Phoe
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Atm im writing in thr backstory for my main character, i notice i have grammar errors, but when i use proof read bots, thry fix stupid things like 'Dont use words like and, however, therefore' or 'Never use sentences less than 10 words'
And i feel like the children here are mire reliable them a professional grammar checker. BTW THE TENSE IS SUPPOSED TO BE PAST, so i want it all to be fixed to br past tense, edit areas that srent gramativally correct also please >□<
Altair is a child born in a wealthy family, he has always achieved great grades in almost every subject, however he does not often interact with other children around his age. It was not because he finds it stressful, he just finds them inferior to him.
Even though he has a rich heritage, he original went to a public school. He asks frequently asks questions to his teachers, some, of which they can not answer. He was invited to do social events, all, of which he declined.
It was the end of his school year, in result it was school break, until high school begins. He found most things dull, so he did practical nothing. One day, construction started. It was a library. Once it finished being assembled, Altair went in. All he saw was diverse orchestra of books. I looked around
He went through each isle to find non-fiction literature. There was not a single one. He wasn't sure what to do. When altair was leaving the shop, he saw it, a book called 'The moor'. He decided to purchase and read it. He loved it and went to the library daily, getting one book after another.
High school started, his parents sent him to a public school again. He went through high school, antisocial. Mostly spending his time reading mystery novels and researching new things. One day during class, they watched a long documwntary of greak astronomers because prior of this they were learning about the solar system.
The teachers soon to realise he had a great talent in most subjects, especially physics in a whole. When parents evening arrived, Altair only got good reviews, but the parents were disapointed. Once they got home they beated Altair, they did this because the fact he majored in physics then computer science. The essential subject to inherit his parent's buisness.
Since then he tried to live to his parent's expectations, while at the same time the teachers noticed his newly made bruises around his body and questioned his parents, but they payed them off.
His father started beating Altair because od this hassle, soon becoming his father's habbit. Almost daily he got beaten. That caused his grades to slowly drop.
It was almost Easter and so his grandfather came over to visited. He was very close to him, yet rarely seeing him. That same day Altair's father came back from work, stressed. He started beating Altair without noticing his father was there, watching.
This is 1/2 of the history on my oc so far
And i feel like the children here are mire reliable them a professional grammar checker. BTW THE TENSE IS SUPPOSED TO BE PAST, so i want it all to be fixed to br past tense, edit areas that srent gramativally correct also please >□<
Altair is a child born in a wealthy family, he has always achieved great grades in almost every subject, however he does not often interact with other children around his age. It was not because he finds it stressful, he just finds them inferior to him.
Even though he has a rich heritage, he original went to a public school. He asks frequently asks questions to his teachers, some, of which they can not answer. He was invited to do social events, all, of which he declined.
It was the end of his school year, in result it was school break, until high school begins. He found most things dull, so he did practical nothing. One day, construction started. It was a library. Once it finished being assembled, Altair went in. All he saw was diverse orchestra of books. I looked around
He went through each isle to find non-fiction literature. There was not a single one. He wasn't sure what to do. When altair was leaving the shop, he saw it, a book called 'The moor'. He decided to purchase and read it. He loved it and went to the library daily, getting one book after another.
High school started, his parents sent him to a public school again. He went through high school, antisocial. Mostly spending his time reading mystery novels and researching new things. One day during class, they watched a long documwntary of greak astronomers because prior of this they were learning about the solar system.
The teachers soon to realise he had a great talent in most subjects, especially physics in a whole. When parents evening arrived, Altair only got good reviews, but the parents were disapointed. Once they got home they beated Altair, they did this because the fact he majored in physics then computer science. The essential subject to inherit his parent's buisness.
Since then he tried to live to his parent's expectations, while at the same time the teachers noticed his newly made bruises around his body and questioned his parents, but they payed them off.
His father started beating Altair because od this hassle, soon becoming his father's habbit. Almost daily he got beaten. That caused his grades to slowly drop.
It was almost Easter and so his grandfather came over to visited. He was very close to him, yet rarely seeing him. That same day Altair's father came back from work, stressed. He started beating Altair without noticing his father was there, watching.
This is 1/2 of the history on my oc so far
