A_Sofia
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~ BrokenLens Story ~ Chapter 1
A New Shark Friend
This is just a story not real, I'm bored so I'll make a random story
It was a beautiful morning, the bright of the sun shine, with ocean, make Brokenlens a comfortable place to live. With the population around 2.000 - 7.000 people. vertx is a governor for Brokenlens city, he helps everyone in the city with kindness, he is very responsible and intelligent. At that time, there was a gallant man but friendly enough searching for a magic stone, he ask anyone in the town, but noone knows what magic stone is. Magic stone used to kill creatures of mysterious beings around the earth, the creatures have destroyed many cities in other countries, Brokenlens is the next city to be destroyed from scientists' estimates, The magic stone can stop all the creatures and darkness things. There's only one people who knows where the magic stone is, Who is it? is it vertx? or someone else?
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One day, there was a boy around the brokenlens city looking for carrots for his rabbit, the boy name is
Fheonix. He is a friendly and liked by most of people in the town.
Fheonix : "hmm, where can I buy carrots for my rabbit?"
Fheonix : "Oh I know! I will buy carrot at the Lensmarket store."
In the store..
Fheonix : " Wow! this store is huge! I wonder if I can buy some chocolate for my sister."
Fheo takes some 11 carrots and some chocolate bars for his sister. He is very happy shopping there. After buy some foods, he visited West BrokenLens beach for a while.
~ West BrokenLens beach ~
when fheo was looking at the beach scene, suddenly there was a shark coming up to him. Fheo shocked and screamed, hoping someone can help him.
Fheonix : "Oh my gosh.. shark!.. shark!!..."
The shark is just 2 meters away from him. the shark jumps and right in front of fheonix's face. With a lot of sharp teeth, and red orange eyes
Fheonix : "Please don't kill me.. Mr Good shark...."
Shark : "Good shark?"
Fheonix : "Huh?? you can talk??!?"
Shark : Yes I do, forgive me if I do make you shocked.
Fheonix : "....."
Fheonix : "are you an evil shark like megalodon?"
Shark : "No, I'm different than most of sharks."
Fheonix : "Oooh that explain it, what's your name?"
Trenz : "My name is Trenz."
Fheonix : "Trenz? is that a Trenz sandwich crackers? haha.."
Trenz : "No... *-.-"
Fheonix : "btw my name is fheonix, just call me fheo, sharky"
Trenz : "Hmm, okay".
Fheonix : "... are you wearing an armour"
Trenz : "yes, just for protection.."
Fheonix : "mmm, that's unique."
After that, fheo was going to the city with his shark friend.
Fheonix : "Look! there's a chinese festival in the city, Let's go!!"
Trenz : "Hold on, did you say "city"?."
Fheonix : "Yeah do you want to come with me"
Trenz : "What the city called?"
Fheonix : "Brokenlens city."
Trenz : "Never heard that place before."
Fheonix : "you wanna come?"
Trenz : "Not sure though.. I'm a shark. People will scream at me.."
Fheonix : "Don't worry trenz, I'll take care of you"
That night in the city, there was a chinese festival 2018, everyone celebrate with happiness and joy. fheo was going to buy some chinese food for his shark friend, trenz."
Fheonix : "Hey Trenz, come here!"
Trenz : "wait for a second."
When trenz is on the way, there is woman with models that are so enciting see the shark figure in front of her eyes.
Woman : *Screamed*
Woman : "What is that shark???!"
Everyone looked at trenz and whispering to each other why the shark is looking different than most of type of sharks.
Trenz : "Um, Fheo?"
Fheonix : "Yea?"
Trenz : "Why everyone looked at me?"
Fheonix : "Oh jeez, there are polices!"
Fheonix : "Run!!"
Fheonix and Trenz run away from polices, with a red car.
Trenz : "I never knew boy like you could drive.."
Fheonix : "Of course I can!"
they were going to fheonix's house.
~ Fheonix's house ~
After they reach their destination, fheo opens the door of his house.
Fheo's sister really happy about chocolate bars he bought, after that she saw a shark creature behind his back.
Fheo's Sister : "AHH! what is that creature behind you!!"
Fheonix : "Don't worry sis, he's a good shark."
Fheo's Sister : "Oh a good shark? um what is his name?"
Fheonix : "Trenz"
Fheo's sister were touching trenz all the time.
Fheonix : "Umm what are you doing?"
Fheo's sister : "This shark skin is so smooth... :3"
Fheonix & Trenz : "....."
Liazalia : "Anyway my name is Liazalia, you can call me Lia, Sharky! :3
Trenz : "Okay."
Liazalia : "O M G, he can talk?? what an amazing creature is this!"
Liazalia : "Please can u help me do my homework, plss"
Fheonix : "Yea yea, he will help you later.."
Liazalia : "Yay!!"
Lia leave with a big smile on her face.
Fheonix : "Ok trenz you can sleep in my bedroom."
Trenz : "Ei Thanks.."
they were in fheo's bedroom and talking about friends
Fheonix : "Trenz do you know Shive?"
Trenz : "Hm.. No."
Fheonix "He is my best friend, he's very helpful too in my school"
Trenz : "Ah, that's nice."
Character in this chapter
@Fheonix
@_TrenzKGM_
@XxLiazaliaxX
@Shive2002410
~ CHAPTER 2 COMING SOON ~
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Woahh, thank you! And also, I loved the mysterious beginning especially - nice suspense. I think this is a great start! 
