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Chapter 3 - Deadly Love
By @PhoenixOrNah and @LaurenDmm300 v. 2.0
Ray's eyes widened, as his lips brushed against Elina's.
Fireworks bubbled through him. He felt like happiness was overflowing, and he'd soon explode.
Elina pulled away, her cheeks magenta.
"Uh, sorry about that!" Elina said as her cheeks turned from magenta to a deep red. Suddenly, Ray and Elina heard someone fangirling near them. They looked towards the sorce and saw Lauren on her phone, seemingly texting someone.
Elina and Ray realised what Lauren was texting about and blushed. Lauren looked up at them and saw them staring, then she smirked.
"Lauren!" Elina gasped, her whole face turning into a red tomato.
Immediately, the phone buzzed in Lauren's hand.
"Hey Pixie!" Lauren chirped down the phone.
Ray was frozen, a smile simmering onto his lips.
"Yep. Elina just snogged ( kissed ) Ray." Lauren nodded.
An excited, glass-shattering squeal echoed through the phone.
Lauren hung up, smiled at Ray and Elina innocently, and ran off. Elina looked down at her ice-cream and slowly ate as she thought about what had just happened. She looked towards Ray and blushed.
"Sorry... about just now..." Elina whispered. Ray looked up at her and smiled sweetly.
"It's okay."
When they had both finished, they stood up and walked back to the car in the pale snow.
The sound of the swirling wind peppered the silence.
Elina stood against the car as Ray fiddled for the keys in his pocket.
"I liked that..." Ray whispered.
Elina raised her eyebrows. "What?"
"But... we need more practice." Ray smirked.
"Ray? What are you talking-"
Ray locked his lips to Elina's softly. Warmth spread through them both.
"Ray?" A sharp voice cut through the air.
It was his ex girlfriend, Rouge.
Ray stopped kissing Elina for a moment and looked towards Rouge.
"Rouge..?"
"I can see you've moved on." Rouge muttered.
"You know what, you guys obviously have a lot to discuss, so I'll just walk home.." Elina's heart shattered.
"Wait! Elina!" But Elina was already walking off.
"Let her go. She obviously doesn't like you." Rouge sneered.
Rouge was manipulative, untrustworthy, and extremely dangerous. You did not want to mess with her.
"But-"
Rouge pressed her Body against Ray's, slamming him into the car.
"I know you missed me." She said before locking her lips to his. Ray pushed Rouge away then ran after Elina.
"Elina!" Ray shouted. He looked everywhere for Elina, but no matter how hard he tried, he just couldn't find her. It seemed like Elina had disappeared.
In reality, Elina was just hiding as she listened to Rouge and Ray's conversation. Tears streamed down her cheeks as she ran into the night.
By @PhoenixOrNah and @LaurenDmm300 v. 2.0
Ray's eyes widened, as his lips brushed against Elina's.
Fireworks bubbled through him. He felt like happiness was overflowing, and he'd soon explode.
Elina pulled away, her cheeks magenta.
"Uh, sorry about that!" Elina said as her cheeks turned from magenta to a deep red. Suddenly, Ray and Elina heard someone fangirling near them. They looked towards the sorce and saw Lauren on her phone, seemingly texting someone.
Elina and Ray realised what Lauren was texting about and blushed. Lauren looked up at them and saw them staring, then she smirked.
"Lauren!" Elina gasped, her whole face turning into a red tomato.
Immediately, the phone buzzed in Lauren's hand.
"Hey Pixie!" Lauren chirped down the phone.
Ray was frozen, a smile simmering onto his lips.
"Yep. Elina just snogged ( kissed ) Ray." Lauren nodded.
An excited, glass-shattering squeal echoed through the phone.
Lauren hung up, smiled at Ray and Elina innocently, and ran off. Elina looked down at her ice-cream and slowly ate as she thought about what had just happened. She looked towards Ray and blushed.
"Sorry... about just now..." Elina whispered. Ray looked up at her and smiled sweetly.
"It's okay."
When they had both finished, they stood up and walked back to the car in the pale snow.
The sound of the swirling wind peppered the silence.
Elina stood against the car as Ray fiddled for the keys in his pocket.
"I liked that..." Ray whispered.
Elina raised her eyebrows. "What?"
"But... we need more practice." Ray smirked.
"Ray? What are you talking-"
Ray locked his lips to Elina's softly. Warmth spread through them both.
"Ray?" A sharp voice cut through the air.
It was his ex girlfriend, Rouge.
Ray stopped kissing Elina for a moment and looked towards Rouge.
"Rouge..?"
"I can see you've moved on." Rouge muttered.
"You know what, you guys obviously have a lot to discuss, so I'll just walk home.." Elina's heart shattered.
"Wait! Elina!" But Elina was already walking off.
"Let her go. She obviously doesn't like you." Rouge sneered.
Rouge was manipulative, untrustworthy, and extremely dangerous. You did not want to mess with her.
"But-"
Rouge pressed her Body against Ray's, slamming him into the car.
"I know you missed me." She said before locking her lips to his. Ray pushed Rouge away then ran after Elina.
"Elina!" Ray shouted. He looked everywhere for Elina, but no matter how hard he tried, he just couldn't find her. It seemed like Elina had disappeared.
In reality, Elina was just hiding as she listened to Rouge and Ray's conversation. Tears streamed down her cheeks as she ran into the night.

Nice job on writing so much and so well