everything," Lia said. Then, she ran to the window to check if Jc really was okay. She could see doctors and nurses doing their thing, but what she really focused on was the monitor which Lauren used to check his heartbeat. Sometimes it would slow down, but it would always go back to a normal pace.

"Do you think he'll survive?" Lia asked Lauren. Jaymes had left them a while ago. Lauren shrugged, and just watched the doctors.

"Wanna know something funny? When I was younger, I wanted to be a doctor. I wanted to help heal the world, I wanted to save the innocents, I wanted to protect my country. Heh. In the end, here I stand, considered one of the lowest lowlives by half of what I thought was my home," Lauren sat down on a nearby chair and leaned her head on the wall, closing her eyes and grinning. Lia frowned at her, and poked her in the head.

"What?" Lauren sounded annoyed, but also sad. Lia sat down next to her and looked up at the ceiling.

"You aren't a lowlife. Everyone makes mistakes every here and there. Who cares what you've done. You protected and saved someone - me. And that's all I care about right now. Aside from Jc, of course," Lia smiled. Lauren's face remained plain, her smile from before gone, but Lia could hear her happiness and appreciation in her reply.

"Thank you."

After a few moments, Lauren had fallen asleep, but was violently shaken awake. "What?" she asked groggily. Lia's happy face, accompanied by her extremely hyper self, made Lauren get a few suspicions.

"Did Jc survive? Or are you just really hyper from eating too much candy?" Lauren asked, chuckling. Lia poked her again, then pointed towards Jc. Lauren got up and looked at Jc.

"Holy crap. How?" Lauren stared through the window. Jc was there, his eyes open, talking to a doctor. Lauren looked back at Lia. "You're sure they didn't just put a monitor behind the window to trick us?" Lauren asked. Lia shook her head.

"I heard him. I almost even talked to him. But the doctor told me he needed to ask Jc some questions in private, so I asked to speak to Jc later, then left them. I really hope he's oky," Lia said. She looked back at Jc, obviously worried. Lauren went back to her seat.

"Well, tell me when I can talk to him too. Right now though, I have some things to do." Lauren took out her iPhone and typed in her password, before opening Minecraft PE and playing in a singleplayer world.

"Wow. You're seriously playing Minecraft while Jc could be dying? Rude," Lia mumbled. Lauren ignored her, and continued playing. Lia looked back at Jc again. She could see how dry his lips were - he must not have drank much in the last 24 hours, the idiot. Lia walked towards a vending machine and bought a bottle of water for him, and a 100 Plus for herself. Then, she sat next to Lauren.

About a quarter of an hour later, the doctor came out, and updated Lia and Lauren about Jc's status. He said that Jc was a bit unstable, as in he would cry in pain if you were to hug him, or do something of that sort, but other than that, he was alright.

Lia ran in to see him, while Lauren stayed back to talk to the doctor. Lia leaned down and almost hugged Jc, but caught herself just in time.

"Sorry. It's just... you're alive. You're breathing, you're listening to me right now. It's really just... amazing." Lia said. She sat down next to Jc. She had a question she really needed answered.

"Do you... remember me?" The words which were supposed to sound confident, sure and calm turned out afraid, nervous and shaky. Lia looked Jc in the eye, and could tell he was remembering something.

"Lia." Jc mumbled. He seemed confused for a moment, but regained his conscious quickly. "Lia. I missed you. Are you okay? Did Tan do anything to you?" The questions tumbled from Jc's mouth, all sounding fearful and worried. Lia giggled.

"No, I'm okay. Lauren's been a good friend and helped me out a couple times. But really, the question is are you okay? You got shot in the chest near the heart, you know. It's a miracle you survived." Lia held Jc's hand and squeezed, just to double check if he was real.

"That's good. And really? Oh, I thought it was just, like, my stomach or something," Jc chuckled. "Really though, I'm happy to be able to see you again." Lia smiled. Then, she remembered the bottled water.

"Hey, I got you some water. Your lips seemed dry," Lia handed the bottle to Jc, helping him open it since he was still pretty weak. He drank down a quarter of it almost immediately. He almost drank more, but Lia stopped him.

"Woahh, hold your horses, you can't be that thirsty." Lia screwed the cap back on them put the bottle into her pocket. "Anyway... I'd just like you to know that I'm sorry I messed up, and that if you don't want me, it's fine. I'm just really sorry, though."

