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Detention. You all hate detention, right? Usually detention is boring and it really sucks, but this was not the case on this day. July 2nd, 2015’s detention was definitely different to most detentions. After some teenagers found something during their dentention, it became a dentention they would never forget.
(Lauren’s POV)
Ahhh, there’s nothing better than lying in my comfortable, soft bed while watching my favourite Netflix show. “Wake up! Lauren, Are you even listening?” I open my eyes and let out a huge yawn. Wait, why aren’t I in bed anymore? Oh, great. It was just a dream.
Mr Icy is glaring at me with his freaky, brown eyes. He really creeps me out. I think he’s gonna kill me for sleeping in class. But seriously, can’t help it. Sometimes you just gonna sleep, you know? “Lauren, have fun in detention after school today,” Mr Icy whispers to me, “We are going to be cleaning up rubbish from the oval”. Ugh, detention. Why today? I was going to go to Jewelz’s house today! There goes my plans.
“Hey,” my best friend, Jewelz, nudges me, “While you were doing absolutely no work, I got all my work done and the extension. You can copy my work if you want.” I smile and give Jewelz a big hug. This is why she is my best friend. She’s always got my back.
(Jewelz’s POV) [After class]
“Come here, Lauren!” I start waving my hands up in the air and she still doesn’t see me. She must be blind or something. “Lauren?!” I yell, “Are you in there?” I think she’s deaf as well as blind. She finally makes eye contact with me and runs over to my locker. “I’m here!!”. I pass her my work from our last class so she can copy it. The plan was running smoothly until -
“Excuse me, Miss Jewelz and Miss Lauren,” Mr Icy says in a firm voice as he walks over to us, “It seems you are breaking school rules. You are not allowed to copy someone else’s work. It needs to be your own. I guess you will be joining Lauren in detention after school, Jewelz.” I nod slowly.
I really hate Mr Icy. He is a horrible teacher. Since when was giving someone my work to copy a rule?
“Ew! What are you even wearing, Lauren?!” shouts Pandee from across the hallway as she flicks her hair, “Jewelz, why are you looking at me right now?! You’re such a creep!” Pandee is so mean to Lauren and me for no reason. We didn’t even do anything.
Well, I guess I’ll be joining Lauren in detention after school.
(Pandee’s POV)
I can’t believe that Jewelz looked at me like that. She gave me such a dirty look. Ew, that’s disgusting. Her and Lauren are just so annoying.
[Next class]
Science class? I don’t need to learn no science! I’ll just text on my phone. But who should I text? Hmm.. Avicii? Nah. He’s probably doing graffiti somewhere right now. Maybe I should text that boy I met online, he’s pretty cool. We talked all last night and he’s awesome. I’m sure he wouldn’t mind if I sent him a text.
I secretly grab my phone out of my bag and start typing. Before I can finish the text, Miss Galaxy looks straight at me.
“Pandee, texting is not allowed during class time. I’m going to have to take your phone.” My phone? Take away my phone? I couldn’t let this happen! “Miss Galaxy, I’ll do anything just please don’t take away my phone..” I say innocently, “I will even do detention!” Miss Galaxy nods. “Keep your phone. Detention after school it is.”
Why did I say I would do detention? I’m regretting it already! Well, too late now.
[Avicii’s POV]
A rumour is going around that Pandee got detention and it’s going to be after school. That sounds like heaps of fun to watch Pandee attempt to survive detention without looking at herself in the mirror.
I’m gonna try to get detention so I can join in. Hmm.. I know exactly what to do. “Mr Icy!” I shout to get his attention from the other side of the room, “The graffiti in the cafeteria was me!” He gives me that angry teacher look and only says 3 words. “Detention after school.” That was pretty easy.
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Characters -
Lauren
Jewelz
Pandee
Mr Icy
Avicii
Icy
Rose
Highlight
Lucas
Dragon
Builder
(Lauren’s POV)
Ahhh, there’s nothing better than lying in my comfortable, soft bed while watching my favourite Netflix show. “Wake up! Lauren, Are you even listening?” I open my eyes and let out a huge yawn. Wait, why aren’t I in bed anymore? Oh, great. It was just a dream.
Mr Icy is glaring at me with his freaky, brown eyes. He really creeps me out. I think he’s gonna kill me for sleeping in class. But seriously, can’t help it. Sometimes you just gonna sleep, you know? “Lauren, have fun in detention after school today,” Mr Icy whispers to me, “We are going to be cleaning up rubbish from the oval”. Ugh, detention. Why today? I was going to go to Jewelz’s house today! There goes my plans.
“Hey,” my best friend, Jewelz, nudges me, “While you were doing absolutely no work, I got all my work done and the extension. You can copy my work if you want.” I smile and give Jewelz a big hug. This is why she is my best friend. She’s always got my back.
(Jewelz’s POV) [After class]
“Come here, Lauren!” I start waving my hands up in the air and she still doesn’t see me. She must be blind or something. “Lauren?!” I yell, “Are you in there?” I think she’s deaf as well as blind. She finally makes eye contact with me and runs over to my locker. “I’m here!!”. I pass her my work from our last class so she can copy it. The plan was running smoothly until -
“Excuse me, Miss Jewelz and Miss Lauren,” Mr Icy says in a firm voice as he walks over to us, “It seems you are breaking school rules. You are not allowed to copy someone else’s work. It needs to be your own. I guess you will be joining Lauren in detention after school, Jewelz.” I nod slowly.
I really hate Mr Icy. He is a horrible teacher. Since when was giving someone my work to copy a rule?
“Ew! What are you even wearing, Lauren?!” shouts Pandee from across the hallway as she flicks her hair, “Jewelz, why are you looking at me right now?! You’re such a creep!” Pandee is so mean to Lauren and me for no reason. We didn’t even do anything.
Well, I guess I’ll be joining Lauren in detention after school.
(Pandee’s POV)
I can’t believe that Jewelz looked at me like that. She gave me such a dirty look. Ew, that’s disgusting. Her and Lauren are just so annoying.
[Next class]
Science class? I don’t need to learn no science! I’ll just text on my phone. But who should I text? Hmm.. Avicii? Nah. He’s probably doing graffiti somewhere right now. Maybe I should text that boy I met online, he’s pretty cool. We talked all last night and he’s awesome. I’m sure he wouldn’t mind if I sent him a text.
I secretly grab my phone out of my bag and start typing. Before I can finish the text, Miss Galaxy looks straight at me.
“Pandee, texting is not allowed during class time. I’m going to have to take your phone.” My phone? Take away my phone? I couldn’t let this happen! “Miss Galaxy, I’ll do anything just please don’t take away my phone..” I say innocently, “I will even do detention!” Miss Galaxy nods. “Keep your phone. Detention after school it is.”
Why did I say I would do detention? I’m regretting it already! Well, too late now.
[Avicii’s POV]
A rumour is going around that Pandee got detention and it’s going to be after school. That sounds like heaps of fun to watch Pandee attempt to survive detention without looking at herself in the mirror.
I’m gonna try to get detention so I can join in. Hmm.. I know exactly what to do. “Mr Icy!” I shout to get his attention from the other side of the room, “The graffiti in the cafeteria was me!” He gives me that angry teacher look and only says 3 words. “Detention after school.” That was pretty easy.
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Characters -
Lauren
Jewelz
Pandee
Mr Icy
Avicii
Icy
Rose
Highlight
Lucas
Dragon
Builder
