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Broken- Ch. 13

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Congratulations Cake, another bad written chapter xD

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“Queenie you’re a genius!” Kiwi exclaimed.

I looked down at the side, disliking the attention. I mean, it was just a suggestion.

Not really an idea or anything.

And it certainly didn’t help the current situation.

My idea wasn’t that great… All I that I figured out was how weird Kiwi was acting after Strel had said she was her friend.

And then I wondered if it had to do with her Emerald rank…

“Okay then,” Kiwi said, “Cap, Fheo and Queenie, do you want to be friends?”

Fheo nodded, and Cap said, “Of course!”

“Sure,” I whispered.

Arya was still unconscious so that was kinda out of the question.

Kiwi stiffened and her eyes glowed white for a second. Then she steadied herself and smiled. “Yayyyy we’re all officially friends now!”

There was a faint screech in the distance. I looked up, peeking out the eye holes of my mask. I swear I could’ve seen some of the Portal, but perhaps it was just my imagination.

“Guyssss!” Magic flew up towards up suddenly. “There’s only one team left: Green! Once Hermy and Lucky win, we can get out of here.”

“Oh um but we might want to split up…” I said quietly, “Just so no one gets lost..?”

Fheo nodded. “Good idea. How should we do this?”

“I have some strength left,” Cap said, “Not so sure about Arya though.”

“H-Huh?” Arya lifted her head, “Where am I…”

“Oh YAY you’re awake!” Strel dropped Arya promptly, as she looked at her surroundings.

“Is this… SkyWars?” She said incredulously, “But-”

“Nupe, this is Team SkyWars,” Magic said, “Also hai I’m Magic, Kiwi’s friend. Basically we’re waiting from those two” she pointed at Lucky and Hermy, “to win so we can get outta here.”

“Nice to meet you!” She smiled slightly, already seeming to be gaining her strength. “But… can one of you fill me in please?”

Strel started explaining, then Kiwi took over explaining my plan for us to keep in touch, also telling her about the weird mind-reading-type-thing incidents that happened when someone accepted her as her friend.

I felt the ground tremble slightly. “Guys…? I think we might be running out of time…”

“Well if this is the same as SkyWars, we should be able to take Lucky and Hermy and go.” Cap said.

Magic was the first to rush off. She waved her arms at Hermy, who looked at her like she couldn’t believe what was happening.

“No time to explain gaiz! Grab my hand, we’re going to another game!”

The roar was getting louder, filling up my ears. I resisted the urge to cover them and went over with Strel, Kiwi, Fheo and Arya.

“No time to make groups, we have to go as it is!” Strel shouted, “Take us into the Portal!”

I looked back, just in time to see Magic, Lucky, Hermy and Cap disappear with a flash of bright light.

Fheo nodded, looking intently at Arya and I. Soon, the world swirled around us and we were in the Portal once again.

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The sun shone.

I looked at my surroundings. News had spread, and unfortunately what Xbam had said was true.

Two games, gone.

I stared at my arm, looking at my getting-brighter-everyday faint Legend aura.

Even so, I wasn’t going waste my life sitting her waiting to be destroyed.

I was going to see what was going on-- with or without my friends.

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I SWEAR IT GETS BETTER MKAY? xD
(Psst MB and OITC are next ;3; perhaps Quake too)
O yah also if there's more than 5 people in a chapter Im tagging them by 5s .3. Because chu dont get an alert if chu tag more den 5 peeps

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>>Starring<<
Story told by- @~GingerbreadSwirl~ as "Queenie"
CakeTheDutchAD (Me) as "Magic"
@KaWaiIeH_Ao as "Kiwi"
@Capitaine64 as "Cap"
@AryaTheDutchAD as "Arya"
@LuckyTheDutchAD as "Lucky"
 
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"Another badly written chapter." Can't be "another" if there was never one in the first place. Also can't be "another" if the chapter in question is AMAZING. :p
Nu nu its baddd xD Well compared to some of the others in my opinion
Pretty good! Just don't space between every single line, ya know? Group the different sentences of about 4-7 in paragraphs and then space between them. That's just the format, the overall text is great!
Ty ^^ I'll try to do wat chu said .3.
YAYAYAYAYAY OITC NEXT (or soon)
.3. =D
Omg I'm just so fabulous..

Also this is a good chapter
Yush Kaddy ish le best ;3
:O What will I do next xD
DUN DUN DUN *insert dramatic music* xD
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