Autumn House: A SkyWars Map (v2)

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Map Name: The Autumn House
Game: Sky Wars/Team Sky Wars
Built By: superpi2

Changes:
  • The tress were made to look more realistic
  • More details were added to the exterior of the house (siding and roof)
  • All carpet was replaced with wool
  • Added course dirt in the middle island
  • Remade the house entrance walkways

Its been almost four months since I posted version 1 of this map (https://brokenlens.xyz/forums/threads/the-autumn-house-a-skywars-map-v1.89429/). Since then I realized that I could be better at making maps to submit, so I spent a lot of time away from submitting maps and worked on my command block maps. Since then, I believe I have improved in my map-making abilities, and would like to start fixing my old maps and uploading new ones to the Map Submission page.

The concept of the map is still the same, so I'm just going to copy/paste from the first submission:

Hello everyone! I would have built a winter-season map but we already have one of those so I chose autumn because it's colorful.
This map contains a number of colorful trees, all that surround a fall-themed house. There are few chests in the attic of the house to encourage people to go inside, as well as chests positioned at the four corners of the middle island for people who don't feel like going inside.
Each outer island has a tree and a pile of leaves that, after "jumping in", leads players to the underground ore area (I made sure there were plenty of ores to mine).

Thank you for taking a look at my map! Feedback is appreciated :)

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Really Nice Map , But I would add more landscaping at the bottom of the island/ make it looks bigger , and Brokenlens doesnt accept any 1.10 Blocks so
I suggest you to remove them :) I'll tag some Builders for you so the can suggest you to add or remove something @AllyMac_ @_TrenzK_ @KhrizKGM @ZoeyLynne @Alfarizi
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remove 1.14.11 blocks?
and add more details
like the ground u can add buttons and cobble stones
add more stuff (like logs)at mid

and it seems u didnt put a lot of work to ur normal island cuz there is bunch of random colored wools thats look like a falling leaf
u could've add lot of things related to ur map
im not offending u
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BeastlygamerXZ said:
Why do people who steal maps keep giving advice??
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It's Stole, they learned their lesson.

Also about the map
Its pretty nice, i suggest making the center a bit bigger and giving the house more details like Window Framing and a chimney. Overall looks pretty solid :)
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dist said:
How come the people that steal maps actually give advice and that one builder not give any advice?
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Omfg, I literally snorted when I read that- it sounded very attractive!

Pi- I agree with Eriel that you should do more to the bottom of the islands. You can make them go down further. More like an ice cream cone shape if that makes sense. Randomize the blocks under your islands. Stone/cobble/andesite/gravel/ores etc.
I will post a pic of a tree later so you can see one similar to yours but a bit more realistic. I would also change the cobble cornerboards and crossbeams to a log of some sort (spruce maybe). Cute map, could use a few more tweaks.
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