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Yep I knew I would never stick to this schedule xD
I guess I'm posting chapters every day (except Mondays and weekends probably) or until I have to stop to write a few. Let's just say I'll post chapters when I feel like it .3.
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Wow. This was definitely the worst case of nausea in my entire life.
Everything was just spinning, and it wasn’t until someone said, “Hey! You okay?” until I realized I was standing in a big house, and lots of people were staring at me.
"Ignore all these people," The player said, who was a girl. She had long brown hair and orange eyes. She also had black clothes, and these flames coming out of her arms, although they didn’t burn when she touched me. She had these wings too, but they didn’t seem to be attached to her body. I mean, they didn’t really move or anything.
The girl dragged me away from the crowd, and no one tried to follow her. (Did I mention she was a Legend?)
"Ugh. Stupid players, always so nosy" The girl complained, "And it's not like they're any use when they get Chosen. Geez." She turned to me, "Oh yeah, I'm Strel."
"I'm Kiwi," I said looking around, "Where am I?"
"Oh, this is SkyWars. Basically you try not to die but end up dying anyway, you know, the usual." Strel frowned. "But you aren't new, huh? You're a Legend. How come I feel like I've never seen you... Oh well, I have horrible memory anyway."
"Weell I am kinda new," I said, "I mean, to SkyWars. But I'm a Legend in Hide and Seek."
Strel just stared at me.
"Another game," I mumbled, "Long story..."
"But HOW did you get here!" Strel exclaimed, "Who would ever agree to take you? I mean, everyone here basically HATES me, except for a few people..." Strel's eyes brightened, "Oh yeah, you should meet them! They’re my friends. C'mon!"
Strel ran in a hallway, into a small room. Four players were sitting on four separate beds. There were two other beds, but they were empty.
The first player was a boy. He had short blonde hair and blue eyes. He also had this blue, yellow, and silver armor type-thing, but just like Strel’s fire and wings, it didn’t really seem to be of any use.
The second person was a girl. She had brown hair, which kinda faded into blonde-ish white at the tips. She had this red/blue sweater thingy with a white heart, and light pink eyes. She seemed to be talking with the other two players, but stopped when we came in and waved.
The third player was a boy with a black hood covering most of his face. He had these kiiinda creepy black and silver robes. He looked sorta sad and stuff, but then he smiled and waved, copying the other girl.
The last player looked like she was dressed for the holidays. She had dark brown hair, and a black mask covered her face. She had a white sweater with a hoodie, and this green and red scarf. She also had these cute little snowman boots.
"Guys, this is Kiwi. Kiwi this is Fheo." She points at the first player. "He's kinda quiet and stuff, but he’s cool. This is Arya and Cap. Arya's funny and stuff, and she's also nice. This one is SUPER happy, which doesn't really match up with his choice of clothing." She points at the girl, then at the robed boy. "Oh and this is Queenie. She's cool," She pointed at the last girl.
"Woah nice to meet you!" Cap said, grinning, "We barely get any nice people here, everyone is just so mean all the time." He frowned.
"Yep," Arya added, "Kinda understandable though, 'cause one day we all might be fighting each other so I guess they don’t really want to fight friends."
Strel scowled, "Oh well, I bet they never actually thought of not fighting their friends. People these days. So focused on winning."
"Nice to meet you too..." Queenie whispered.
"Uhh well… nice to meet all you too!" I said, still sorta disorientated. "Wait. You four aren't Legends right?" I pointed to Cap, Fheo, Arya, and Queenie. "So why don’t you just take Strel and go to another game?"
According to Hermy, that should work, right? And the more people the better. So why were all four of them staring at me like I'd gone crazy? Finally Fheo spoke up.
"There were once six of us," he half whispered, half spoke, "Her name was Neon. One day she decided to take us all to another game. 'It should be simple' she said, 'And finally we won't have a danger of dying anymore'." He paused, "She's gone."
There was an awkward silence. I felt kinda bad for them all, and then SUPER guilty for asking. Then Strel broke the silence and quickly said, "OKAY TIME TO SLEEP SO TOMORROW IF WE GET CHOSEN WE CAN BEAT THE CRAP OUT OF THOSE PLAYERS.”
Everyone got in bed without objection.
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Yep, you guys have to guess who's point of view it's being told by... :> MUAHAHAHAH
Also, we're taking a break from TSW and going to the magical land of SW! Woaaaa!
Previous chapter- https://brokenlens.xyz/forums/threads/broken-ch-4.39121/
Next chapter- https://brokenlens.xyz/forums/threads/broken-ch-6.39263/
I guess I'm posting chapters every day (except Mondays and weekends probably) or until I have to stop to write a few. Let's just say I'll post chapters when I feel like it .3.
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Wow. This was definitely the worst case of nausea in my entire life.
