Broken Lens: Shattered Dimensions - Chapter 8

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Chapter 8: Shattered Upon Contact


Everything felt still, we were going to start our training an hour ago but they didn’t. “I wonder what’s going on with them, it can’t be like that they forgot right?” I asked. “Matt has a point, what is taking them so long.” Rainbow added.


Meanwhile…


“So what is next?” Vex asked. “Hmm, I want the Neco Sector, the sands there are so perfectly made to turn into water. I want every single grain from there!” I replied. “But sir, that sector is under surveillance of the Dimensional Guardians! We will never be able to get there without being confronted!” Vex added. “Well then heh heh heh, that’s why we are going on the offensive. We’ll confront the guardians in two days tops, they’ll be destroyed and we can finally live in a better place, rather than living in a Void!” I said. “Wait… real battle?” Vex asked. “By metal hand against hand. I am sure that they won’t mind Mirath City being dominated by us, would they?” I said. “Wait, but we don’t have any forces. You don’t expect me to just drop into the city and just taking it over in only 3 seconds!” Vex barked. “Ooh, let me show you someone that will cover that base for us.” I added. I then walked Vex to the West Wing of the ship to show Vex who I hired. “Dr. Exile, the mad scientist who made all of this possible.” I shouted out. “Mad is not the certain word I really prefer, I am more of a VENGEFUL scientist.” Dr. Exile screamed with his angry voice. “I guess you are here to meet the troops?” Dr. Exile said as he revealed his face from the dark. I got really giddy. “So I have one question for you, will these Warbots get the job done?” I asked. “Oh they will, they are programmed to know every offensive and defensive tactic in the Guardian Handbook! They won’t just Kill the guardians… THEY’LL OBLITERATE THEM!!!! AHAHAHAAHAHAHA!!!” Dr. Exile screamed out, then the lights went down. “Well, great. They even killed the lights.” Vex said.


Nupal Desert, Neco Sector - Half an Hour Later


“Alex! Alex! Are you there?” Someone said to me on my radio, I walked over to answer it. “Alex “Cyber” Ray here. What do you want?” I asked. “Oh hey, glad that you are still alive. Jake has been wondering where you have been.” The person said, I remember that voice, it was Matt. “Well home, in the Neco Sector. Since that Adam refused entry for me, and there is still one more spot to fill in for the Guardians. Hopefully it’s not someone who was far up himself like Adam was.” I added. “Well Alex, I know that you’re no guardian or some what, you are a good person… even though I was talking to Jake most of the time.” Matt said as I chuckled. “Well I have to head to the Kijila Sector to buy new parts, If you all want to come with me feel free.” I said. “Alright, I guess I’ll meet you there.” Matt said. “Alright then, see you in a bit.” I said as I blocked the signal and ended the call. I got into my shuttle and blasted off.


“Where else can we find our last Guardian?” Brax asked Adam. “Well I don’t think that the sands of Nupal Desert will cut it. Especially since that’s where that dune rat lives.” Adam answered, I think when he meant Dune Rat, he meant Alex. “Yes, you may have a point.” Brax added as they both walked out side. “I still have no clue why he has such a grudge on Alex.” I told myself. “You have a point Rainbow, he pretty much did nothing wrong. After all he did explain what really happened.” Leona said. “Oh. whew, you scared me.” I said. “So who is this Alex character?” Leona asked. “He’s a friend, well, someone who was possessed by his brother who is Jake. I wanted to introduce him to Strelitzia and Viper but… it really wasn’t him that we were talking to all those years.” I answered. “So… where does Strelitzia and Viper live exactly?” Leona asked. “They live in Folkiyia Village, in the Kijila Sector.” I answered.
 
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Chapter 8: Shattered Upon Contact


Everything felt still, we were going to start our training an hour ago but they didn’t. “I wonder what’s going on with them, it can’t be like that they forgot right?” I asked. “Matt has a point, what is taking them so long.” Rainbow added.


Meanwhile…


“So what is next?” Vex asked. “Hmm, I want the Neco Sector, the sands there are so perfectly made to turn into water. I want every single grain from there!” I replied. “But sir, that sector is under surveillance of the Dimensional Guardians! We will never be able to get there without being confronted!” Vex added. “Well then heh heh heh, that’s why we are going on the offensive. We’ll confront the guardians in two days tops, they’ll be destroyed and we can finally live in a better place, rather than living in a Void!” I said. “Wait… real battle?” Vex asked. “By metal hand against hand. I am sure that they won’t mind Mirath City being dominated by us, would they?” I said. “Wait, but we don’t have any forces. You don’t expect me to just drop into the city and just taking it over in only 3 seconds!” Vex barked. “Ooh, let me show you someone that will cover that base for us.” I added. I then walked Vex to the West Wing of the ship to show Vex who I hired. “Dr. Exile, the mad scientist who made all of this possible.” I shouted out. “Mad is not the certain word I really prefer, I am more of a VENGEFUL scientist.” Dr. Exile screamed with his angry voice. “I guess you are here to meet the troops?” Dr. Exile said as he revealed his face from the dark. I got really giddy. “So I have one question for you, will these Warbots get the job done?” I asked. “Oh they will, they are programmed to know every offensive and defensive tactic in the Guardian Handbook! They won’t just Kill the guardians… THEY’LL OBLITERATE THEM!!!! AHAHAHAAHAHAHA!!!” Dr. Exile screamed out, then the lights went down. “Well, great. They even killed the lights.” Vex said.


Nupal Desert, Neco Sector - Half an Hour Later


“Alex! Alex! Are you there?” Someone said to me on my radio, I walked over to answer it. “Alex “Cyber” Ray here. What do you want?” I asked. “Oh hey, glad that you are still alive. Jake has been wondering where you have been.” The person said, I remember that voice, it was Matt. “Well home, in the Neco Sector. Since that Adam refused entry for me, and there is still one more spot to fill in for the Guardians. Hopefully it’s not someone who was far up himself like Adam was.” I added. “Well Alex, I know that you’re no guardian or some what, you are a good person… even though I was talking to Jake most of the time.” Matt said as I chuckled. “Well I have to head to the Kijila Sector to buy new parts, If you all want to come with me feel free.” I said. “Alright, I guess I’ll meet you there.” Matt said. “Alright then, see you in a bit.” I said as I blocked the signal and ended the call. I got into my shuttle and blasted off.


“Where else can we find our last Guardian?” Brax asked Adam. “Well I don’t think that the sands of Nupal Desert will cut it. Especially since that’s where that dune rat lives.” Adam answered, I think when he meant Dune Rat, he meant Alex. “Yes, you may have a point.” Brax added as they both walked out side. “I still have no clue why he has such a grudge on Alex.” I told myself. “You have a point Rainbow, he pretty much did nothing wrong. After all he did explain what really happened.” Leona said. “Oh. whew, you scared me.” I said. “So who is this Alex character?” Leona asked. “He’s a friend, well, someone who was possessed by his brother who is Jake. I wanted to introduce him to Strelitzia and Viper but… it really wasn’t him that we were talking to all those years.” I answered. “So… where does Strelitzia and Viper live exactly?” Leona asked. “They live in Folkiyia Village, in the Kijila Sector.” I answered.
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Great! :D

Also, how do you write your chapters so quickly? I take at least a few days to perfect one chapter.. xD
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Great! :D

Also, how do you write your chapters so quickly? I take at least a few days to perfect one chapter.. xD
First, I wake up, think about the plot. Second, I jolt down ideas, third, I get to writing.

It takes some good amount of thinking, this one took me 8 hours, and I am happy with it :)
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