Jc shook his head. "I don't know what you're talking about. It was me who didn't try to go for you, me who just gave up on you right after you left me. I'm the one who messed up, and I'm really sorry. Also, I don't know who told you that, but I still love you a lot." Jc smiled, making Lia become a tomato.

"Hey, um, I'd also like to say... thank you. A lot. You saved my life, and I'm really grateful for that. And again, I'm so sorry for putting you in this position," Lia said. Her messy hair fell in fornt of her eyes, and Jc reached up to push it back behind her ears.

"Thank you for being alive," he whispered.
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4715 words, 25473 characters.
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Also, I didn't do DaBenjyQueenPlayz 'cause I found this unfinished in my notes app, I just had to complete it.
and fk i forgot the tags XD
@XxLiazaliaxX @JcGarcia_29 @Tantastic @Strike345 @Little_ShieloWP @KendraHawk @cheesyunicorn @Elania @Rundas2001 @Hello_its_me_ @iucjeil @Laura_Aria @Ray_Palmer_Atom @Ice_Hatake @BenjyPlayz @Totalpurplemaze @xXphoenixXx @Little_DesireeWP @Springtrap_123 @TOOMANYPEOPLERIP ;-;
This is so OSM!!!
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Yus, Shipping xD
4715 words, 25473 characters.
Thank you for reading.

edit:
Also, I didn't do DaBenjyQueenPlayz 'cause I found this unfinished in my notes app, I just had to complete it.
and fk i forgot the tags XD
@XxLiazaliaxX @JcGarcia_29 @Tantastic @Strike345 @Little_ShieloWP @KendraHawk @cheesyunicorn @Elania @Rundas2001 @Hello_its_me_ @iucjeil @Laura_Aria @Ray_Palmer_Atom @Ice_Hatake @BenjyPlayz @Totalpurplemaze @xXphoenixXx @Little_DesireeWP @Springtrap_123 @TOOMANYPEOPLERIP ;-;
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I honestly think it's amazing (even though I've already told you that). It was very different from other oneshots - it actually had a little plot going for it rather than just, "Ermagushhh, awkward confession scene" vibes, y'know? Also, the range of character personalities were great and I think that's what made the main pairing work so well - because they were bound by naïvety, they were pretty similar to each other so they had a special connection. It's the sort of writing that would appeal to most people (mystery, romance, humour and had an awkward but sweet ending) and that was downright fantastic. It wasn't too cheesy but wasn't too emotionless and because of it's appeal, I can see why everyone likes it.

A ship is something that appeals to everyone, no matter your interests and by embedding various elements into your writing, everyone felt welcomed into the story and the ship itself ;3
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Also, I didn't do DaBenjyQueenPlayz 'cause I found this unfinished in my notes app, I just had to complete it.
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Wait, what?
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"They won't allow many inside. Only the doctor and nurses, and the family, along with people who the family agree to let in," Jaymes stated. He waved down a nurse and asked if he could enter with Lia and Lauren. The nurse nodded, and Lia barely just stopped herself from running inside and hugging the life out of Jc... literally.

Lauren let Lia sit on the chair beside Jc's bed, while she leaned on the wall. Most of the time, Lia cried on Jc and begged him to survive, while Lauren almost fell asleep, just leaning on the wall. Lia glared at her when she did, and kicked her awake.

"This isn't your own personal bedroom, don't fall asleep here," Lia said. Lauren rolled her eyes. She ruffled Jc's hair as a silent goodbye then left Lia with him.

Lia looked at Jc one last time, and that was when she saw his eye twitch. She rushed out the room and told Lauren, who looked through the window at Jc. She checked his heartbeat on a monitor next to him - it looked steady enough for him to be alive. She caught a nurse passing by and told her.

"Thank you. Really, just thank you for everything," Lia said. Then, she ran to the window to check if Jc really was okay. She could see doctors and nurses doing their thing, but what she really focused on was the monitor which Lauren used to check his heartbeat. Sometimes it would slow down, but it would always go back to a normal pace.

"Do you think he'll survive?" Lia asked Lauren. Jaymes had left them a while ago. Lauren shrugged, and just watched the doctors.

"Wanna know something funny? When I was younger, I wanted to be a doctor. I wanted to help heal the world, I wanted to save the innocents, I wanted to protect my country. Heh. In the end, here I stand, considered one of the lowest lowlives by half of what I thought was my home," Lauren sat down on a nearby chair and leaned her head on the wall, closing her eyes and grinning. Lia frowned at her, and poked her in the head.

