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A Vision Down The Drain

Cyber45

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Hey guys, so... I saw the downhill in shattered dimensions.

Things were gonna be light hearted, unique, interesting. BUT IT'S IN THE GARBAGE NOW.

The last chapter ended in a twist I liked, rage inside me burned with the feedback.
Chapters 1, 2 and 3 were not agreeing with me. I HATED IT. I HATED EVERY SECOND OF IT. But it turns out I might just stop writing and quit BL. But how ever I am giving it one last shot, and to explain what is REALLY happening, I might just explain it through my head

Unit who was another one of Alex's friend was working on his writing, Alex was given the nick name "Hard Drive" (Cyber was an alternate) for his engineering skills. Alex, Lauren, Rainbow, Pork and the others were then wanting to join the Dimensional Guardians. (Who they never met.) He then stumbles upon Matt (Sound familiar?) who was familiar with the gang. He then warned about an attack that the Life Empire was planning on. Alex and the gang had then stumbled upon the guardians and joined forces to take down the Life Empire, before they destroy the Broken Lens' Shattered Dimension

Just let me try something new, I am begging you. I am not some robot who makes random things, and if all I get is nothing. I have no choice but to leave broken lens and start a new life. Scrap down TLB, Music, and just forget about everything. I don't have the words to further explain this situation, but I feel heartbroken about this.

I just wanted to get this off my chest, because people don't understand that for only one man it is a lot of work to make one thing. Thank you if you're trying to help me, but at this stage... it may not be enough.
 
Hey guys, so... I saw the downhill in shattered dimensions.

Things were gonna be light hearted, unique, interesting. BUT IT'S IN THE GARBAGE NOW.

The last chapter ended in a twist I liked, rage inside me burned with the feedback.
Chapters 1, 2 and 3 were not agreeing with me. I HATED IT. I HATED EVERY SECOND OF IT. But it turns out I might just stop writing and quit BL. But how ever I am giving it one last shot, and to explain what is REALLY happening, I might just explain it through my head

Unit who was another one of Alex's friend was working on his writing, Alex was given the nick name "Hard Drive" (Cyber was an alternate) for his engineering skills. Alex, Lauren, Rainbow, Pork and the others were then wanting to join the Dimensional Guardians. (Who they never met.) He then stumbles upon Matt (Sound familiar?) who was familiar with the gang. He then warned about an attack that the Life Empire was planning on. Alex and the gang had then stumbled upon the guardians and joined forces to take down the Life Empire, before they destroy the Broken Lens' Shattered Dimension

Just let me try something new, I am begging you. I am not some robot who makes random things, and if all I get is nothing. I have no choice but to leave broken lens and start a new life. Scrap down TLB, Music, and just forget about everything. I don't have the words to further explain this situation, but I feel heartbroken about this.

I just wanted to get this off my chest, because people don't understand that for only one man it is a lot of work to make one thing. Thank you if you're trying to help me, but at this stage... it may not be enough.
Cyber. Calm down, and read what you just wrote.

Of course all of us will allow you to try something new. To begin from the start again. And what do you mean, you have no choice? You are the one who decides which path you go through, not us. If you really want to quit, and there's no way to convince you to stay, then fine. I'll accept it and let you go. But, quitting over a story? Listen to yourself Cyber, does that sound even slightly logical? No.

The Lost Builders. I didn't read it, but I know what to expect - amazingness. Your writing may not be the best, but it's still great. You shouldn't give TLB up, I'm sure it would make an astounding masterpiece of a story, if you just worked hard enough.

Your music? Don't scrap it, it is amazing. Do you know how much I love your music, how much I admire you? Well, I do, a lot. If you stop making music, I'd be not only sad, but disappointed. Disappointed that you stopped just because of something so small, so unimportant.

You cannot forget everything, no matter how you try. It is all set in your mind and you cannot erase any of it. Everything that has happened in your life will stay in your mind, your heart, your soul, even if you don't acknowledge it all.

I understand. It's a lot of pressure, to get it all out in time. To not disappoint anyone. I've written stories before too. It's hard. I've given you time and space, but it is up to you to use it properly.
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Cyber. Calm down, and read what you just wrote.

Of course all of us will allow you to try something new. To begin from the start again. And what do you mean, you have no choice? You are the one who decides which path you go through, not us. If you really want to quit, and there's no way to convince you to stay, then fine. I'll accept it and let you go. But, quitting over a story? Listen to yourself Cyber, does that sound even slightly logical? No.

The Lost Builders. I didn't read it, but I know what to expect - amazingness. Your writing may not be the best, but it's still great. You shouldn't give TLB up, I'm sure it would make an astounding masterpiece of a story, if you just worked hard enough.

Your music? Don't scrap it, it is amazing. Do you know how much I love your music, how much I admire you? Well, I do, a lot. If you stop making music, I'd be not only sad, but disappointed. Disappointed that you stopped just because of something so small, so unimportant.

You cannot forget everything, no matter how you try. It is all set in your mind and you cannot erase any of it. Everything that has happened in your life will stay in your mind, your heart, your soul, even if you don't acknowledge it all.

I understand. It's a lot of pressure, to get it all out in time. To not disappoint anyone. I've written stories before too. It's hard. I've given you time and space, but it is up to you to use it properly.
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WHAT SHE SAID!

*Runs*

*Falls on ♥♥♥*

(Inside joke between Lauren and I)
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