Bow Spleef Map

[DemonTran]

Finally..
Build by: Only Me
Time: 2:30 Hours

http:///www.mediafire.com/folder/22wx4x07fy3b2ry,h43iacndxn9i
@Woona

 

[KingOfBroken1]

It's really Good! But... Just decorate the wall a little and add some lights...

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[Jxden_]

Because playing in the dark is fun

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[windexx]

Cool Map!
I have a few concerns though, and these might be helpful because I play Bow spleef ALOT!
First...Like all the other maps, They need a spectating area thing.
Second...The walls need more depth and detail
Third...I have a concern about lighting
Fourth... I think it's also way to big.
let me tag some people and see thier opinions...
@Builderwither @Diavent @ViperXlink

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[mosquito1244210]

Because playing in the dark is fun

No it isn't

A ghost can come and scare u

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[KingOfBroken1]

Because playing in the dark is fun

No it isn't

A ghost can come and scare u

I agree with Mos.

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[windexx]

Also...I realized something. how are you going to fall when your just going to hit the ground. When I say this, i mean that you need to build it up higher OR just take out the land with a command or something/

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[DemonTran]

It's really Good! But... Just decorate the wall a little and add some lights...

thank u!

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[Builderwither]

Finally..
Build by: Only Me
Time: 2:30 Hours
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@Woona

i can't download it but as i see on the pictures :

-theres not enough light
-thats not detailled at all

Add more details , details are the soul of a build

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[DemonTran]

i can't download it but as i see on the pictures :

-theres not enough light
-thats not detailled at all

Add more details , details are the soul of a build

Okay I'll work later

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[Jxden_]

No it isn't

A ghost can come and scare u

issa joke

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[DemonTran]

@Builderwither thank u for ur answer lol

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[Builderwither]

@Builderwither thank u for ur answer lol

its okay don't worry

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[SugaCube]

Uhh, I have a question. Why is it blocked off all around? In the bowspleef maps you can see sunlight which provides the light. :3


Idk don’t judge me xD

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[mosquito1244210]

issa joke

That's why I said that xD

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[DemonTran]

i can't download it but as i see on the pictures :

-theres not enough light
-thats not detailled at all

Add more details , details are the soul of a build

Is It Better Now? But How To Download It On MediaFire?

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[Diavent]

There are some major improvements you can add into your map.

First one being detail...
1) Right now the walls are very flat and it’s just 100% plain stone. What I would reccommend is putting in some wall details into the wall so then it isn’t just flat stone.
2) Add in a block palette so it isn’t just stone, perhaps add some logs or vines (for a ruin feel)

Another one is what many others have pointed out which is lighting... Well, if you put in detailed walls, what you can do is make the background of the details have glowstone or sea lanterns behind them. It lights up the area, but it also hides it.

And of course, you need to have a void underneath the last layer. Otherwise people would still be alive and the game would never end xD

Hopefully I gave you some tips on how to improve it and that you’ll take them into consideration! Good luck with your map!

@ToxicFloof Opinions? xD

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[DemonTran]

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There are some major improvements you can add into your map.

First one being detail...
1) Right now the walls are very flat and it’s just 100% plain stone. What I would reccommend is putting in some wall details into the wall so then it isn’t just flat stone.
2) Add in a block palette so it isn’t just stone, perhaps add some logs or vines (for a ruin feel)

Another one is what many others have pointed out which is lighting... Well, if you put in detailed walls, what you can do is make the background of the details have glowstone or sea lanterns behind them. It lights up the area, but it also hides it.

And of course, you need to have a void underneath the last layer. Otherwise people would still be alive and the game would never end xD

Hopefully I gave you some tips on how to improve it and that you’ll take them into consideration! Good luck with your map!

@ToxicFloof Opinions? xD

have otherwise lol

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[DemonTran]

There are some major improvements you can add into your map.

First one being detail...
1) Right now the walls are very flat and it’s just 100% plain stone. What I would reccommend is putting in some wall details into the wall so then it isn’t just flat stone.
2) Add in a block palette so it isn’t just stone, perhaps add some logs or vines (for a ruin feel)

Another one is what many others have pointed out which is lighting... Well, if you put in detailed walls, what you can do is make the background of the details have glowstone or sea lanterns behind them. It lights up the area, but it also hides it.

And of course, you need to have a void underneath the last layer. Otherwise people would still be alive and the game would never end xD

Hopefully I gave you some tips on how to improve it and that you’ll take them into consideration! Good luck with your map!

@ToxicFloof Opinions? xD

now im done

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[DemonTran]

There are some major improvements you can add into your map.

First one being detail...
1) Right now the walls are very flat and it’s just 100% plain stone. What I would reccommend is putting in some wall details into the wall so then it isn’t just flat stone.
2) Add in a block palette so it isn’t just stone, perhaps add some logs or vines (for a ruin feel)

Another one is what many others have pointed out which is lighting... Well, if you put in detailed walls, what you can do is make the background of the details have glowstone or sea lanterns behind them. It lights up the area, but it also hides it.

And of course, you need to have a void underneath the last layer. Otherwise people would still be alive and the game would never end xD

Hopefully I gave you some tips on how to improve it and that you’ll take them into consideration! Good luck with your map!

@ToxicFloof Opinions? xD

In ur reply I added those things. Im ready!

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