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Chapter 2

The_arrow21 said:
How could you tag snowy and not meh? Everyone knows im better then snowy! so why?! Ha? Nah but rly snowys better then me in everything and thats why shes so awesome
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Soz idk you so I forgot to tag lol
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I luv it but ya crushed one of my future careers to be an author ._. XD
Just like my friend who was literally writing a composition for her EXAMS about Ren and *I'll shut up now*
I really love it but the idea of love is gross if you describe it in um, a fanfiction way (how I grew up hating Aphmau RPs)
I am so sorry for the criticism Lauren and Phoenix
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Shu Lucario said:
I luv it but ya crushed one of my future careers to be an author ._. XD
Just like my friend who was literally writing a composition for her EXAMS about Ren and *I'll shut up now*
I really love it but the idea of love is gross if you describe it in um, a fanfiction way (how I grew up hating Aphmau RPs)
I am so sorry for the criticism Lauren and Phoenix
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1. I like jess/aphmau and 2.i dont mind the "fanfiction love"
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Shu Lucario said:
I luv it but ya crushed one of my future careers to be an author ._. XD
Just like my friend who was literally writing a composition for her EXAMS about Ren and *I'll shut up now*
I really love it but the idea of love is gross if you describe it in um, a fanfiction way (how I grew up hating Aphmau RPs)
I am so sorry for the criticism Lauren and Phoenix
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Purposely not editing the previous one!
The ship was Ren and my friend not me ._.
It is not a lie, it is the truth and it hurts
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Shu Lucario said:
I luv it but ya crushed one of my future careers to be an author ._. XD
Just like my friend who was literally writing a composition for her EXAMS about Ren and *I'll shut up now*
I really love it but the idea of love is gross if you describe it in um, a fanfiction way (how I grew up hating Aphmau RPs)
I am so sorry for the criticism Lauren and Phoenix
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Thanks for the feedback. It'll help us build our writing skills xD
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Its SO good and so aweseme i wanna be in it (only with snowy tho) so maybe :/ but anyway im fangirling WAAY TO MUCH oh i gtg bai
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PhoenixOrNah said:
If you haven't read the first part, go here and read chapter one.
https://brokenlens.xyz/forums/threads/story-3-xd.8543/

Chapter 2
Crushes And Blushes
By Lauren And Phoenix

As they got home, Lauren nudged Ray and said, "I ship it." Ray glared at Lauren.
Chuckling, Lauren looked away. Subtly, a small grin crept across Ray's face as he stared at Elina.
Ummm..." Elina looked at Ray and Lauren, confusion on her face. Lauren unlocked the door and went in, but Ray didn't follow. "Uh..."
As Ray shut the door, he heard Lauren talking to Pixie on the phone.
'She looks so beautiful...' Ray thought as he admired Elina in the white snow. Elina smiled, bewildered.
"Shouldn't we go inside? I'm kind of cold..." Pink coloured Elina's pale cheeks.
Ray shuffled closer, handing his warm sweater to Elina. "Umm.. Thanks, Ray." Shyly, Elina slipped the sweater over her head. "You still cold?" Ray pondered. Elina nodded, her bottom lip quivering. "Why don't we go have some dinner?.. it could warm you up." Nervousness rushed through Ray.
"Sure." Elina smiled. Ray opened the door for Elina, but she refused to enter. "You go first."
Ray looked at Elina and shook his head. "You first."
"Well, I don't want us to stand in this cold weather and argue about this silly matter so ok." Elina said as she entered the house. Ray smiled and entered.


Ray and Elina passed the lounge, where Lauren was chatting away on the phone.
"Guys! What should we have for dinner? Pizza or Chinese?!"
Lauren loved food with a passion xD.
"Uhh... We're actually going to go out and have dinner.." Ray murmured shyly.
Lauren's eyes widened, she dropped the phone.
"CAN I USE YOUR CREDIT CARD?? I'M GONNA BUY A MILLION PIZZAS!" Lauren shouted excitedly.
Ray sighed, and handed Lauren the credit card. Lauren picked up the phone. "PIXIE! RAY AND ELINA ARE GOING ON A DATE!"
Elina blushed as Lauren ran into her room.
"It's not a date..." Ray quickly assured her.
Disappointment crept across Elina's face. Ray's eyes widened. "Unless you want it to be a date? Because I do! I mean-"
Elina giggled.
"It's ok. I... kinda want it to be a date, too" Elina smiled while a tint of deep pink covered her cheeks.
Happiness filled Ray. Elina laughed sweetly.

