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Map name:
Mansion
Built by: ZeroMrsh
Game Type: MurderMystery
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Idea: took less than a week to built this whole map, I think that the lay out of the map fits perfectly with MM (fair for the inno/murd/sheriff)
also this is the first map ever that I created, It is very simple and I can improve if the map wasnt good enough and didnt make it to MM.
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fun story:
I had to place one of the glass walls blocks by hand because I didnt know how /fill command and other commands work
my friend helped me out on it and tought me how does it work, and he built a little hidden bank! so shoutout for mr noo0b he helped me.
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update: So ik this was first called (castle) but I couldn’t make it look like a castle after I built it.. (also i thought mansion and castle are the same thing before I researched, and since I speak diff language, mansion and castle uses the same word XD)
added some more details and removed my ugly big flag...and made it look more interesting! thanks so much for your feedback and ideas!!!
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Looks nice! I'd like to see some hedges around the fountain so the terrain it feels less flat.
You don't have to do this, I just think it would look good
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Looks nice! I'd like to see some hedges around the fountain so the terrain it feels less flat.
You don't have to do this, I just think it would look good
thanks for ur feedback!! and yeah i see that now Lol
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I really like it! However, some rooms are kind of empty, so maybe add some decorations in the rooms. Other than that, nice job!
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wow I relly Like it Good Job !
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This is really cool! But, it's big....
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It looks great overall, love the big fountain! Just one logistical thing I noticed: since paintings are entities, they won’t appear on the actual server.
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It looks great overall, love the big fountain! Just one logistical thing I noticed: since paintings are entities, they won’t appear on the actual server.
oohh I didnt know that ☹︎.. that's unfortunate thanks for pointing out tho
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Not too shabby! It looks alright! :p

I like the different approach you went for with the block palette! Instead of a typical medieval wood and stone castle xD

Anyway, I think the castle is cool! However, I do think it could use some more castle-y things added onto it, because as of now, it kinda looks like a mansion at first glance. :I
I would suggest adding in some depth and detail. It looks a little flat, similarily to a cube a bit, so I would recommend having some bits stick out or come in. Next, I would suggest mixing the iron bars and some cobblestone stairs together to give even more castle-y vibes from it. Maybe add some more flags about the map, too xD
Additionally, I feel like the interior is a bit empty... but since I suck at castle interior, I’ll tag someone who’s good at it xD @FishMaster127

Overall, I think it’s pretty good for your first map! :laugh: I really like how you hid the hiding spots! Makes it even spookier... uhh.. I didn’t know what other word I could use to describe it on-the-spot xD
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Not too shabby! It looks alright! :p

I like the different approach you went for with the block palette! Instead of a typical medieval wood and stone castle xD

Anyway, I think the castle is cool! However, I do think it could use some more castle-y things added onto it, because as of now, it kinda looks like a mansion at first glance. :I
I would suggest adding in some depth and detail. It looks a little flat, similarily to a cube a bit, so I would recommend having some bits stick out or come in. Next, I would suggest mixing the iron bars and some cobblestone stairs together to give even more castle-y vibes from it. Maybe add some more flags about the map, too xD
Additionally, I feel like the interior is a bit empty... but since I suck at castle interior, I’ll tag someone who’s good at it xD @FishMaster127

Overall, I think it’s pretty good for your first map! :laugh: I really like how you hid the hiding spots! Makes it even spookier... uhh.. I didn’t know what other word I could use to describe it on-the-spot xD
Ayyee DIAVENT!! thankk u so much for replying im a big FAN ;-;
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Not too shabby! It looks alright! :p

I like the different approach you went for with the block palette! Instead of a typical medieval wood and stone castle xD

Anyway, I think the castle is cool! However, I do think it could use some more castle-y things added onto it, because as of now, it kinda looks like a mansion at first glance. :I
I would suggest adding in some depth and detail. It looks a little flat, similarily to a cube a bit, so I would recommend having some bits stick out or come in. Next, I would suggest mixing the iron bars and some cobblestone stairs together to give even more castle-y vibes from it. Maybe add some more flags about the map, too xD
Additionally, I feel like the interior is a bit empty... but since I suck at castle interior, I’ll tag someone who’s good at it xD @FishMaster127

Overall, I think it’s pretty good for your first map! :laugh: I really like how you hid the hiding spots! Makes it even spookier... uhh.. I didn’t know what other word I could use to describe it on-the-spot xD
So just to be clear, I’m doing the interior and nothing else? Also what’s the world name?
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Aaaa. No no. I mean give advice for the interior xD
Ok lol. so what I would say is make it messy and small, avoid open rooms have sight blockers. ie: walls piles of things etc. also don’t make square rooms if at all possible make them L shaped or another abstract shape. That just helps with view blockers. And since this is a castle I would add a fireplace and a feast hall but that’s just realism it doesn’t really matter. And detail! Detail is the most important some of my favorite blocks for that are noteblocks flowerpots and fences try to deviate from just solid blocks. :p that’s my advice so ye
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