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[ProCandle729]

I Try So Hard To Create This Map

What Your Best Answer To Name This Map

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[Lanima]

I really felt like using this video because I wanted to be honest, but I didn't want to feel rude:



It's, not a bad map but there's a ton of blocky islands. The trees for their length should be either shorter or custom designed. Some details feel asymmetrical and others are, plain. Diavent already said it in another thread but the color pallete here is dull.

I can see what it would look like if these suggestions were applied, but I'm not very reliable when it comes to critique.

It's, not a bad map but there's a ton of blocky islands. The trees for their length should be either shorter or custom designed. Some details feel asymmetrical and others are, plain. Diavent already said it in another thread but the color pallete here is dull.

I can see what it would look like if these suggestions were applied, but I'm not very reliable when it comes to critique.

That got Off-Topic fast

*this came from a man who can build but doesn't look like he can build

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[karmatic]

I really felt like using this video because I wanted to be honest, but I didn't want to feel rude:



It's, not a bad map but there's a ton of blocky islands. The trees for their length should be either shorter or custom designed. Some details feel asymmetrical and others are, plain. Diavent already said it in another thread but the color pallete here is dull.

I can see what it would look like if these suggestions were applied, but I'm not very reliable when it comes to critique.

oml the vid xd

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[ZoeyLynne]

Many islands are different sizes, some close together, some far. It would look better if they were all evenly spaced, at the least 10 blocks away from each other. The islands are also very..rectangle-ish..they should look like how the other sw maps look. I would really recommend making custom trees. The park benches could use more detail. The whole map could use some more color.

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[Lanima]

The islands are also very..rectangle-ish

You mean, too organic?

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[ZoeyLynne]

You mean, too organic?

Ye or that xD

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[superpi2]

I agree, it could use a little bit more detail on the islands. The sunflower bed design looked pretty good, however.
I would recommend adding stone as the material under the grass of the islands to match the ores, instead of just dirt. Making the trees a tiny bit shorter and/or relocating them on the outer islands may help fix the asymmetry.

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[SlayCC]

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[B3N]

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^^

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