~ 30 Minutes Later ~
"Table for two?" The waitress asked Ray, who was in a nice white shirt and pants.
Ray nodded.
The waitress led them over to a solitary table. The waitress left until they were ready to order. A few minutes passed, no one said anything. To break the silence, Elina pointed to a table near them. "Look at those Two! They've been kissing each other for minutes." Two people behind a menu were kissing secretively.
Ray and Elina laughed, until they realised who they were.
Wolfie and Pixie.
"Ho. Ly. Sheet." Both said. They took a picture and sent it to everyone. Pixie and Wolfie hadn't noticed as they were too busy kissing.
"I ship them." Elina laughed.
"I ship us." Ray grinned.
Then he regretted what he said.
"I Mean them! I ship them!"
Elina looked down, her fringe covering her embarrased face.
"Uh... So, let's order?" Ray said after a moment of silence. He signaled to a waiter.
"I'll have this." Ray said to the waiter as he pointed at a food item on the menu.
"This please." Elina pointed at the spagetti. The waiter wrote their orders down then said, "You two look like a really cute couple. I hope you guys the best!" before leaving."Uhh..." Elina said.
"She thought we were a couple.. hah.. funny.." Ray put on a fake laugh.
Just at that moment, Pixie pulled away from Wolfie, her lipstick smudged. Wolfie and Pixie giggled, until they saw Elina And Ray.
Pixie's face was mixed with embarrassment and shock.
"Elina? Are you on a date with Ray?" Pixie laughed
"Pixie? Did you just kiss Wolfie?" Elina laughed
"Uh, no I didn't. Wolfie kissed me, not the other way around." Pixie said.
"Well your lips touched each other's so you guys still kissed." Elina said. Pixie rolled her eyes.
"Whatever."
"Anyway, are you two on a date?" Pixie grinned cheekily. Wolfie gave Ray the thumbs up with a chuckle. "Uh..." Before Elina could answer, the waitress came back with the food.
"Can't talk. Gotta eat." Elina smashed her face into the bowl, pasta flying everywhere. The bowl flipped, and landed on the ground. Pixie and Wolfie burst out laughing, Ray stood still, shocked as fudge.
Elina raised her head, her dark hair tangled with sauce. Ray's face was pale, his eyes wide. Pixie banged the table with her hand. "What the heck, Elina!?" She laughed.
"You shouldn't of ate it all at once!" Wolfie cried with laughter.
A small laugh escaped Ray's lips.
"What are you laughing at!?" Elina half giggled.
"Sorry it's just-" Ray was laughing too hard to even finish his sentence.
"Just what?" Elina blushed while giggling slightly.
"You know, you guys are a really cute couple. Seriously." Wolfie said as he laughed. Ray blushed slightly.
"T-Thanks?"
Elina's giggling stopped.
"We aren't a couple.. uh.. not yet."
Ray's eyes widened, trying to hide his grin.

Pixie saw Elina was uncomfortable, so she dragged Elina by the Arm to the restroom.
"Why the hell did you smash your face into your plate?" Pixie chuckled. Elina shrugged, shaking her head. "I don't know... You asked if I was on a date with him and I just-"
Elina slapped a tissue into her face to display what had happened with the food. "Well are you on a date?"
Elina wiped the sauce off her face, "I hope so."
"So you aren't sure, you just hope so?" Pixie asked. Elina nodded. "Well it probably is since you both like each other."
Elina finished wiping her face and threw the tissue away. "Wait, Ray likes me too?!"
"Yeah, almost everyone knows. Funny how no-one metioned it to you.." Pixie said. She had guessed the last part from Elina's shocked expression.
Elina was frozen. She was paler than usual - and that's pretty pale!
"Uhh.. Elina?" Pixie poked Elina's shoulder.
A huge smile crept across Elina's face.
"I know what you're experiencing." Pixie sighed, memories flooding her.
"What?" Elina answered, discombobulated.
"You're in love, aren't you?"
"Uh, maybe?" Elina smiled while blushing madly.
"It'll be hard. But I guess, with the one you love by your side, it shouldn't be too hard." Pixie said. She washed her hands then left.
Elina watched Pixie exit, Pixie's peach coloured dress flowing behind her flawlessly.
"Ray likes me..." Elina whispered, her face glittering with joy. Elina examined herself in the mirror. Dark hair, chocolate eyes.
'How? How could an amazing guy like me?' Elina thought.
Elina washed her face. 'Nah, Pixie probably lied to make me happy,' she thought. 'No way Ray likes me back..'
As Elina exited the restroom, she saw the waiter cleaning up her mess. She scratched her head in embarassment and walked up to the waiter.
"Sorry.. I spilt the speghetti." Elina blushed.
"It's ok. We all make mistakes sometimes." the waiter smiled.
Elina steadied herself in her chair, opposite Ray.
Ray smiled sheepishly. "Are You hungry? We can go get ice cream..."
Elina snickered. "Sure. I'd like that."
Pixie And Wolfie, sucking each other's lips off again, noticed their friends leaving.
Pixie stood up and ran to Elina in her jewel encrusted high heels. "I know you didn't believe me when I said Ray liked you." Pixie whispered.
Elina nodded subtly.
"I'll show you something later.. as proof."
Elina raised her eyebrows as they exited the restaurant.

"So what kind of ice-cream do you want?" Ray asked Elina as the looked at the array of 31 different ice-cream flavours from Baskin Robin's.
"Vanilla will do, thanks." Elina said. She still doubted Ray actually liked her back when she got a text message. She took out her phone and checked the text message while Ray got the ice-cream.
The text message was from Pixie and it read, "Here's the proof." Along with it was an audio file. Elina got out her earphones, plugged them in, and played the audio. What she heard shocked her. What Elina had heard was Ray saying "Fine, I'll admit I like Elina. You happy?"
Elina gasped as Ray sat down next to her.
Ray raised his eyebrows. "Did I scare you?" He laughed, holding out the two ice creams.
Elina's heart hammered in her chest.
"Elina?" Ray prompted curiously.
Ray's voice was drowned. Elina could only hear her heavy breathing. She focused on his lips. They were moving, but she heard no sound coming out.
Elina leaned in and kissed him.

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These are sooooo good. It makes it even funnier just reading everyone's comments on it xD
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