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IM SU SOWWY I HAD A MAJOR CASE OF WRITERS BLOCK xDDD
Here ya go after a million years of wait xD
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The first thing I noticed was his nose.
WAT EVEN IT TOOK UP LIKE HALF HIS FACE.
I know what you’re probably thinking, Magic, you’re such an idiot! Why would you go headfirst into a spooky cave after a little teeny tiny furry flying thing?
WELL YOU DON’T UNDERSTAND. IT WAS SO CUTEEEE.
Cap was behind me, frozen in shock. He kinda looked a little pale from the lack of air, but I didn’t feel a thing so I don’t know what bothered him.
Oh yeah, the player in front of us.
He looked really weird. His head was twice the size of a normal player’s head— very tall and rectangular. He wore purple clothes, with his arms crossed in front of him. The furry thing landed on his shoulder, and squeaked something to him.
Then the weirdest thing happened. The player laughed.
He laughed for what seemed like forever. I waved my hand in front of his face, “Umm, Mr. Person? You good?”
“Me? Good? Hahaha!” The player laughed, “I’m happy. Someone actually found me!”
“Found you?” Cap asked, “Wait, you aren’t a normal player, are you?”
“Nope,” The player said, “I’m Big Nose. Mr. Big Nose if you would. And NO BEFORE YOU LAUGH I did NOT choose that name.”
I tried REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY hard not to laugh.
“Wait so what’s that?” I pointed to the furry creature, who had buried its head in one of its wings.
“Oh this?” Mr. Big Nose, “This is my pet bat, World View. And no, I have no idea why THAT name out of all other names.”
Hmm. World View was a pretty weird name. I’ll just call him Fuzzy instead.
“I’ve been trying to find my way out of this cave for forever,” Mr. Big Nose continued, “I know we’re in QuakeCraft according to World View, but I have no idea how to get out.”
“Oh that’s easyyyyy, all you have to do it go up a few levels then turn right at the intersection and turn left again and keep going up then take a left then another left and yet another left and then a right then another right and a left and then you’re there!”
All three of them stared at me blankly.
“Y’know what, lemme just take you there.”
~
Fheo actually looked mad.
For the whole 48 hours or such that I’d known him, I’ve never seen any expression except the blank, quiet, stare he usually wore. Oh, and occasionally that flash of surprise he got when SkyWars went kaboom.
But never MAD.
We were up in the tower of this huge castle, intentionally away from everyone else. After that girl with the glasses— I think her name was Pandee— helped us go past, mostly everyone left us alone.
I said MOSTLY. Erin still kinda watched us, as if she still didn’t trust us.
There were 5 beds in this room. Queenie sat down on one of them. “Phew,” she said, “At least we’re away from all that attention.”
“I knowwww right,” I agreed. I could still feel those weird chills from loads of people’s eyes on me.
There was suddenly a short knock on the door. A half muffled voice said, “Can we come in?”
Fheo was instantly alert, standing upright when he heard the knock. But after he heard the voice, he slightly relaxed, though his eyes were still glued on the door.
We all shared a glance. Strel nodded, then said, “Sure, come on ahead.”
The door opened, and Pandee stepped in. With her was a girl with pink clothes and a half mask covering her face.
“Sorry about that,” Pandee said, closing the door behind her, “People here can be real jerks sometimes.”
“It’s fine,” Arya said, “We haven’t introduced ourselves though! I’m Arya.”
“I’m Queenie.”
“Strel.”
“Fheo.”
“Kiwi,” I said last.
“I’m Pandee.” Pandee said, and the girl next to her said, “Evie.”
“Why is your Legend aura so bright?” Strel asked.
“Probably because I’m first place,” Pandee grinned, then her smile faltered as she added, “Well there was someone else but...”
Fheo nodded in understanding, and Strel and Arya exchanged sympathetic glances.
“Well anyway, can you guys tell me HOW YOU CAME HERE?” Pandee’s eyes shined with excitement. “If there’s ANY way to get out of MB, I’d take it!”
“Me too!” Evie said, which was the first time I’d heard her speak since she said her name, “I saw you guys earlier... and when I saw your Legend auras, I found Pandee and we decided to visit you guys.”
“Well, have you guys heard about SkyWars?” I asked.