Everything was just spinning, and it wasn’t until someone said, “Hey! You okay?” until I realized I was standing in a big house, and lots of people were staring at me.
"Ignore all these people," The player said, who was a girl. She had long brown hair and orange eyes. She also had black clothes, and these flames coming out of her arms, although they didn’t burn when she touched me. She had these wings too, but they didn’t seem to be attached to her body. I mean, they didn’t really move or anything.
The girl dragged me away from the crowd, and no one tried to follow her. (Did I mention she was a Legend?)
"Ugh. Stupid players, always so nosy" The girl complained, "And it's not like they're any use when they get Chosen. Geez." She turned to me, "Oh yeah, I'm Strel."
"I'm Kiwi," I said looking around, "Where am I?"
"Oh, this is SkyWars. Basically you try not to die but end up dying anyway, you know, the usual." Strel frowned. "But you aren't new, huh? You're a Legend. How come I feel like I've never seen you... Oh well, I have horrible memory anyway."
"Weell I am kinda new," I said, "I mean, to SkyWars. But I'm a Legend in Hide and Seek."
Strel just stared at me.
"Another game," I mumbled, "Long story..."
"But HOW did you get here!" Strel exclaimed, "Who would ever agree to take you? I mean, everyone here basically HATES me, except for a few people..." Strel's eyes brightened, "Oh yeah, you should meet them! They’re my friends. C'mon!"
Strel ran in a hallway, into a small room. Four players were sitting on four separate beds. There were two other beds, but they were empty.
The first player was a boy. He had short blonde hair and blue eyes. He also had this blue, yellow, and silver armor type-thing, but just like Strel’s fire and wings, it didn’t really seem to be of any use.
The second person was a girl. She had brown hair, which kinda faded into blonde-ish white at the tips. She had this red/blue sweater thingy with a white heart, and light pink eyes. She seemed to be talking with the other two players, but stopped when we came in and waved.
The third player was a boy with a black hood covering most of his face. He had these kiiinda creepy black and silver robes. He looked sorta sad and stuff, but then he smiled and waved, copying the other girl.
The last player looked like she was dressed for the holidays. She had dark brown hair, and a black mask covered her face. She had a white sweater with a hoodie, and this green and red scarf. She also had these cute little snowman boots.
"Guys, this is Kiwi. Kiwi this is Fheo." She points at the first player. "He's kinda quiet and stuff, but he’s cool. This is Arya and Cap. Arya's funny and stuff, and she's also nice. This one is SUPER happy, which doesn't really match up with his choice of clothing." She points at the girl, then at the robed boy. "Oh and this is Queenie. She's cool," She pointed at the last girl.
"Woah nice to meet you!" Cap said, grinning, "We barely get any nice people here, everyone is just so mean all the time." He frowned.
"Yep," Arya added, "Kinda understandable though, 'cause one day we all might be fighting each other so I guess they don’t really want to fight friends."
Strel scowled, "Oh well, I bet they never actually thought of not fighting their friends. People these days. So focused on winning."
"Nice to meet you too..." Queenie whispered.
"Uhh well… nice to meet all you too!" I said, still sorta disorientated. "Wait. You four aren't Legends right?" I pointed to Cap, Fheo, Arya, and Queenie. "So why don’t you just take Strel and go to another game?"
According to Hermy, that should work, right? And the more people the better. So why were all four of them staring at me like I'd gone crazy? Finally Fheo spoke up.
"There were once six of us," he half whispered, half spoke, "Her name was Neon. One day she decided to take us all to another game. 'It should be simple' she said, 'And finally we won't have a danger of dying anymore'." He paused, "She's gone."
There was an awkward silence. I felt kinda bad for them all, and then SUPER guilty for asking. Then Strel broke the silence and quickly said, "OKAY TIME TO SLEEP SO TOMORROW IF WE GET CHOSEN WE CAN BEAT THE CRAP OUT OF THOSE PLAYERS.”
Everyone got in bed without objection.
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Yep, you guys have to guess who's point of view it's being told by... :> MUAHAHAHAH
Also, we're taking a break from TSW and going to the magical land of SW! Woaaaa!
Previous chapter- https://brokenlens.xyz/forums/threads/broken-ch-4.39121/
Next chapter- https://brokenlens.xyz/forums/threads/broken-ch-6.39263/
>>Starring<<
@KaWaiIeH_Ao as "Kiwi"
@Strelitzia as "Strel"
@Fheonix as "Fheo"
@AryaTheDutchAD as "Arya"
@Capitaine64 as "Cap"
@KaWaiIeH_Ao as "Kiwi"
@Strelitzia as "Strel"
@Fheonix as "Fheo"
@AryaTheDutchAD as "Arya"
@Capitaine64 as "Cap"
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