"What?" Lauren sounded annoyed, but also sad. Lia sat down next to her and looked up at the ceiling.

"You aren't a lowlife. Everyone makes mistakes every here and there. Who cares what you've done. You protected and saved someone - me. And that's all I care about right now. Aside from Jc, of course," Lia smiled. Lauren's face remained plain, her smile from before gone, but Lia could hear her happiness and appreciation in her reply.

"Thank you."

After a few moments, Lauren had fallen asleep, but was violently shaken awake. "What?" she asked groggily. Lia's happy face, accompanied by her extremely hyper self, made Lauren get a few suspicions.

"Did Jc survive? Or are you just really hyper from eating too much candy?" Lauren asked, chuckling. Lia poked her again, then pointed towards Jc. Lauren got up and looked at Jc.

"Holy crap. How?" Lauren stared through the window. Jc was there, his eyes open, talking to a doctor. Lauren looked back at Lia. "You're sure they didn't just put a monitor behind the window to trick us?" Lauren asked. Lia shook her head.

"I heard him. I almost even talked to him. But the doctor told me he needed to ask Jc some questions in private, so I asked to speak to Jc later, then left them. I really hope he's oky," Lia said. She looked back at Jc, obviously worried. Lauren went back to her seat.

"Well, tell me when I can talk to him too. Right now though, I have some things to do." Lauren took out her iPhone and typed in her password, before opening Minecraft PE and playing in a singleplayer world.

"Wow. You're seriously playing Minecraft while Jc could be dying? Rude," Lia mumbled. Lauren ignored her, and continued playing. Lia looked back at Jc again. She could see how dry his lips were - he must not have drank much in the last 24 hours, the idiot. Lia walked towards a vending machine and bought a bottle of water for him, and a 100 Plus for herself. Then, she sat next to Lauren.

About a quarter of an hour later, the doctor came out, and updated Lia and Lauren about Jc's status. He said that Jc was a bit unstable, as in he would cry in pain if you were to hug him, or do something of that sort, but other than that, he was alright.

Lia ran in to see him, while Lauren stayed back to talk to the doctor. Lia leaned down and almost hugged Jc, but caught herself just in time.

"Sorry. It's just... you're alive. You're breathing, you're listening to me right now. It's really just... amazing." Lia said. She sat down next to Jc. She had a question she really needed answered.

"Do you... remember me?" The words which were supposed to sound confident, sure and calm turned out afraid, nervous and shaky. Lia looked Jc in the eye, and could tell he was remembering something.

"Lia." Jc mumbled. He seemed confused for a moment, but regained his conscious quickly. "Lia. I missed you. Are you okay? Did Tan do anything to you?" The questions tumbled from Jc's mouth, all sounding fearful and worried. Lia giggled.

"No, I'm okay. Lauren's been a good friend and helped me out a couple times. But really, the question is are you okay? You got shot in the chest near the heart, you know. It's a miracle you survived." Lia held Jc's hand and squeezed, just to double check if he was real.

"That's good. And really? Oh, I thought it was just, like, my stomach or something," Jc chuckled. "Really though, I'm happy to be able to see you again." Lia smiled. Then, she remembered the bottled water.

"Hey, I got you some water. Your lips seemed dry," Lia handed the bottle to Jc, helping him open it since he was still pretty weak. He drank down a quarter of it almost immediately. He almost drank more, but Lia stopped him.

"Woahh, hold your horses, you can't be that thirsty." Lia screwed the cap back on them put the bottle into her pocket. "Anyway... I'd just like you to know that I'm sorry I messed up, and that if you don't want me, it's fine. I'm just really sorry, though."

Jc shook his head. "I don't know what you're talking about. It was me who didn't try to go for you, me who just gave up on you right after you left me. I'm the one who messed up, and I'm really sorry. Also, I don't know who told you that, but I still love you a lot." Jc smiled, making Lia become a tomato.

"Hey, um, I'd also like to say... thank you. A lot. You saved my life, and I'm really grateful for that. And again, I'm so sorry for putting you in this position," Lia said. Her messy hair fell in fornt of her eyes, and Jc reached up to push it back behind her ears.

"Thank you for being alive," he whispered.
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