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DarkTdmPlays

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I made this yesterday because I was bored. Its simple but I like it.

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DarkTdmPlays said:
I also made this banner...
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I like it, but there are some things I think would make this better.

Focus Point
The banner has 5 things on screen:
  • Minigame icons
  • Vertx
  • Logo
  • Player models
  • Background
All of these are fighting for your attention with saturated colors. You need some heirarchy to portray the most important part of the picture. The logo appears most important, so make that bigger than most of the other objects. The player models appear out of place because they don't relate to the objects on the banner, so we can replace them with something that fits or remove them.

Now the colors. The background is very saturated, much like the icons. Making it monochrome or dulling the colors may prevent it from veering the eye away from important details.

*The composition might have to change because the logo is pretty long.
That's all I think the banner might need to improve upon. I typically like the composition of the icons and logo. I also like the background choice, though it may seem more fitting to use a picture of the lobby. Now, how do I end a long reply?
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Anmo said:
I like it, but there are some things I think would make this better.

Focus Point
The banner has 5 things on screen:
  • Minigame icons
  • Vertx
  • Logo
  • Player models
  • Background
All of these are fighting for your attention with saturated colors. You need some heirarchy to portray the most important part of the picture. The logo appears most important, so make that bigger than most of the other objects. The player models appear out of place because they don't relate to the objects on the banner, so we can replace them with something that fits or remove them.

Now the colors. The background is very saturated, much like the icons. Making it monochrome or dulling the colors may prevent it from veering the eye away from important details.

*The composition might have to change because the logo is pretty long.
That's all I think the banner might need to improve upon. I typically like the composition of the icons and logo. I also like the background choice, though it may seem more fitting to use a picture of the lobby. Now, how do I end a long reply?
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K thank you
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It's alright
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Dang!! Nice job. :D
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mh yeah it's average, I mean you just slapped the logo on some random ♥♥♥ minecraft background you found on google and same with the other one +the stupid looking icons and random ♥♥♥ dudes.
anybody could do that tbh.
-elina
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typi said:
mh yeah it's average, I mean you just slapped the logo on some random ♥♥♥ minecraft background you found on google and same with the other one +the stupid looking icons and random ♥♥♥ dudes.
anybody could do that tbh.
-elina
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You do it :mrgreen:
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