Before School + You- Chapitre 2

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Chapter 2- Cold Clues

Strel was speechless and disgusted. Emotions mixed through the inside of her body, not knowing how to feel about this incident

"That's not how we wanted to go" the chilling voice from behind repeats itself.
Strel turned around, but nobody was near here. The only thing she saw in front of her was a sea of angry faces, with disgusting words spitting out of their mouth.
"Maybe if you would've thought of it before doing so, none of this would have happened." The principal whispers softly to her ear.

Strel was about to make a run for it, but it was too late. The police were already surrounding here with their heavy metal guns point straight towards Strel.
A few minutes later, Strel was in cuffs and sent into the police car, where everyone in the school stood on the high school entrance, looking disappointed at Strel as they drove her away.

Strel laid her hand on the bars of the window car, looking at Ang bursting into tears, on her knees, dropping her books onto the ground as she saw me disappear into the distance.

"Looks like she won't be getting out anytime soon" A guy covered in orange and yellow paint on his face laughs at Ang as he takes off.
Before entering, Ang shouts "Take a look at your face before talking," after finishing, the front door closes.

* * * * *

"MOM!" Ang comes kicking the door to her house with tears running down her cheeks.
"Strel... she's behind bars!" Without hesitation, she jumped onto her mothers' hands. "Woah, what happened...?"

Days past.

"The day might still be young." Ang marks a black line on each side of her face with a marker.
"But today," she pulls out her machete from her back pocket, "is not one of those days to let go as that my name is Ang and I was born to solve crimes."
She puts on her bandana around her head, swoops out of her front window, landing on her feet in the middle of the car on the sidewalk.
"It's time."

"Why are you so dressed up for school?" Harold complains to her, picking out his materials from his locker.
"Why aren't you?" She talks back to him.
"I'm here for my revenge of my sister of getting arrested innocent and actually finding the criminal behind this disgusting mess." Ang spits next to the wild plant next to them.
Harold looks at her doing so, not saying anything about it.
"Hope you have a great day." Ang talks in a dark voice before taking off.

"Young lady." A tall man that looked like a science teacher from 10 grade came up to her, holding a math book on his hands.
"I'm afraid you can't be here." He looks directly into her eyes.
"Um, I can say the same to you too young man." She doesn't flinch. "Shouldn't you be teaching a class where your kids could care less about what you're teaching them?"

At that point, he became silent but started to threaten her. "Listen, young lady, if you don't get the hell out of my sight in 10 seconds, I promise you to make your school year a living nightmare." But Ang wasn't about to stick around hearing his useless threats.
"My dads a lawyer and he can get your as-" Ang was interrupted by the principle coming up to them.
Before he had a chance to spot her, Ang left in a dash out the backdoor.

"Why aren't you in class, Mr?" Mr. Shirm speaks to him.
"I'm sorry Mr, I'll be on my way."
And so, Mr. Shrim giving him a pat on the back as he heads for his science class.

"Lucky bàstard got lucky." Ang opens a marker with her mouth.
"But next time," She draws a devil symbol on her left arm, "there won't be a next time."
Before noticing, she poofed into thin air, leaving white dust behind.

. . .

"I'LL SAY IT AGAIN!" The police slammed his hands onto the metal table.
"WHY DID YOU DO IT!" She yells directly into Strel face.
"I-i'm telling you o-officer, I d-didn't do it." Strel bleeds from her mouth, even spit blood comes out of her mouth while having only one eye open.
"You really wanna test us, huh?" The police gave another strong punch towards Strel face, making her cough out blood.
"Take her to the cell, and bring her back when she's ready to talk." The commander laughs along with the police.

"I..." Strel whispered to herself but fainted before doing so.
Strel was thrown into a prison cell with no windows, not even the doors. Only a speck of light coming from the mini corners of the door.

"Angeyyy, Woah, you look new!" Bell tells Ang while holding around five books on her hands.
"What are yo-" But before Bell finished speaking, Ang pushed gently her index finger onto Bell's lips.
"Shhhh" is all she said before disappearing into the crowd.
"Well, I guess that's how my day is going to start." She whines as she heads into her next class, tripping in the entrance as she drops her books.
"Ugh."

