Cakeyy
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YAYYYY I'M FINALLY DONE KINDA!
(If you're wondering wat the heck dis is lookie hereeee --> https://brokenlens.xyz/forums/threads/brokenlens-story-coming-soon-closed.33756/
NOTE- This story takes place a while back. Some people might have ranks they don't have, or have lost their place on the leaderboard. Also, some people might have changed their names, and be called by another name. I am referred to as "Magic" (Look at my Minecraft Username ;-; )
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You can probably imagine my surprise when I woke up.
A girl was leaning over me. She had orange-ish hair, and one of her eyes was purple and the other was blue. She had rainbows puking out of her mouth.
She grinned, "Hai Magic."
"Wha-? Oh hai Kiwi," I sat up, shaking myself.
We were in a sandstone building along with many other people who were waking up. Since everyone there was a Hider, someone came up with the name "Hider’s Fort". I guess it kinda stuck, since that’s what everyone called it. A few of the people there I hadn’t seen before, but some of them were Legends, like Kiwi and I.
Suddenly, everyone started getting really transparent, kinda like ghosts. Then blocks started appearing at peoples' feet, and, trust me, this is the weird part. When you jump, the block jumps, and when you move, the block moves. Also, your body kinda goes through the block, which is weird, but then again you’re 99% transparent so…
ANYWAY, a melon block appeared a Kiwi's feet and a glass block appeared at mine.
"C'mon glass again?" I complained, "But I got dat yesterday too!"
"We can just hide in the pyramid again," Kiwi said, "I'm guessing it’s the desert map." She pointed at the sandstone walls.
Oh yeah. The Hider’s Fort also changed every day according to the map.
The sandstone walls started crumbling, then they fell down. Sure enough, the landscape was all sand, with a few cacti and tiny streams. There were many other sandstone buildings. and steep mountains surrounded the "desert".
"C'mon! Before the seekers come out!" I ran towards a triangular shaped sandstone building. There was a giaaaant tree growing out of the middle, and its leaves were spread all over the top of the pyramid so it looked like the pyramid had a big, green wig.
We hid deep in the leaves, where the seekers rarely looked. After a few seconds, Kiwi became solid, which meant she looked like a regular melon block. I bet I looked like a bootiful glass block as well.
"Welp," Kiwi’s voice came from the melon block, "Another regular day of Hide and Seek I guess."
"Not if we escape," I pointed out.
"Well yeah, but how are we going to do that?"
"I dunno," I said, sitting down and putting my head in knees.
Recently, (well no one actually knew but we’re PRETTY sure it was recently) Hub broke down. Hub was basically that ONE place where you could ACTUALLY go on different games. I mean c'mon! The ONE place where you could switch games, and it had to break. No one’s actually sure how Hub broke, because everyone’s memories were wiped out. I asked literally EVERYONE and they’re all like “Oh, everytime I try to think about what happened before Hub, my memory gets all weird and fuzzy and BLAH BLAH BLAH.” (Well it’s the same thing for me, but ok.)
Aaaanyway, after Hub broke, all these weird things started happening. Like, when people died, they STAYED dead. Usually when someone died, we’d all be like “Oh no! He’s dead! Oh wait, I just remembered he’ll be back in a few days. Nevermindd…” And now we’re like, “OH NO HE’S DEAD! Wait he’s gonna come back- WAIT NO I JUST REMEMBERED THAT EVERYTHING’S SCREWED UP NOW SO HE’S DEAD FOREVER NUUUUUU.”
Yep that’s basically life now.
Oh yeah ALSO, Legends (like me and Kiwi), were trapped in our games forever! It wasn’t fair, I mean, just cause Kiwi and I were pros at HS, basically meant we had to spent the rest of our lives running from seekers and hiding. And trust me it can get BORINGGGG.
And while I was busy thinking about life, Kiwi suddenly became un-solid and whispered, “"Magic, get ready."
"Wait whaaa?" I became un-solid too and poked my head out of the leaves. Two seekers were running at full speed at us. They were chasing an iron ore block, but when I squinted my eyes, I could see a girl with brown puffy hair and brown eyes. She had a black cloak-ish thing and a red and gold striped scarf.
"We gotta help her!" I turned to Kiwi.
Kiwi pursed her lips. "Fine, but ONLY if the swords come as soon as I finish this sentence."
Of course, a sword and a orange stick appeared in her hands after she said that.
"Yay!" I grinned and held up my own stick and sword, while Kiwi facepalmed herself.
I ran out into the open, waving my arms like a deformed chicken. "HEY SEEKERS! COME AND GET ME! I’LL BE SOOO MUCH EASIER TO CATCH THAN THE OTHER BLOCK CAUSE I’M NOT MOVING AT ALLLLL!"
Both seekers turned their heads.
Maaaybe this wasn’t such a good idea…
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YES, I know this sucks. But hey, I can tell you one thing: it gets better.
PLEASE don't reply to this saying "OH THIS STORY SUCKS AND SHOULD DIE IN A HOLE! HAHAHHAHAH!" I mean, at least give me an actual reason why it sucks. Also, BEAR WITH ME PLEZZ! Chapters will be uploaded at least once every week.
