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Build critique practise through tbb #1

Sleepyhead101

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This is a new series I am making
Time to return to building after doing parkour for several months
Spoiler title = theme
This is my build. A cool pair of basketball shoes should be enough to win:
Screenshot_20200206_184423_com.mojang.minecraftpe.jpg
others builds:
Screenshot_20200206_184520_com.mojang.minecraftpe.jpg
... Wtf? I am supposed to put my feet in 3 elder guardians and a bunch of yellow wool? Instant terrible.
Screenshot_20200206_184620_com.mojang.minecraftpe.jpg
Decent, but too generic, keeping it from getting good or above. OK
Screenshot_20200206_184634_com.mojang.minecraftpe.jpg
This means an oval thing is trendy shoes. Terrible
Screenshot_20200206_184549_com.mojang.minecraftpe.jpg
Good, but only one shoe, ok

Somehow I ranked last... The winner is mediocrity (imo), and an unfinished build and a bunch of mobs are better than actual shoes... How?
There were 2 ppl who voted awesome on every build, which is good but destroyed a major part of voting system - judgement.
Screenshot_20200206_184657_com.mojang.minecraftpe.jpg
My build, sucks ♥♥♥
Screenshot_20200206_185344_com.mojang.minecraftpe.jpg

Now, others builds
Screenshot_20200206_185606_com.mojang.minecraftpe.jpg
Sorry, the theme is soda, not afternoon tea, cake or something.
Screenshot_20200206_185530_com.mojang.minecraftpe.jpg
That is a present... What?
Screenshot_20200206_185544_com.mojang.minecraftpe.jpg
Very good! An actual soda bottle with soda, also realistic too. Awesome.
Screenshot_20200206_185701_com.mojang.minecraftpe.jpg
This looks like a mailbox. I know it is a soda can with the lid mysteriously disappearing, but it is really low effort and is easily worse than my build. Terrible
Screenshot_20200206_185718_com.mojang.minecraftpe.jpg
An unfinished house, wtf?
Screenshot_20200206_185624_com.mojang.minecraftpe.jpg
Nice, but its size and shape keeps it from awesome.
Screenshot_20200206_185643_com.mojang.minecraftpe.jpg
What I wanted to build tbh
Not bad, but not too good. Ok.
Screenshot_20200206_185749_com.mojang.minecraftpe.jpg
They deserve their slots. Finally, actual reviewers and not people playing just to ruin the voting system!
 

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