“Wait— you guys came from THERE?” Pandee asked incredulously, “We heard it was a death trap.”
“Yup,” Evie added, “Actually, recently a guy came from that game. He had this purple goop on his skin and no matter how we tried, we could never get it off. One day he woke up screaming. The goop had covered his entire body and he couldn’t breathe...”
I paled. Good thing the Portal hadn’t touched any of us.
“W-Well, we escaped from that game,” Queenie whispered, looking shaken, “We came here, since it seemed pretty safe and far away...”
“And we probably won’t be leaving for a while... Sorry,” Arya said.
“It’s fine,” Pandee said, “Besides, while you’re here at Micro Battles, we can help you guys stay alive!”
“Yeah,” Evie agreed, “Even after what Pandee said, there are still LOTS of people out there who would happily target you.”
“Well?” Strel jumped up, pumping her fists, “Let’s get started!”
~
“AH!”
The scream shook me awake. I jumped out of bed, looking for where it could have came from.
I soon spotted a boy writhing on the floor.
Hmm… should I help him? I dunno, I mean I wanna go to bed...
That’s when I saw the purple gooiness on my arm. I gasped, then ran over to him.
Just as I suspected. Another victim of the virus.
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YEEEEE SPOOPYYYY
I feel like I ruin the spoopiness of these chapters by saying “ISH SO SPOOPY” at the end xD
Well anyway da reason Im so good at cave stuff is becoz in case you didnt know my ign is MagicMINER684 so .3.
YEE AND MR. BIGNOSE AND WORLD VIEW ARE IN DIS TOO DONT JUDGE ;3
Previous chapter- https://brokenlens.xyz/forums/threads/broken-ch-16.45196/
Next chapter- https://brokenlens.xyz/forums/threads/broken-ch-18.50683/
Here ya go after a million years of wait xD
----
The first thing I noticed was his nose.
WAT EVEN IT TOOK UP LIKE HALF HIS FACE.
I know what you’re probably thinking, Magic, you’re such an idiot! Why would you go headfirst into a spooky cave after a little teeny tiny furry flying thing?
WELL YOU DON’T UNDERSTAND. IT WAS SO CUTEEEE.
Cap was behind me, frozen in shock. He kinda looked a little pale from the lack of air, but I didn’t feel a thing so I don’t know what bothered him.
Oh yeah, the player in front of us.
He looked really weird. His head was twice the size of a normal player’s head— very tall and rectangular. He wore purple clothes, with his arms crossed in front of him. The furry thing landed on his shoulder, and squeaked something to him.
Then the weirdest thing happened. The player laughed.
He laughed for what seemed like forever. I waved my hand in front of his face, “Umm, Mr. Person? You good?”
“Me? Good? Hahaha!” The player laughed, “I’m happy. Someone actually found me!”
“Found you?” Cap asked, “Wait, you aren’t a normal player, are you?”
“Nope,” The player said, “I’m Big Nose. Mr. Big Nose if you would. And NO BEFORE YOU LAUGH I did NOT choose that name.”
I tried REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY hard not to laugh.
“Wait so what’s that?” I pointed to the furry creature, who had buried its head in one of its wings.
“Oh this?” Mr. Big Nose, “This is my pet bat, World View. And no, I have no idea why THAT name out of all other names.”
Hmm. World View was a pretty weird name. I’ll just call him Fuzzy instead.
“I’ve been trying to find my way out of this cave for forever,” Mr. Big Nose continued, “I know we’re in QuakeCraft according to World View, but I have no idea how to get out.”
“Oh that’s easyyyyy, all you have to do it go up a few levels then turn right at the intersection and turn left again and keep going up then take a left then another left and yet another left and then a right then another right and a left and then you’re there!”
All three of them stared at me blankly.
“Y’know what, lemme just take you there.”
~
Fheo actually looked mad.
For the whole 48 hours or such that I’d known him, I’ve never seen any expression except the blank, quiet, stare he usually wore. Oh, and occasionally that flash of surprise he got when SkyWars went kaboom.
But never MAD.
We were up in the tower of this huge castle, intentionally away from everyone else. After that girl with the glasses— I think her name was Pandee— helped us go past, mostly everyone left us alone.
