Deadly Graveyard Part 1

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Before I get started I wanna ask u Do u like horror movies?


Its the week before Halloween we just moved from Texas to Oklahoma I was so sad I cried all the way to the new home we unpacked when I looked out my window hoping to see I big backyard but I was disappointed when all I saw was a Graveyard called Howling Moon Later that night I went to bed I woke up at 3:00 AM I started to hear howling and something knocking on my window I thought it was just the thunder But when I checked all I saw was dolls all around my house I was gonna get mom but then I thought I was in a dream so I just started to watch TV till the dolls broke in I was gonna get mom but when I opened my door I saw on the Wall "IM WARNING U DON'T TELL ANYONE OR U WILL DIE" in blood all over the wall but in that second I realized I was tied up on a chair surrounded by dolls......To be continued
 
Horror thing going on, eh? Yes, I do like horror.

I like this, but just a advice (don’t take it offensive), make you could make it more descriptive and use figurative language more and punctuation. Likewise, Keep going xD
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I like ur story do part 2 bro :D
Btw AMAZING STORY
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YUSH HORROR IS AMAZING
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Horror thing going on, eh? Yes, I do like horror.

I like this, but just a advice (don’t take it offensive), make you could make it more descriptive and use figurative language more and punctuation. Likewise, Keep going xD
Mk I will in part 2
I like ur story do part 2 bro :D
Btw AMAZING STORY
yeah part 2 is gonna come out tomorrow or today
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Nice story can't wait for more cause I love horror!!<3
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Before I get started I wanna ask u Do u like horror movies?


Its the week before Halloween we just moved from Texas to Oklahoma I was so sad I cried all the way to the new home we unpacked when I looked out my window hoping to see I big backyard but I was disappointed when all I saw was a Graveyard called Howling Moon Later that night I went to bed I woke up at 3:00 AM I started to hear howling and something knocking on my window I thought it was just the thunder But when I checked all I saw was dolls all around my house I was gonna get mom but then I thought I was in a dream so I just started to watch TV till the dolls broke in I was gonna get mom but when I opened my door I saw on the Wall "IM WARNING U DON'T TELL ANYONE OR U WILL DIE" in blood all over the wall but in that second I realized I was tied up on a chair surrounded by dolls......To be continued
I like horror, :) that's a good story
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