(Also gimme an award for the best original title xD ISH GREAT)
Previous "chapter"- https://brokenlens.xyz/forums/threads/brokenlens-story-coming-soon-closed.33756/
Next chapter- https://brokenlens.xyz/forums/threads/broken-ch-2.38709/#post-327992
(If you're wondering wat the heck dis is lookie hereeee --> https://brokenlens.xyz/forums/threads/brokenlens-story-coming-soon-closed.33756/
NOTE- This story takes place a while back. Some people might have ranks they don't have, or have lost their place on the leaderboard. Also, some people might have changed their names, and be called by another name. I am referred to as "Magic" (Look at my Minecraft Username ;-; )
----
You can probably imagine my surprise when I woke up.
A girl was leaning over me. She had orange-ish hair, and one of her eyes was purple and the other was blue. She had rainbows puking out of her mouth.
She grinned, "Hai Magic."
"Wha-? Oh hai Kiwi," I sat up, shaking myself.
We were in a sandstone building along with many other people who were waking up. Since everyone there was a Hider, someone came up with the name "Hider’s Fort". I guess it kinda stuck, since that’s what everyone called it. A few of the people there I hadn’t seen before, but some of them were Legends, like Kiwi and I.
Suddenly, everyone started getting really transparent, kinda like ghosts. Then blocks started appearing at peoples' feet, and, trust me, this is the weird part. When you jump, the block jumps, and when you move, the block moves. Also, your body kinda goes through the block, which is weird, but then again you’re 99% transparent so…
ANYWAY, a melon block appeared a Kiwi's feet and a glass block appeared at mine.
"C'mon glass again?" I complained, "But I got dat yesterday too!"
"We can just hide in the pyramid again," Kiwi said, "I'm guessing it’s the desert map." She pointed at the sandstone walls.
Oh yeah. The Hider’s Fort also changed every day according to the map.
The sandstone walls started crumbling, then they fell down. Sure enough, the landscape was all sand, with a few cacti and tiny streams. There were many other sandstone buildings. and steep mountains surrounded the "desert".
"C'mon! Before the seekers come out!" I ran towards a triangular shaped sandstone building. There was a giaaaant tree growing out of the middle, and its leaves were spread all over the top of the pyramid so it looked like the pyramid had a big, green wig.
We hid deep in the leaves, where the seekers rarely looked. After a few seconds, Kiwi became solid, which meant she looked like a regular melon block. I bet I looked like a bootiful glass block as well.
"Welp," Kiwi’s voice came from the melon block, "Another regular day of Hide and Seek I guess."
"Not if we escape," I pointed out.
"Well yeah, but how are we going to do that?"
"I dunno," I said, sitting down and putting my head in knees.
Recently, (well no one actually knew but we’re PRETTY sure it was recently) Hub broke down. Hub was basically that ONE place where you could ACTUALLY go on different games. I mean c'mon! The ONE place where you could switch games, and it had to break. No one’s actually sure how Hub broke, because everyone’s memories were wiped out. I asked literally EVERYONE and they’re all like “Oh, everytime I try to think about what happened before Hub, my memory gets all weird and fuzzy and BLAH BLAH BLAH.” (Well it’s the same thing for me, but ok.)
Aaaanyway, after Hub broke, all these weird things started happening. Like, when people died, they STAYED dead. Usually when someone died, we’d all be like “Oh no! He’s dead! Oh wait, I just remembered he’ll be back in a few days. Nevermindd…” And now we’re like, “OH NO HE’S DEAD! Wait he’s gonna come back- WAIT NO I JUST REMEMBERED THAT EVERYTHING’S SCREWED UP NOW SO HE’S DEAD FOREVER NUUUUUU.”
Yep that’s basically life now.
Oh yeah ALSO, Legends (like me and Kiwi), were trapped in our games forever! It wasn’t fair, I mean, just cause Kiwi and I were pros at HS, basically meant we had to spent the rest of our lives running from seekers and hiding. And trust me it can get BORINGGGG.
And while I was busy thinking about life, Kiwi suddenly became un-solid and whispered, “"Magic, get ready."
"Wait whaaa?" I became un-solid too and poked my head out of the leaves. Two seekers were running at full speed at us. They were chasing an iron ore block, but when I squinted my eyes, I could see a girl with brown puffy hair and brown eyes. She had a black cloak-ish thing and a red and gold striped scarf.
"We gotta help her!" I turned to Kiwi.
Kiwi pursed her lips. "Fine, but ONLY if the swords come as soon as I finish this sentence."
Of course, a sword and a orange stick appeared in her hands after she said that.
"Yay!" I grinned and held up my own stick and sword, while Kiwi facepalmed herself.
I ran out into the open, waving my arms like a deformed chicken. "HEY SEEKERS! COME AND GET ME! I’LL BE SOOO MUCH EASIER TO CATCH THAN THE OTHER BLOCK CAUSE I’M NOT MOVING AT ALLLLL!"
Both seekers turned their heads.
Maaaybe this wasn’t such a good idea…
----
YES, I know this sucks. But hey, I can tell you one thing: it gets better.
PLEASE don't reply to this saying "OH THIS STORY SUCKS AND SHOULD DIE IN A HOLE! HAHAHHAHAH!" I mean, at least give me an actual reason why it sucks. Also, BEAR WITH ME PLEZZ! Chapters will be uploaded at least once every week.
(Also gimme an award for the best original title xD ISH GREAT)
Previous "chapter"- https://brokenlens.xyz/forums/threads/brokenlens-story-coming-soon-closed.33756/
Next chapter- https://brokenlens.xyz/forums/threads/broken-ch-2.38709/#post-327992
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