End Of The Road- Ch. 1

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Narrator: The year is 2000's. The town has just been remodeled to look like a pastel neighborhood but in real life. Complex but simple. 10 new friends just moved in into the neighborhood. 5 on each side (but, they like to hang out as a 10 most of the times).

Little did these fellow friends know, they were going to be in an adventure they never expected.

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Chapter 1- Eye to eye

"Who do you think you are?" Dist angrily yells at Cakeyy. "Oh, I'm so sorry Dist! I didn't see you there! I thought someone left the tv on again. I'll turn it back on." "Hm, understandable."

"The storm is really picking up out there" Anmo states. "Yea, but, I like thunderstorms! They're the best!" Pandeee says while jumping up and down. "Calm down Pandeee, what you should be is scared rather than happy if I do say so myself." Super comes from the other room while sipping on coffee. "How so?" Pandeee looks as Super as she stops jumping.

"If you really think about it, weather like this can get anyone killed in any way, no matter where you are. Let's say you're outside, you can one, get struck by lightning, two, hail rains down until it crushes you from all the pressure, and three, a giant tidal wave comes and drowns you away!"

Everyone in the room gave him the death stare like he was drunk or something. "Yea, a giant tidal wave will come down and wash us away! Great thinking nerd. My god. I thought science class with you was already bad and now, you're giving me sciences lessons?" Pandeee's face turns redder than the chilly Evie was about to eat.

"Pandeee-" but Pandee cuts Evie off by pushing everyone in the crowd out of her way and heads to the bathroom. At that point, everyone gave not only death stares but killing stares at Super. "What? I only told her that anywhere you go during a storm is dangerous." "Yo, I think you did more than just give her simple science lessons. What you did here was disgusting. Just know that you have destroyed a teenagers childhood." Dist spits on his glasses as she rushes into the bathroom with Pandeee.

"This place sucks anyways." Super throws the plastic red cup onto the kitchen floor and left upstairs. "Well, that didn't go well." Cakeyy shyly comes in. "It's over, for now, Cakeyy. Nothing to worry about." Evie pats Cakeyy's hair while reaching for a strawberry cupcake on the kitchen counter. "Cakeyy and I will be in the living room." And so, that left Anmo alone in the kitchen.

"How come stuff like this always happens to me," Anmo complains to himself, kicking the red cup on the floor 5 feet across from him. "Might as well eat this half eaten pumpkin pie before it rots."

. . .

"Pandeee, it's Okie. I gave him my piece of my mind and trust me, that nerd won't be hurting other teenagers childhoods as far as I'm concerned." Dist hands over another box of tissues to Pandeee as she finishes blowing her nose. "I-I-I just don't understand why Super, out of all the people would do such a t-thing." She continues to blow her nose while crying.

Dist sits by her side, thinking about how she can make Pandeee feel better. "Listen, Pandeee. Boys are di- I mean, boys can be a pain in the hole which is why you shouldn't give them your full trust cause they tend to use personal information agents you." "I-I guess so."

"I want to say to move on and get over it but, it's best if I keep it to myself and let her do her thing." Dist thinks in her head. "Whatever you need Pandeee, advice, tips, getting over some stupid boy, especially a nerd, I will be here for you, Pandeee."

Pandeee suddenly gets up from the bathroom stall and gives Dist the warmest hug she could ever give to a friend. "Thank you, Dist."

. . .

"I swear, these guys sold me to... that girl. And to thin that I can trust my friends but heck, I guess not." Super takes off his glasses and slammed them onto the floor. The lens breaks a little bit from both sides. "You know what?" Super raises his left shoe from the ground and crushes his glasses. "Who needs them anyways."

. . .

"I gotta be honest here, the pie tasted awful but at the same time, I can't be complaining since there's finally peace in the house for once." Anmo throws the tray away and heads for the living room. Before he enters, he remembers that the living room is being used by Evie and Cake. So that was a no-no.

"Well, I always wanted the whole kitchen to myself... said nobody." Anmo heads to the counter, jumping 3 feet because of mini lightning striking near him. "oh boy, how I hate this thunderstorm." Anmo heads for the front balcony door as he saw an endless amount of rain pouring onto the glass door right in front of him.

"Hmm, pretty cool, I guess" Anmo decides to lay on the floor while the rain runs onto the glass door, onto the floor. He stays there for a few seconds until he spots a drop of rain that wasn't the same color as the others. "What the-"

Anmo opens the glass door slightly, rain pouring into the house like crazy. Anmo then notices something up in the sky, falling faster than asking my crush out. "Is that... a meteorite?"

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Sorry that not much adventure happened in this chapter but in chapter 3, it will get excited.

Half side of the characters:

@EvieIsNotAmazing
@dist
@Cakeyy
@superpi2
@Anmo
@Pandeee

Btw, this chapter was a nightmare writing and editing it lol
 
Yo I can’t wait for chapter 2 xd. Gj on writing!
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So basically, being part-time on here, the context of this is on your profile on page 10 where I ask you who's your crush in school and you told me in a private conversation. So, me being the good friend that I am, I added that part in just to see if you spotted the easter egg that I threw into there and tada! You did! It was a good thing that I didn't add her name to here cause then that will cause drama? Am I right?

Btw, if you read all that, congrats, I wasted your time cause this has nothing to do with the story lol
Three objections here. The first one is that no where on page 10 has you ever asking me who my crush was. The second is that no where in my conversations list in 2019 contain you in it. My last one, is that I never really had a crush, leading to me never seeing the reference.
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Well

My character is mean and I got some broken lens

But I didn't die yet

And that's a win
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Pretty good! Gj! ^w^
Evie pats Cakeyy's hair while reaching for a strawberry cupcake on the kitchen counter.
Also, lol I can imagine this happening

One thing I would suggest though: Make a new paragraph every time a new character says something
Ex - Instead of:
"Wow, that's amazing," Jake said. "I know right?" said Bob.

Try:
"Wow, that's amazing," Jake said.
"I know right?" said Bob.

Just a suggestion, you don't have to follow it though ^w^ But I like it so far, keep up the good work!
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