Ang suddenly appeared to what seemed like a dark room where everything was kept for unused-use.
She looked around to see if she can have any clues into who could've killed Grizzly.
"There must be something in here." She went through papers and even some rats inside the boxes.

Ang was about to open the last box until she started to hear what seemed like sounds that she has heard before.
Ang turns invisible before the two kids teens opened the door.
"Careful Santa, the rat might come out." Miner replies.
"I am and watch yourself." Santa talks back to her.
"Excuse me?" Miner puts the box down on what appears to look like a lab table.
"YOU have no rights to talk to a girl like that." Miner starts to push Santa
"Guy! Cut the childish out!"

Ang turned back to normal but at the moment of the heat, she started to hear screaming out of the closest.
"A RAT!" She heard one of the kids scream as everyone got up on the table.

But Ang was facing her own problem as well. The boxes all stubbled all on her that with all the pressure, the door opened all the way, making her stumbled onto the last classroom she wanted to be.
"Oh no..." She looks at the guy she threatens to beat the life out.
"You..." He says back as he grabs a yard wide ruler.

.. .

"What the hel-" The principle spotted the white dust Ang left behind when she was fighting with the science teacher.

"Boy oh boy, will this be a great day." He smiled as he walks away.
-- - - - -
Character's;

@~Ang~
@Strel
@Haroldwp
@SwettyBell98
@Thedarkminer508
@ComplexSanta

One clue was left during the story.

If you find grammar issues, is because I didn't have time to edit, sorry
 
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Chapter 2- Cold Clues

Strel was speechless and disgusted. Emotions mixed through the inside of her body, not knowing how to feel about this incident

"That's not how we wanted to go" the chilling voice from behind repeats itself.
Strel turned around, but nobody was near here. The only thing she saw in front of her was a sea of angry faces, with disgusting words spitting out of their mouth.
"Maybe if you would've thought of it before doing so, none of this would have happened." The principal whispers softly to her ear.

Strel was about to make a run for it, but it was too late. The police were already surrounding here with their heavy metal guns point straight towards Strel.
A few minutes later, Strel was in cuffs and sent into the police car, where everyone in the school stood on the high school entrance, looking disappointed at Strel as they drove her away.

Strel laid her hand on the bars of the window car, looking at Ang bursting into tears, on her knees, dropping her books onto the ground as she saw me disappear into the distance.

"Looks like she won't be getting out anytime soon" A guy covered in orange and yellow paint on his face laughs at Ang as he takes off.
Before entering, Ang shouts "Take a look at your face before talking," after finishing, the front door closes.

* * * * *

"MOM!" Ang comes kicking the door to her house with tears running down her cheeks.
"Strel... she's behind bars!" Without hesitation, she jumped onto her mothers' hands. "Woah, what happened...?"

Days past.

"The day might still be young." Ang marks a black line on each side of her face with a marker.
"But today," she pulls out her machete from her back pocket, "is not one of those days to let go as that my name is Ang and I was born to solve crimes."
She puts on her bandana around her head, swoops out of her front window, landing on her feet in the middle of the car on the sidewalk.
"It's time."

"Why are you so dressed up for school?" Harold complains to her, picking out his materials from his locker.
"Why aren't you?" She talks back to him.
"I'm here for my revenge of my sister of getting arrested innocent and actually finding the criminal behind this disgusting mess." Ang spits next to the wild plant next to them.
Harold looks at her doing so, not saying anything about it.
"Hope you have a great day." Ang talks in a dark voice before taking off.

"Young lady." A tall man that looked like a science teacher from 10 grade came up to her, holding a math book on his hands.
"I'm afraid you can't be here." He looks directly into her eyes.
"Um, I can say the same to you too young man." She doesn't flinch. "Shouldn't you be teaching a class where your kids could care less about what you're teaching them?"

At that point, he became silent but started to threaten her. "Listen, young lady, if you don't get the hell out of my sight in 10 seconds, I promise you to make your school year a living nightmare." But Ang wasn't about to stick around hearing his useless threats.
"My dads a lawyer and he can get your as-" Ang was interrupted by the principle coming up to them.
Before he had a chance to spot her, Ang left in a dash out the backdoor.

