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Chimera = SkyWars Solo map

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Name = Chimera
Game = SkyWars
Mode = Solo
Version = 1.17.10
Builder = @SheriffGG
World = https://www.mediafire.com/download/zx43bez2yxcxtxq
Pictures =
Screenshot_20210805-113531_Minecraft.jpg
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Screenshot_20210805-113407_Minecraft.jpg
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ok, I have a few things to say about this, it looks good but it can be improved!
Spawn islands size is fine, but middle looks a bit small! underneath the island could have some texture, try maybe adding a little bit of cobblestone or even andesite! Also try adding a little texture too in the grass like maybe some green concrete powder, or green terracotta!

Also I downloaded and looked at the map, I believe a requirement is to have some ores on the spawn islands and you have non!

Another thing that I also found out when I made my map, you might want to reduce some of the melons with like maybe some pumpkins or else it would be too op as a food recourse! maybe replace some with more pumpkins! maybe 6 melons per spawn island could be good!
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Dominicshortbow said:
ok, I have a few things to say about this, it looks good but it can be improved!
Spawn islands size is fine, but middle looks a bit small! underneath the island could have some texture, try maybe adding a little bit of cobblestone or even andesite! Also try adding a little texture too in the grass like maybe some green concrete powder, or green terracotta!

Also I downloaded and looked at the map, I believe a requirement is to have some ores on the spawn islands and you have non!

Another thing that I also found out when I made my map, you might want to reduce some of the melons with like maybe some pumpkins or else it would be too op as a food recourse! maybe replace some with more pumpkins! maybe 6 melons per spawn island could be good!
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Very well said :> prooooo
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Dominicshortbow said:
ok, I have a few things to say about this, it looks good but it can be improved!
Spawn islands size is fine, but middle looks a bit small! underneath the island could have some texture, try maybe adding a little bit of cobblestone or even andesite! Also try adding a little texture too in the grass like maybe some green concrete powder, or green terracotta!

Also I downloaded and looked at the map, I believe a requirement is to have some ores on the spawn islands and you have non!

Another thing that I also found out when I made my map, you might want to reduce some of the melons with like maybe some pumpkins or else it would be too op as a food recourse! maybe replace some with more pumpkins! maybe 6 melons per spawn island could be good!
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Should i combine hay and melon or just remove the melon
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SheriffGG said:
Name = Chimera
Game = SkyWars
Mode = Solo
Version = 1.17.10
Builder = @SheriffGG
World = https://www.mediafire.com/download/zx43bez2yxcxtxq
Pictures = View attachment 280259 View attachment 280260 View attachment 280261 View attachment 280262 View attachment 280263
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Wow this looks cuteee :3, i really like the island, even the bottom it just need some texturing like andesite cobblestone(if possible light_gray_concrete_powder). The island bottom are fitting since the map looks cartoony if that make sense. The middles could be bigger (for fighting space) good job
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Dominicshortbow said:
ok, I have a few things to say about this, it looks good but it can be improved!
Spawn islands size is fine, but middle looks a bit small! underneath the island could have some texture, try maybe adding a little bit of cobblestone or even andesite! Also try adding a little texture too in the grass like maybe some green concrete powder, or green terracotta!

Also I downloaded and looked at the map, I believe a requirement is to have some ores on the spawn islands and you have non!

Another thing that I also found out when I made my map, you might want to reduce some of the melons with like maybe some pumpkins or else it would be too op as a food recourse! maybe replace some with more pumpkins! maybe 6 melons per spawn island could be good!
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i agree
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so incredibly bland
like your other maps
so the mushrooms and houses are obviously cloned. there’s nothing wrong with that, except that they are incredibly simple. take for example, the map Paris. the houses are copy pasted, however, they are so detailed that it gives the illusion that each house is unique. it would be interesting to replace a few of the brown mushrooms with red versions, or even warped/crimson style mushrooms, but more detailing on the houses and mushrooms is well deserved. Like Eyow, I would suggest improving the tips of the islands, making them feel more interesting.

so I quickly made an example
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to add, the name “Chimera”, stands for a mythological Greek monster that has almost nothing to do with mushrooms. just sayin.
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BopI said:
Like Eyow, I would suggest improving the tips of the islands, making them feel more interesting
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I wasn't the one that was suggesting this, it was dominic. I kinda like the bottom of the islands (maybe make it more smooth and round) as it gives it a cartoony feel since the house do give such a cartoony feel. In the other side, (to the much organic side) this suggestion will be better. It will be good to have mushrooms that resembles irl mushrooms and islands that have organic tips. btw please dont use 1.17 blocks since they will only show on the build server as barrier blocks xd
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BopI said:
so incredibly bland
like your other maps
so the mushrooms and houses are obviously cloned. there’s nothing wrong with that, except that they are incredibly simple. take for example, the map Paris. the houses are copy pasted, however, they are so detailed that it gives the illusion that each house is unique. it would be interesting to replace a few of the brown mushrooms with red versions, or even warped/crimson style mushrooms, but more detailing on the houses and mushrooms is well deserved. Like Eyow, I would suggest improving the tips of the islands, making them feel more interesting.

so I quickly made an example
View attachment 280284
to add, the name “Chimera”, stands for a mythological Greek monster that has almost nothing to do with mushrooms. just sayin.
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PRO! , this is a really good example , you should try making the islands more realistic like the example Bopl showed
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SheriffGG said:
Name = Chimera
Game = SkyWars
Mode = Solo
Version = 1.17.10
Builder = @SheriffGG
World = https://www.mediafire.com/download/zx43bez2yxcxtxq
Pictures = View attachment 280259 View attachment 280260 View attachment 280261 View attachment 280262 View attachment 280263
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Quite chunky and it would look nicer if the rings around the islands were more circular. The islands are also very bland like what bop said above me, so I would make it like kinda what he showed above,
mane dayum those mushrooms r chonkey maybe make them skinnier
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