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~Chapter 4~

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~ At The Hospital ~

"Finally! You guys are here!" Ray exclaimed, as he put his Dora The Explorer book down.
"What's wrong!?"
Ray and Lauren widened their eyes as they saw Wolfie and Pixie.
Pixie's hair was a mess and her lipstick was smudged. Wolfie's hair was scruffy, and his clothes were untidy.
"Did you guys?..." Lauren didn't dare to finished her sentence.
"Uhh..." Wolfie gulped.
Pixie looked at Lauren. "Nevermind About that. Why did you call us here?"
Lauren stared at Wolfie bitterly. "Jc was beaten up last night."
"What?!" Pixie yelled. "Who? Why?" Tears streamed down Pixie's cheeks as she realised who probably did it.
"I can't believe you did that..." she muttered. "Where's Jc?"
"Follow me." Lauren said as she got up. She lead Pixie to Jc's room.

"Why did you beat up Jc?!" Ray asked. "Didn't we tell you not to?"
"I'm sorry, I just.." Wolfie held his head in his hands as tears dripped from his eyes.
Ray shook his head.
"You could've hurt him really bad." Ray sighed.
Anger bubbled inside Wolfie. "He hurt me! He could've taken Pixie away from me..." Tears of resentment sprung to his eyes.
"You know Pixie would never leave you..." Ray assured him.
Wolfie shrugged. "What if I'm not good enough?"
Ray shook his head, a smile creeping across his lips.
"To be honest, I don't know why she went for you in the first place." Ray laughed.
Wolfie smirked.
"If anything you've become less attractive." Ray chuckled.
Wolfie guffawed with a grin. "Gee. You're a great support system, Ray."
"But Pixie loves you. She'd never leave you. I know that."
Wolfie agreed, thinking of his beautiful girlfriend.
"And now you have to apologise to Jc. Make things right."
"Fine, where is he?"
"Follow." Ray walked to Jc's room, Wolfie following right behind him.

As Ray and Wolfie entered the room, they saw Pixie crying beside Jc. Guilt and jealousy flooded through Wolfie as he walked up next to Jc. He wanted to punch Jc more, but he knew that he couldn't, that he shouldn't.
Lauren and Ray could sense what Wolfie wanted to do, and shook their heads. Wolfie sighed and sat down to apologize to Jc.
"Hey bro..."
Jc closed his eyes. "Please don't hit me.."
"That's what I'm apologising for. I shouldn't of hurt you. It was wrong. I'd never usually hurt anyone. You just got me pissed. I thought you were going to take the love of my life away from me."
Pixie smiled while pink painted her cheeks.
"Please forgive me, bro. We can just forget about this whole thing."
Everyone waited for Jc's reply.

"... You're forgiven, but we can't simply forget this. The scars will stay with us forever, no matter how hard we try to forget." Jc said.
"Well said, Jesus. Now, can we have some lunch?" Lauren asked. She was really hungry, plus she hadn't eaten breakfast, either.
"Sure, what do you want?" Ray asked.
"Egg rice."

~ In The Hospital Cafeteria ~

Pixie sat next to Wolfie, while Ray and Lauren sat opposite them.
Lauren gobbled down her egg rice, while Ray enjoyed his ice tea in a hurry.
"Suspicious..." Pixie murmured.
Ray and Lauren looked up, curious.
"You guys are eating fast. Do you need to be somewhere?" Pixie asked, perplexed.
"Oh yeah. We're going to Canada at 3:30Pm."
Pixie dropped her fork. "What!? And you didn't tell us?"
" Didn't I text you?" Lauren asked.
"If you did I didn't receive the message!" Pixie said.
"Sorry.. Well, we have to go soon, so take care of Jc, and make sure Wolfie doesn't beat him up again." Lauren finished the last bits of her egg rice then got up.
"I'm gonna go use the bathroom. After that we're going, is that OK?"
"Yeah."
"We'll miss you both." Pixie admitted.
"We'll miss you too." Ray smiled courteously.
Ray eyed Wolfie. "And don't go beating up anyone else."
"Only if they don't touch the love of my life." Wolfie smiled.
Pixie blushed madly.
Just at that moment, Lauren came back, a long string of toilet paper stuck to her shoe unknowingly.
"We'll be leaving now." Lauren grinned.
"Bye guys." Wolfie smiled.
"Bye, fugly face." Lauren replied to Wolfie.
As Lauren and Ray were leaving, Lauren asked, "When do you wanna come back and visit?"
"Christmas, when else?" Ray smiled.
"You must want lots of birthday presents." Lauren rolled her eyes. Ray glared at her.
"Hey, that's not the only reason."
"I was just kidding, don't need to get all worked up."
"I hate you sometimes."
"I hate you, too!"

As Lauren and Ray boarded the plane, Ray spotted a beautiful girl with brown hair and brown eyes putting her luggage in the compartment.
"Psst." Ray whispered to Lauren. "Do you see that beautiful girl over there? The one with long brown hair and brown eyes?"
"Yeah, what about her?" Lauren asked.
"Don't you agree that she looks beautiful?"
Lauren shrugged. "Yeah. She's bootiful."
Ray waited for Lauren's comeback. She always had one.
"But Pixie's prettier."
Ray rolled his eyes with a laugh.
Lauren took her seat, just as an elderly lady sat in the seat next to her.
"Umm.. Excuse me, Miss, but my friend is gonna sit there."
"Whhhhhaaatttt?" The old lady said, she was deaf.
"Nevermind. I'll sit somewhere else."
Ray looked around, until he saw an empty seat next to that bootiful girl.

Ray walked over and asked the girl if he could sit there. The girl nodded and Ray sat down.
"Hey there. Im Ray." Ray smiled at the beauty.
The girl giggled. She found Ray extremely handsome.
"Hello, Ray. I'm Sara."
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That ending though xD..
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I never got the chance to reading up the chapter until now.

The entire story, it all sound just like me.
Except for the domestic violence I caused to Jc, because of my out-going attitude that I have, I certainly won't harm anyone unless it's necessary.
And also a few tweaks in some of the other moments needed to make it sound "exactly" like me.


Overall: :D:thumbsup:
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Pixel said:
Pixie's hair was a mess and her lipstick was smudged. Wolfie's hair was scruffy, and his clothes were untidy.
"Did you guys?..." Lauren didn't dare to finished her sentence.

Also what was that part about? -.- xD
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O_O
Wut Pixie said ._.
But the rest is amazing! *Does a cartwheel* :333333
The only thing that was disappointing is dat I'm Sirius-ly late for dis .-.
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