I said MOSTLY. Erin still kinda watched us, as if she still didn’t trust us.
There were 5 beds in this room. Queenie sat down on one of them. “Phew,” she said, “At least we’re away from all that attention.”
“I knowwww right,” I agreed. I could still feel those weird chills from loads of people’s eyes on me.
There was suddenly a short knock on the door. A half muffled voice said, “Can we come in?”
Fheo was instantly alert, standing upright when he heard the knock. But after he heard the voice, he slightly relaxed, though his eyes were still glued on the door.
We all shared a glance. Strel nodded, then said, “Sure, come on ahead.”
The door opened, and Pandee stepped in. With her was a girl with pink clothes and a half mask covering her face.
“Sorry about that,” Pandee said, closing the door behind her, “People here can be real jerks sometimes.”
“It’s fine,” Arya said, “We haven’t introduced ourselves though! I’m Arya.”
“I’m Queenie.”
“Strel.”
“Fheo.”
“Kiwi,” I said last.
“I’m Pandee.” Pandee said, and the girl next to her said, “Evie.”
“Why is your Legend aura so bright?” Strel asked.
“Probably because I’m first place,” Pandee grinned, then her smile faltered as she added, “Well there was someone else but...”
Fheo nodded in understanding, and Strel and Arya exchanged sympathetic glances.
“Well anyway, can you guys tell me HOW YOU CAME HERE?” Pandee’s eyes shined with excitement. “If there’s ANY way to get out of MB, I’d take it!”
“Me too!” Evie said, which was the first time I’d heard her speak since she said her name, “I saw you guys earlier... and when I saw your Legend auras, I found Pandee and we decided to visit you guys.”
“Well, have you guys heard about SkyWars?” I asked.
“Wait— you guys came from THERE?” Pandee asked incredulously, “We heard it was a death trap.”
“Yup,” Evie added, “Actually, recently a guy came from that game. He had this purple goop on his skin and no matter how we tried, we could never get it off. One day he woke up screaming. The goop had covered his entire body and he couldn’t breathe...”
I paled. Good thing the Portal hadn’t touched any of us.
“W-Well, we escaped from that game,” Queenie whispered, looking shaken, “We came here, since it seemed pretty safe and far away...”
“And we probably won’t be leaving for a while... Sorry,” Arya said.
“It’s fine,” Pandee said, “Besides, while you’re here at Micro Battles, we can help you guys stay alive!”
“Yeah,” Evie agreed, “Even after what Pandee said, there are still LOTS of people out there who would happily target you.”
“Well?” Strel jumped up, pumping her fists, “Let’s get started!”
~
“AH!”
The scream shook me awake. I jumped out of bed, looking for where it could have came from.
I soon spotted a boy writhing on the floor.
Hmm… should I help him? I dunno, I mean I wanna go to bed...
That’s when I saw the purple gooiness on my arm. I gasped, then ran over to him.
Just as I suspected. Another victim of the virus.
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YEEEEE SPOOPYYYY
I feel like I ruin the spoopiness of these chapters by saying “ISH SO SPOOPY” at the end xD
Well anyway da reason Im so good at cave stuff is becoz in case you didnt know my ign is MagicMINER684 so .3.
YEE AND MR. BIGNOSE AND WORLD VIEW ARE IN DIS TOO DONT JUDGE ;3
Previous chapter- https://brokenlens.xyz/forums/threads/broken-ch-16.45196/
Next chapter- https://brokenlens.xyz/forums/threads/broken-ch-18.50683/
>>Starring<<
Story told by- CakeTheDutchAD (Meh) as “Magic”
@Capitaine64 as “Cap”
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Story told by- @KaWaiIeH_Ao as “Kiwi”
@Fheonix as “Fheo”
@~GingerbreadSwirl~ as “Queenie”
@Strelitzia as “Strel”
@AryaTheDutchAD as “Arya”
Story told by- CakeTheDutchAD (Meh) as “Magic”
@Capitaine64 as “Cap”
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Story told by- @KaWaiIeH_Ao as “Kiwi”
@Fheonix as “Fheo”
@~GingerbreadSwirl~ as “Queenie”
@Strelitzia as “Strel”
@AryaTheDutchAD as “Arya”
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