BrokenLens: Shattered Dimensions - Chapter 1

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Chapter 1: Broken Apart


Wow, everything here was just crazy to think about. A broken dimension? How is that possible? Meh, Vert was a very interesting man back in his days. But the thing was that he slayed dragons, defeated the Life Empire before they fired the Solar Lens at Brandon’s kingdom. But ever since the Life Empire had zipped away, we started making our own homes. We lived to thrive and share our creativity with others. From medieval, to science fiction and everything here, was perfect. We could play games whenever we wanted, we had the freedom to be with people we wish to be with. Harmony is what was struck us all, between the balance of Light and Darkness, darkness couldn’t find it’s way into this Fractured Dimension. However, things may never seem to be the same as I say to myself. A guy with an orange and light blue shirt had accidently bumped into me, whatever he was doing might have been very important, he had a backpack full of things, and it all spilled out. He took quite a fall, but more notable. Tripped, he must have hit me when he tripped. “Agh, who ever made these sidewalks needs to put a warning sign for a tripping hazard!” the man said. I was looking at his face, he seemed familiar to that man… Zyke. But it wasn’t him. “You ok?” I asked. “Yep, everything is intact. That’s good, everything I had in my backpack… may not seem so.” He replied as he was gathering his stuff. “What brings you here?” I asked. “Eh, I was working on something. A Story most likely. I believe this dimension seemed to be broken… like shattered. I was thinking about a name for this dimension, I tried contacting Vert but he never responds.” He answered. “Hmm… I remember this dimension was introduced during the 100th Lens Fall Ceremony. So something with Lens, and this dimension is pretty much broken.” I replied giving him an idea, his face lit up like a christmas tree in a void. “Broken Lens!” He exclaimed. “That… actually is an interesting name. I wonder if he will ever name it that.” I replied. “I doubt it. Cause we all know the great Vert Ex. He never does anything, it is like he vanished or something.” He said. “Do you have a name?” I asked. “Yeah, I am Alex Ray, you can call me Cyber if you wish.” Cyber answered. “Why Cyber? Does it mean something?” I questioned. “Yeah, I pretty much made it up as a nickname. More likely my experience with technology and strategy.” Cyber replied. “What’s your name?” Cyber asked. “Matt, Matt Nitex.” I answered. “CYBER!! THERE YOU ARE!!!” Someone shouted. “Oh, Lauren! Didn’t know you were here!” Cyber replied. The person appeared to be a female, pitch black eyes of the void, brown hair and a bracelet with an origami flower, the band was made out of string. “Where were you?” Lauren asked Cyber. “I was just getting this inventory into my storage. Especially since we are collaborating with a story, I have to get to my house ASAP when I write a page down.” Cyber answered Lauren. She let off a sigh and words started sputtering out of her mouth. “Yeah, I get the stress, but you have to remember that there are things you can partake in! Go ahead and play some QuakeCraft, and relieve the stress.” She said back to Cyber. “To be honest, is it worth killing people to relieve the stress? What if one of those people couldn't respawn?” Cyber asked as someone had interrupted their conversation. “It may only be just the thoughts that count Cyber, Vert made it foolproof to not respawn again. You know that!” someone said. “Heh, hey Rainbow. Gosh, where do you guys teleport from? I was only talking to Matt and out of nowhere you guys invade me! I am only just one man!” Cyber said as both of the girls looked directly at me then back at Cyber, something about this may seem to me that they must have some history. Hopefully Lauren won’t break my arm off.

More characters will be introduced soon, as Chapter 2 is in progress :)
 
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Chapter 1: Broken Apart


Wow, everything here was just crazy to think about. A broken dimension? How is that possible? Meh, Vert was a very interesting man back in his days. But the thing was that he slayed dragons, defeated the Life Empire before they fired the Solar Lens at Brandon’s kingdom. But ever since the Life Empire had zipped away, we started making our own homes. We lived to thrive and share our creativity with others. From medieval, to science fiction and everything here, was perfect. We could play games whenever we wanted, we had the freedom to be with people we wish to be with. Harmony is what was struck us all, between the balance of Light and Darkness, darkness couldn’t find it’s way into this Fractured Dimension. However, things may never seem to be the same as I say to myself. A guy with an orange and light blue shirt had accidently bumped into me, whatever he was doing might have been very important, he had a backpack full of things, and it all spilled out. He took quite a fall, but more notable. Tripped, he must have hit me when he tripped. “Agh, who ever made these sidewalks needs to put a warning sign for a tripping hazard!” the man said. I was looking at his face, he seemed familiar to that man… Zyke. But it wasn’t him. “You ok?” I asked. “Yep, everything is intact. That’s good, everything I had in my backpack… may not seem so.” He replied as he was gathering his stuff. “What brings you here?” I asked. “Eh, I was working on something. A Story most likely. I believe this dimension seemed to be broken… like shattered. I was thinking about a name for this dimension, I tried contacting Vert but he never responds.” He answered. “Hmm… I remember this dimension was introduced during the 100th Lens Fall Ceremony. So something with Lens, and this dimension is pretty much broken.” I replied giving him an idea, his face lit up like a christmas tree in a void. “Broken Lens!” He exclaimed. “That… actually is an interesting name. I wonder if he will ever name it that.” I replied. “I doubt it. Cause we all know the great Vert Ex. He never does anything, it is like he vanished or something.” He said. “Do you have a name?” I asked. “Yeah, I am Alex Ray, you can call me Cyber if you wish.” Cyber answered. “Why Cyber? Does it mean something?” I questioned. “Yeah, I pretty much made it up as a nickname. More likely my experience with technology and strategy.” Cyber replied. “What’s your name?” Cyber asked. “Matt, Matt Nitex.” I answered. “CYBER!! THERE YOU ARE!!!” Someone shouted. “Oh, Lauren! Didn’t know you were here!” Cyber replied. The person appeared to be a female, pitch black eyes of the void, brown hair and a bracelet with an origami flower, the band was made out of string. “Where were you?” Lauren asked Cyber. “I was just getting this inventory into my storage. Especially since we are collaborating with a story, I have to get to my house ASAP when I write a page down.” Cyber answered Lauren. She let off a sigh and words started sputtering out of her mouth. “Yeah, I get the stress, but you have to remember that there are things you can partake in! Go ahead and play some QuakeCraft, and relieve the stress.” She said back to Cyber. “To be honest, is it worth killing people to relieve the stress? What if one of those people couldn't respawn?” Cyber asked as someone had interrupted their conversation. “It may only be just the thoughts that count Cyber, Vert made it foolproof to not respawn again. You know that!” someone said. “Heh, hey Rainbow. Gosh, where do you guys teleport from? I was only talking to Matt and out of nowhere you guys invade me! I am only just one man!” Cyber said as both of the girls looked directly at me then back at Cyber, something about this may seem to me that they must have some history. Hopefully Lauren won’t break my arm off.

