Broken romps chapter 1 part 1

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Merc wakes up from being unconscious and see 15 other people lying on the ground
Then merc realises why he is here.
He got a letter to join broken peaks high school for the ultimate assassin
He thought they were gonna be more people though.
Then one by one each of the other students woke up
Merc:um er hello I am merc, the ultimate assassin
*elania danced and bumps into merc*
Elania: HEWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOO I EM ULTIMATE DANCER
*elania picks me up*
Merc:ultimate dancer eh?
Elania:yup I de best
*Then three other kids came near me*
Pinkbunny:hi I am ultimate teddy maker *runs away and hides be hind her giant stuffed pink teddy
Viper:sup I am ultimate hunter I mostly hunt foxes and wolves And set killer traps
*kendra slaps viper across the face*
Kendra:wtf why would u hurt animals u monster
Kendra:anyways im ultimate bird tamer I love birds my favourite ones are hawks
*i saw two people on the back ground one looked like a robot*
Strike:)3@@9 8-' 7@58'-53,6?94(
Plush:he means to say "i am ultimate cyborg" and im the ultimate robot engineer
I can make fix and upgrade cyborgs/animatronics/robots and so on
Merc:nice to meet u, I guess
*two hands went onto my back*
Fire:hello im ultimate fire fighter
Freeze:hewwo I am def the best ice skater in the world
Merc:why is someone hot and cold together?
Fire :just
Freeze: because
Fire :bruh
*In the back behind one of the desks a man with a troll mask was there writing something *
Merc:hi
Droll:eeek >< wtf man u scared the life outa me, I am ultimate fantasy writer, I wear this mask cause its the head of my oc
Merc:oc?
Droll: original character
Merc:moving on imma see those two beautiful girls over there
*Merc moves to the two girls*
Merc:hi
Lia:you look like a retarded sausage
Laura:lia dunt be mean he is obviously cosplaying some terrible super hero or something
Lia:oooh that's why he's that ugly I thought it was natural
Merc:........
*something pulled me away*
Aypi:your welcome
Merc:huh?
Aypi:thise two girls are lia and laura they are ultimate Sass and ultimate fasionesta
Merc: k ty i guess, what are u then?
Aypi: im ultimate singer
Merc:can i hear u sing?
Aypi: later not today I'm busy
*someone bumps into me and I fall badly*
Merc:owwwwwwwww ochie
Lia:hahaha hahaha
Experiment:sooooo sorry I'm ultimate runner I was busy running round the class room
Merc:I didn't see u
Experiment:that's cause i ran so fast
Merc: ooooooh
*a mysterious cat shaped teddy popped outa nowhere*
???:hello im vertx your principle
Everyone:hi principle vertx
Vertx:now kill each other
Merc:waot what?
Vertx: one of u kill someone else and if u kill someone and get away with it u get everyone dead and u win
 
Nice i like it be better if i was in it (jk xD)
But yea i like it it twas cool
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I like.
xXphoenixXx said:
Merc wakes up from being unconscious and see 15 other people lying on the ground
Then merc realises why he is here.
He got a letter to join broken peaks high school for the ultimate assassin
He thought they were gonna be more people though.
Then one by one each of the other students woke up
Merc:um er hello I am merc, the ultimate assassin
*elania danced and bumps into merc*
Elania: HEWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOO I EM ULTIMATE DANCER
*elania picks me up*
Merc:ultimate dancer eh?
Elania:yup I de best
*Then three other kids came near me*
Pinkbunny:hi I am ultimate teddy maker *runs away and hides be hind her giant stuffed pink teddy
Viper:sup I am ultimate hunter I mostly hunt foxes and wolves And set killer traps
*kendra slaps viper across the face*
Kendra:wtf why would u hurt animals u monster
Kendra:anyways im ultimate bird tamer I love birds my favourite ones are hawks
*i saw two people on the back ground one looked like a robot*
Strike:)3@@9 8-' 7@58'-53,6?94(
Plush:he means to say "i am ultimate cyborg" and im the ultimate robot engineer
I can make fix and upgrade cyborgs/animatronics/robots and so on
Merc:nice to meet u, I guess
*two hands went onto my back*
Fire:hello im ultimate fire fighter
Freeze:hewwo I am def the best ice skater in the world
Merc:why is someone hot and cold together?
Fire :just
Freeze: because
Fire :bruh
*In the back behind one of the desks a man with a troll mask was there writing something *
Merc:hi
Droll:eeek >< wtf man u scared the life outa me, I am ultimate fantasy writer, I wear this mask cause its the head of my oc
Merc:eek:c?
Droll: original character
Merc:moving on imma see those two beautiful girls over there
*Merc moves to the two girls*
Merc:hi
Lia:you look like a retarded sausage
Laura:lia dunt be mean he is obviously cosplaying some terrible super hero or something
Lia:eek:ooh that's why he's that ugly I thought it was natural
Merc:........
*something pulled me away*
Aypi:your welcome
Merc:huh?
Aypi:thise two girls are lia and laura they are ultimate Sass and ultimate fasionesta
Merc: k ty i guess, what are u then?
Aypi: im ultimate singer
Merc:can i hear u sing?
Aypi: later not today I'm busy
*someone bumps into me and I fall badly*
Merc:eek:wwwwwwwww ochie
Lia:hahaha hahaha
Experiment:sooooo sorry I'm ultimate runner I was busy running round the class room
Merc:I didn't see u
Experiment:that's cause i ran so fast
Merc: ooooooh
*a mysterious cat shaped teddy popped outa nowhere*
???:hello im vertx your principle
Everyone:hi principle vertx
Vertx:now kill each other
Merc:waot what?
Vertx: one of u kill someone else and if u kill someone and get away with it u get everyone dead and u win
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The_arrow21 said:
Nice i like it be better if i was in it (jk xD)
But yea i like it it twas cool
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U were gonna be in it i chose the people with random chooser
I put atleast 50 people in 16 went out and I used it to chose main character and that was merc
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It is good although Maybe I'm stupid but you could have put all Chapters in the same thread? (I didnt look up the date , sorry if you did it Daily)
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Aypifox said:
It is good although Maybe I'm stupid but you could have put all Chapters in the same thread? (I didnt look up the date , sorry if you did it Daily)
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1 Chapter each day
3 parts
1st part is story
2nd part is death
3rd part is trial
I want people to be anticipated and wnat the next part to come out
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xXphoenixXx said:
1 Chapter each day
3 parts
1st part is story
2nd part is death
3rd part is trial
I want people to be anticipated and wnat the next part to come out
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For chapters I guess its cool but you should put the 3 parts together :p
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Aypifox said:
For chapters I guess its cool but you should put the 3 parts together :p
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Eh but it wouldn't be as good in my opinion also there 6 chapters all together but 16 or 17 parts so it does seem alot._.
When i wanna it wouldn't be as good cause people will think eh the happened also it will be quite long so i shortened them into parts
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xXphoenixXx said:
Eh but it wouldn't be as good in my opinion also there 6 chapters all together but 16 or 17 parts so it does seem alot._.
When i wanna it wouldn't be as good cause people will think eh the happened also it will be quite long so i shortened them into parts
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Still , it make spam .. Don't you have a website then? You could post it on this Website :)
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