Critique my in development map :D

[MarvelB0i]

I am making an SW map. Please give thoughts and critiques. If you like it. Please say so. If you want to give me a tip, please do. I started working on this 2 days ago and have only made the building that will be on top of middle island.
Map name: (IDK suggest name ideas I haven’t named it)
By: MarvelB0i
Game: SW and TSW

 

[Sphynxx]

Wow the symbols are really cool!

Also, idk if you did but combat might get hard with the water in the room so maybe put barrier inside the water so you could walk on them

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[BopI]

I am making an SW map. Please give thoughts and critiques. If you like it. Please say so. If you want to give me a tip, please do. I started working on this 2 days ago and have only made the building that will be on top of middle island.
Map name: (IDK suggest name ideas I haven’t named it)
By: MarvelB0i
Game: SW and TSW

1. Is this an Atlantis style map because I live Atlantis (tho that doesn’t mean that I’ll be biased)
2. Looks pretty good. I would remove the mob spawners.

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[Sphynxx]

Also maybe it can be called something like Cyber Tomb
idk that sounds weird.

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[MarvelB0i]

1. Is this an Atlantis style map because I live Atlantis (tho that doesn’t mean that I’ll be biased)
2. Looks pretty good. I would remove the mob spawners.

Thanks!

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[MarvelB0i]

Wow the symbols are really cool!

Also, idk if you did but combat might get hard with the water in the room so maybe put barrier inside the water so you could walk on them

It doesn’t effect PVP very much. Just you can’t jump when in the water. You retain your current speed due to the fact that the water is only half a block tall. Thanks!

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[Bearrel]

Looks fancy! Gr8 job! Oh and you take a pic with it being night time? I want to see how it looks at night

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[TheCooki3Cat]

This looks amazing! And I love whoever came up with the tomb idea that was lovely! I think having and ancient tomb theme would be very interesting and I absolutely love the hard work you put into this.

I also adore the fact that your build is layered and detailed, yet it's still remains soft and pleasing to the eyes. It's not all over the place either and it all sticks well within a theme. I can't wait to see the rest of the map!!

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[Reco_]

It looks very nice so far, can wait to see when it's finished

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[MarvelB0i]

Looks fancy! Gr8 job! Oh and you take a pic with it being night time? I want to see how it looks at night

This looks amazing! And I love whoever came up with the tomb idea that was lovely! I think having and ancient tomb theme would be very interesting and I absolutely love the hard work you put into this.

I also adore the fact that your build is layered and detailed, yet it's still remains soft and pleasing to the eyes. It's not all over the place either and it all sticks well within a theme. I can't wait to see the rest of the map!!

It looks very nice so far, can wait to see when it's finished

Thanks!

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[SplashingPaint836]

Nice! Maybe name it “Tomb of Splishy Splashy”.

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