Expedition - TSW/SW Map

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Made by: IAmMyselfOrAmI
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Map Name: Expedition
Game: Skywars/TSW

Download:
https://www.mediafire.com/file/9xiqk4f4isv1mfe/Expedition_-By_IAmMyselfOrAmI.mcworld/file#

It’s based on a snowy mountain theme, I hope it gets accepted!
Chests and furnaces according to requirements.

Thank you for reading!!
 
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Map Name: Expedition
Game: Skywars/TSW

Download:
https://www.mediafire.com/file/9xiqk4f4isv1mfe/Expedition_-By_IAmMyselfOrAmI.mcworld/file#

It’s based on a snowy mountain theme, I hope it gets accepted!
Chests and furnaces according to requirements.

Thank you for reading!!
Can you also provide a view looking down on the map so that we can see the spacing of the islands and mid please?
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Let me know if you want any more pictures!
(I’ll message when I’m free)
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I like the map but I think it could use improvement. The bottom of the islands don't look natural- maybe add some stone/ores/ice? Also the shape of the spawn islands look like snowballs to me- try to make the bottom of the islands more cone shaped. The trees are a bit odd to me because they look like pine trees but are shaped like small willow trees to me. Change the shape of mid so that it is equal distance for all the spawn islands- even if you just add on to make it have 4 points that stick out further instead of two. Same detailing needs to go into the bottom of the middle island also. Are the spawn islands supposed to be caves? If yes I think they should be natural (the floor) and be a mix of stone/cobble/andesite. I know it probably sounds like a lot to fix but it's not that far off from being a good map. We have so many Skywars maps it is going to get more and more hard for them to get accepted (in my opinion) Good luck and I look forward to seeing the improvements :)
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It looks great! Should get accepted!! :D
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I like the map but I think it could use improvement. The bottom of the islands don't look natural- maybe add some stone/ores/ice? Also the shape of the spawn islands look like snowballs to me- try to make the bottom of the islands more cone shaped. The trees are a bit odd to me because they look like pine trees but are shaped like small willow trees to me. Change the shape of mid so that it is equal distance for all the spawn islands- even if you just add on to make it have 4 points that stick out further instead of two. Same detailing needs to go into the bottom of the middle island also. Are the spawn islands supposed to be caves? If yes I think they should be natural (the floor) and be a mix of stone/cobble/andesite. I know it probably sounds like a lot to fix but it's not that far off from being a good map. We have so many Skywars maps it is going to get more and more hard for them to get accepted (in my opinion) Good luck and I look forward to seeing the improvements :)
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the little islands look great. maybe add different types of cobble stone, and stone possibly. The middle island can be better. I don't really like/know what that random cobble stone thing is on the top of the igloo thing. Also, that "igloo thing" looks a bit too perfect. Try adding more texture and lumps on it instead of a pattern type. I like your trees but there is a bit to much bushes and leaves on the small islands. its just a bit compact. Also one suggestion is too add pointed ice on the bottom of the islands (if u want)
Overall the map looks good, I like the style and shape

(also Allymac prob wrote everything I just said bc her comment is long too)
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and one more thing, the mid kinda looks deformed, I would either make it larger (without the lump things) or take away the lump things
ps sorry if this is a lot, I really like the map bc the textures and different types of blocks. on most maps there isn't really detail, and on this map there is so feel proud.
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