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Chapter 1: White ~SPS~

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I lay on the soft green grass with your hand in mine as we silently stared at the the beautiful stars above us till' I broke the silence.

"The sky is beautiful isn't it?" I asked

"Very beautiful indeed, but it's still nothing compared to how beautiful you are Jamie." He said

"Don't you dare go all sappy on me now Park." I said with a playful smile

"What wrong with being a romantic eh?"

"There's nothing wrong with it." Silence washes over us yet again

Out of the blue Park starts to hum my favorite song, minutes flew by and I started to drift off to sleep when I hear him silently say, "I love you, Jamie, if you only knew how much I love you."

I started to panic, not knowing what to do I did something which I regret to this day, I pretended not to hear it, I was so scared of getting my heart broken again that I acted like I never heard it, I acted like I was sleeping and If I could turn back time just to slap myself from not letting my true emotions out, I would do anything just to say those 3 words to him one last time.

I wish i would have said those 3 words.
Now, I'm too late. I'm always too late.

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I woke from that dream sweating and breathless.

I felt a presence behind me, I look back to see a man dressed in all white sat on a chair near a vanity which I have never seen.

"Ah, finally you're awake my dear." The man said as he stood up and walked to the feet of the bed.

"Don't you dare go near me or touch me." I said feeling a scared, not knowing where I was; I was terrified.

"Don't worry dear I won't touch you, You're probably wondering where you are right now, let me explain this to you and please don't freak out or anything everything I'm going to say may sound absurd and impossible but please try to listen to me with an open mind." He said kindly.

I did nothing but nod I was too scared of what he would tell me that I couldn't utter a single word.

"We are in The Fold, The Fold is a world between Heaven and Hell, it's where souls that can't be placed in Heaven nor can they be placed in Hell. It's also where the headquarters of SPS is located.
SPS stands for Suicide Prevention Squadron.
Here we pick people who are worthy to be saved from suicide and we also pick people who can possibly save those people." He said


"You Jamie are going to stop someone from taking their own life."


I hope this was a good enough chapter.
Written by: ~You may never know~

LINK TO THE PROLOGUE:
https://brokenlens.xyz/forums/threads/sps-prologue.11503/


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Cool thought you should change names to People on forums
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It's not me xD

It's Elina, or Rouge xD
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Dafaq xD I didn't expect that at all xD
Ikr ._.

I know Wolfie's writing style, and that's kinda it..
But, he said he's going offline for a bit._.

Plus, this 'person' wrote @Pixie instead of @Pixel, so they obviously know my real name.
And, Elina doesn't say my real name usually, but Wolfie does. o_O

Wow. I'm a Ducktective.
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Ikr ._.

I know Wolfie's writing style, and that's kinda it..
But, he said he's going offline for a bit._.

Plus, this 'person' wrote @Pixie instead of @Pixel, so they obviously know my real name.
And, Elina doesn't say my real name usually, but Wolfie does. o_O

Wow. I'm a Ducktective.
Lmao "Ducktective" xD
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I actually thought someone would have figured out who I am by now. :D
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