More characters will be introduced soon, as Chapter 2 is in progress :)
@Phoebe 葵
@LaurenDmm300
@ViperXlink
@TheCursedPork
@Strelitzia (Requested @Pastel_Magic)
@DarkRainbows
@LEOLOVESLIONS
@JcGarcia_29.
@Snowy

I request thy feedback LOL jk
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I like. Don't change a thing. And hopefully I do break Matt's arm. Jk xD
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OML, I LOVE IT! YOUR DESCRIPTIONS AND DETAILS ARE...

ON POINT???

I need to next chapter now ;-;

Feedback: try using paragraphs xD
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Chapter 1: Broken Apart


Wow, everything here was just crazy to think about. A broken dimension? How is that possible? Meh, Vert was a very interesting man back in his days. But the thing was that he slayed dragons, defeated the Life Empire before they fired the Solar Lens at Brandon’s kingdom. But ever since the Life Empire had zipped away, we started making our own homes. We lived to thrive and share our creativity with others. From medieval, to science fiction and everything here, was perfect. We could play games whenever we wanted, we had the freedom to be with people we wish to be with. Harmony is what was struck us all, between the balance of Light and Darkness, darkness couldn’t find it’s way into this Fractured Dimension. However, things may never seem to be the same as I say to myself. A guy with an orange and light blue shirt had accidently bumped into me, whatever he was doing might have been very important, he had a backpack full of things, and it all spilled out. He took quite a fall, but more notable. Tripped, he must have hit me when he tripped. “Agh, who ever made these sidewalks needs to put a warning sign for a tripping hazard!” the man said. I was looking at his face, he seemed familiar to that man… Zyke. But it wasn’t him. “You ok?” I asked. “Yep, everything is intact. That’s good, everything I had in my backpack… may not seem so.” He replied as he was gathering his stuff. “What brings you here?” I asked. “Eh, I was working on something. A Story most likely. I believe this dimension seemed to be broken… like shattered. I was thinking about a name for this dimension, I tried contacting Vert but he never responds.” He answered. “Hmm… I remember this dimension was introduced during the 100th Lens Fall Ceremony. So something with Lens, and this dimension is pretty much broken.” I replied giving him an idea, his face lit up like a christmas tree in a void. “Broken Lens!” He exclaimed. “That… actually is an interesting name. I wonder if he will ever name it that.” I replied. “I doubt it. Cause we all know the great Vert Ex. He never does anything, it is like he vanished or something.” He said. “Do you have a name?” I asked. “Yeah, I am Alex Ray, you can call me Cyber if you wish.” Cyber answered. “Why Cyber? Does it mean something?” I questioned. “Yeah, I pretty much made it up as a nickname. More likely my experience with technology and strategy.” Cyber replied. “What’s your name?” Cyber asked. “Matt, Matt Nitex.” I answered. “CYBER!! THERE YOU ARE!!!” Someone shouted. “Oh, Lauren! Didn’t know you were here!” Cyber replied. The person appeared to be a female, pitch black eyes of the void, brown hair and a bracelet with an origami flower, the band was made out of string. “Where were you?” Lauren asked Cyber. “I was just getting this inventory into my storage. Especially since we are collaborating with a story, I have to get to my house ASAP when I write a page down.” Cyber answered Lauren. She let off a sigh and words started sputtering out of her mouth. “Yeah, I get the stress, but you have to remember that there are things you can partake in! Go ahead and play some QuakeCraft, and relieve the stress.” She said back to Cyber. “To be honest, is it worth killing people to relieve the stress? What if one of those people couldn't respawn?” Cyber asked as someone had interrupted their conversation. “It may only be just the thoughts that count Cyber, Vert made it foolproof to not respawn again. You know that!” someone said. “Heh, hey Rainbow. Gosh, where do you guys teleport from? I was only talking to Matt and out of nowhere you guys invade me! I am only just one man!” Cyber said as both of the girls looked directly at me then back at Cyber, something about this may seem to me that they must have some history. Hopefully Lauren won’t break my arm off.

More characters will be introduced soon, as Chapter 2 is in progress :)
Nice try! <3
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That was very creative. I would never ever write that much because I would be the last person in my class to finish a story. How long did it take you too write it?
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That was very creative. I would never ever write that much because I would be the last person in my class to finish a story. How long did it take you too write it?
3... Loooooooooooong hours
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Wow, that is awesome, the describes my homework.... Takes me 4 long hours and I have to make 6 essays :( but you are very descriptive and creative :D :)
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I just came here and saw you have done till chapter 4 xd lemme continue my reading
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