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Fantasia | Chapter 1

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Hey here is a start of a story Im gonna make , trying to post a chapter everyday make sure to read em all!

Fantasia

With Difficulty she opens her eyes... After closing and reoppening her eyes she tries to turn out the head.
«Ugh» she says as her Head hurts. Unable to To stay awake anymore she falls asleep.

She Wakes up feeling better And stand up .
«Where am I? Why am I here? Who am I..» she starts to cry as she understand she dont know who she is anymore..


{sorry for errors.. Sorry for the bad start Im bad at introduction.. Sorry for grammar.. But dont worry the other will be longuer}
 
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Hey here is a start of a story Im gonna make , trying to post a chapter everyday make sure to read em all!

Fantasia

With Difficulty she opens her eyes... After closing and reoppening her eyes she tries to turn out the head.
«Ugh» she says as her Head hurts. Unable to To stay awake anymore she falls asleep.

She Wakes up feeling better And stand up .
«Where am I? Why am I here? Who am I..» she starts to cry as she understand she dont know who she is anymore..


{sorry for errors.. Sorry for the bad start Im bad at introduction.. Sorry for grammar.. But dont worry the other will be longuer}
Awesome! OK, I was like "This is a bit short.." xD Can't wait for the next chapters! :D
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It has a bit of none sence too :v
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Hey here is a start of a story Im gonna make , trying to post a chapter everyday make sure to read em all!

Fantasia

With Difficulty she opens her eyes... After closing and reoppening her eyes she tries to turn out the head.
«Ugh» she says as her Head hurts. Unable to To stay awake anymore she falls asleep.

She Wakes up feeling better And stand up .
«Where am I? Why am I here? Who am I..» she starts to cry as she understand she dont know who she is anymore..


{sorry for errors.. Sorry for the bad start Im bad at introduction.. Sorry for grammar.. But dont worry the other will be longuer}
Sounds good so far! I'll be waiting for the next chapter :D
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I don't mind helping you with ideas ^.^ for eg I could give u imaginative scenes with a environmental feel of grace and beauty
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