"Why aren't you in class, Mr?" Mr. Shirm speaks to him.
"I'm sorry Mr, I'll be on my way."
And so, Mr. Shrim giving him a pat on the back as he heads for his science class.

"Lucky bàstard got lucky." Ang opens a marker with her mouth.
"But next time," She draws a devil symbol on her left arm, "there won't be a next time."
Before noticing, she poofed into thin air, leaving white dust behind.

. . .

"I'LL SAY IT AGAIN!" The police slammed his hands onto the metal table.
"WHY DID YOU DO IT!" She yells directly into Strel face.
"I-i'm telling you o-officer, I d-didn't do it." Strel bleeds from her mouth, even spit blood comes out of her mouth while having only one eye open.
"You really wanna test us, huh?" The police gave another strong punch towards Strel face, making her cough out blood.
"Take her to the cell, and bring her back when she's ready to talk." The commander laughs along with the police.

"I..." Strel whispered to herself but fainted before doing so.
Strel was thrown into a prison cell with no windows, not even the doors. Only a speck of light coming from the mini corners of the door.

"Angeyyy, Woah, you look new!" Bell tells Ang while holding around five books on her hands.
"What are yo-" But before Bell finished speaking, Ang pushed gently her index finger onto Bell's lips.
"Shhhh" is all she said before disappearing into the crowd.
"Well, I guess that's how my day is going to start." She whines as she heads into her next class, tripping in the entrance as she drops her books.
"Ugh."

Ang suddenly appeared to what seemed like a dark room where everything was kept for unused-use.
She looked around to see if she can have any clues into who could've killed Grizzly.
"There must be something in here." She went through papers and even some rats inside the boxes.

Ang was about to open the last box until she started to hear what seemed like sounds that she has heard before.
Ang turns invisible before the two kids teens opened the door.
"Careful Santa, the rat might come out." Miner replies.
"I am and watch yourself." Santa talks back to her.
"Excuse me?" Miner puts the box down on what appears to look like a lab table.
"YOU have no rights to talk to a girl like that." Miner starts to push Santa
"Guy! Cut the childish out!"

Ang turned back to normal but at the moment of the heat, she started to hear screaming out of the closest.
"A RAT!" She heard one of the kids scream as everyone got up on the table.

But Ang was facing her own problem as well. The boxes all stubbled all on her that with all the pressure, the door opened all the way, making her stumbled onto the last classroom she wanted to be.
"Oh no..." She looks at the guy she threatens to beat the life out.
"You..." He says back as he grabs a yard wide ruler.

.. .

"What the hel-" The principle spotted the white dust Ang left behind when she was fighting with the science teacher.

"Boy oh boy, will this be a great day." He smiled as he walks away.
-- - - - -
Character's;

@~Ang~
@Strel
@Haroldwp
@SwettyBell98
@Thedarkminer508
@ComplexSanta

One clue was left during the story.
Wait are we like allowed to like guess the clue?
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Well I didn't really find the clue but I did find some spelling errors XD!

Paragraph 3 Sentence 2 - "Here" instead of her.

Paragraph 11 Sentence 4 - "Principle" instead of principal.

But who tf cares great story!
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Well I didn't really find the clue but I did find some spelling errors XD!

Paragraph 3 Sentence 2 - "Here" instead of her.

Paragraph 11 Sentence 4 - "Principle" instead of principal.

But who tf cares great story!
I didn't have time to edit, sorry lol
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Well I didn't really find the clue but I did find some spelling errors XD!

Paragraph 3 Sentence 2 - "Here" instead of her.

Paragraph 11 Sentence 4 - "Principle" instead of principal.

But who tf cares great story!
Bad word child :0
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I'm NoT a ChIlD i"M oNlY 7 mOnThS aNd 11 DaYs YoUnGeR tHaN yOu.
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I didn't know you can spawn into the world
Well... fine. STAFF I HAD TO EXPLAIN.

Alright, so the opposite gender of mine, normally expect for 9 months. 11 - 9 = 2, which is February in month code. That means I would have technically come around February- early March. That's the only way I could explain it xD
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