Critique me please.

[wishing]

I’m currently working on a map, please give me tips and advice since I’m an armature ;w;, highlighted red are spots to hide and you can hide in the mushroom

(Mushroom is pink with yellow blotches)
im going to add a house, a tree that’s a library and more mushrooms big and small.

 

[Pandeee]

pretty good start so far but i feel like the hiding spots are too easy and for an avg murderer/seeker to find although i really like the concept but yellow on pink is kind of weird maybe pink and red?

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[SplashingPaint836]

Maybe add different pink blocks to the mushroom

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[selflove]

idk maybe add some more texture (like variety of colour) to the objects, likemore colours on the mushroom, both stem and yeah.
the path looks really good tho.

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[cursedd]

maybe do like the lake (i think that’s what it is) mm map has at the top of the waterfall where there’s a hiding passage way under a pressure plate (idk how it’d work tho)

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[lucas1901]

wow late reply by me hA ok, the mushroom is gUd but the top should have some white concrete as dots in the mushroom and maybe even some pink wool or concrete powder for texture, its a good start! cant wait to see what it looks like ^^

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