Broken Lens: Shattered Dimensions - Chapter 2

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Chapter 2: Pieces To The Puzzle


“Vert Ex, you seem to be quite a builder.” The Grandmaster said. “I know, I am just making it so that people don’t have to worry about the war that raged on outside the dimension.” I explained. “Well, we all know that sometimes making a somewhat “Fractured” Dimension can lead to. Why make these mini-games you created? Do they have a purpose?” The Grandmaster asked. “They are just to relieve stress, and a Lens Fall Ceremony thing. I just wanted to do something bigger than just having a large feast.” I answered. “If you say so.” The Grandmaster replied.


“So what about this amulet? Does that mean something?” Lauren asked. “It was a gift my father gave me before… they vanished.” I answered. “That looks like a Lost Builder kind of amulet. Maybe it can glow in the dark?” Cyber asked looking at the amulet. “Whatever it is, I have no idea. Better than having a tattoo engraved to your arm, thats for sure.” Rainbow added. “Now looky here, ain’t it a few girls looking at a girly amulet!” Someone shouted at us, the voice was loud… Like, loud as thunder, he had a very deep voice. A Beard was attached to his lower face, his hair was completely orange, biker gear from head to toe, he had eyes of a factory worker. He had brass knuckles at the ready, showing that he was going to beat us all up into a pulp. “This is the part where we run isn’t it?” Cyber asked. “YEP, RUN!!!” Lauren yelled as we all escaped the man.


“Come ‘ere ya little swabs!” He said. “Halt, you have no right to beat up these people!.” Someone said. Huh, that’s strange. He had made a bubble around the man, making it a impossible escape until time passes. “Oh… Ray, I thought you were on vacation!” The man said. “Pfft, justice comes first.” The other man said. “Ok, I know I shouldn’t freak out right now… BUT WHO ARE YOU TWO!?” Lauren screeched with fear and hate. “I am Ray Palmer, this is Pork, Pork Neften.” Ray answered. “Wait a minute, you’re one of the guardians!” I exclaimed. “Yes, and you have to be a little threatening to show people the consequences. I will even have to break every bone in his body if he keeps doing this!” Ray replied with his echoey voice. I studied him for a while, light blue trench coat wth white jeans, a Palm Tree pin on his right side, black t-shirt, slick shadowy hair. It reminded me a lot of Lauren's Dark Void Eyes.I can tell something about this may lead to something none of us would expect, but I have faith. We just have to see if Pork will ever switch sides.
 
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I can not stop reading ;-; every time a chapter finishes I feel sad xD
A question..?

Is Rainbow me? Because I am usually called Dark xD but Rainbow is fine :3
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You spelt "pieces" wrongly. In the chapter title. ._. xD
I can not stop reading ;-; every time a chapter finishes I feel sad xD
A question..?

Is Rainbow me? Because I am usually called Dark xD but Rainbow is fine :3
Yeah, cause Darkness is mostly ALWAYS the antagonist. [Especially since this is tied in with another thing I made ;)]

And thank you! It means a lot!!
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