fleur/pollination (map submission and feedback #1)

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hey! this is my first map so it’s a tad rough and may need adjusting, so feedback would be appreciated!
map name: fleur/pollination i couldn’t choose :p
time: i’m not sure, it’s been a wip for awhile
type: tsw/sw
builders: Elfiie, vDieqo, Donovann
 

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I’ve seen this map and it’s great. There’s so much about it that I like, therefore I don’t have a favorite thing about it. The spacing is perfect for tsw/sw and is not too much or not too little. As for the decoration part, it was well done. It’s elaborate, but it’s not too crowded. The actual size of the map is good, also. Overall I think it’s very well done and highly recommend it for tsw and sw. I would personally love to play on this map :)
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Elfiie said:
hey! this is my first map so it’s a tad rough and may need adjusting, so feedback would be appreciated!
map name: fleur/pollination i couldn’t choose :p
time: i’m not sure, it’s been a wip for awhile
type: tsw/sw
builders: Elfiie, vDieqo, Donovann
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Woah pretty good work madi! I like it. There appear to be some minor problems with the distancing of the islands in some parts but I'm not sure. Either way I think this could be pretty neat with some fixing up.
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Elfiie said:
hey! this is my first map so it’s a tad rough and may need adjusting, so feedback would be appreciated!
map name: fleur/pollination i couldn’t choose :p
time: i’m not sure, it’s been a wip for awhile
type: tsw/sw
builders: Elfiie, vDieqo, Donovann
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THE FACT U DIDNT TELL ME TO MOVE IN THE LAST ONE I WAS JUST CHILLING ON MAMA BEE
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DarkTdmPlays said:
Woah pretty good work madi! I like it. There appear to be some minor problems with the distancing of the islands in some parts but I'm not sure. Either way I think this could be pretty neat with some fixing up.
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ty! which islands in particular? i can go ahead n fix those tn :p
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Sphynxx said:
It looks really cool! The islands could of been spaced a but more, and maybe you can add detailed grass and stone more- otherwise GJ. The tree In the mid is impressive.
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ty! once i get verification from a builder that the islands need touching up i’ll add your suggestions too! tysm<3
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SplashingPaint836 said:
Looks nice! I agree with Dark the islands are a bit crooked. The tree could have less leaves on the trunk and more on the the branches. Also you can use wither skulls for the bees eyes since it looks weird with eyeless bees. :p
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tysm! i’ll deff be using these suggestions<3
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