A New Tale: Chapter 1- "Flaring Emotions"

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In forums, before the first curse...

They were done. With everything.

All the villains were tired of not getting their "happy endings". They were villains, but all work and no play make Jack a dull boy, if you see in in their perspective. Bo Peep, Maleficent, Jafar, Mother Gothel, Ursula, Hades, Cruella de Vil, Pocahontas, and the Wicked Witch of the West were all villains just achieving some happiness--- with a curse in mind.

Bo Peep: "All I want is power. I was a warlord before, until Erin took it away from me! I promise, she will pay. The moment I find my crook, I will brand her. She will be my "sheep", I will always keep her in sight."

Hades: "don't we all want power."

Cruella de Vil: "Dalmatians continue to fascinate me. They will soon meet their ends."

Jafar: "Mhmm. With this new curse Ozma (Wicked Witch of the West) has in mind, we will all get what we want. Not only power, but our sinister objectives will be complete. Jeff and Saz will be destroyed."

Pocahontas: "I hold Dark a grudge after she came into forums. Took my job, invaded my land, what else is next?"

Mother Gothel: "My daughter Pandee..."

Ursula: "Lauren better be grateful that I gave her legs. AND her voice. I pity her poor unfortunate soul."

Hades: "keep talking."

Maleficent: "Guess who is going to get pricked with a needle."

The villains kept talking about their grudges, until Ozma (Wicked Witch of the West) came through. With her magic, she could easily defeat everyone in the room. The water trick won't work again on her."

Ozma: "Quiet down, my villains. We will have what we what. On the count of 3, I will enact the the curse transferring us to Broken Lens Permanently. There is no need for forums anymore. NO more help. Everyone will be on Broken Lens."

Ozma counted to 3. She read from a scroll and in about 10 seconds, the world of forums started to crumple apart, and everyone was whisked away.

The rise of the villains began.

Present Day Broken Lens:

Strel: "Woah, what just happened? I was just on forums and, and... I can't remember what just occurred. I think I was reporting a hacker..."

Pandee: "Same, although I was communicating with Erin, Kawaii606, and Jeff..."

Lauren: "Hey, I was asking other members what was happening and they heard that the forums is shut down with no access to it at all."

Ang: "Let's talk to staff..."

Everyone began to huddle around the staff server-- the HUB. Commotion was arising, along with anger and nervousness. Others panicked.

Sameh: "HEY, WHAT IS GOING ON?! I WANT TO GO BACK ON FORUMS!"

THOMAS: "WORDDDDDD, ARE YOU SERIOUS?"

Staff began to speak once everyone calmed down.

Jafar: "We are having technical difficulties with forums..."
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End of Chapter 1. How was it? XD
I want you to keep in mind that forums is the environment. With forests, cities, and more. Think of it like a country. It gets more clearer and interesting in the next chapters.

The first part of the story is the flashback. It is usually a flashback that happens in forums or Broken Lens. The second part is what is happening in present day.

People in it: (Tagging in 5's)
@DarkRainbows as Dark
@PandeeDEATH as Pandee
@Samehh as Sameh
@x0EriBaka0x as Erin
@Verified Fangirl as Lauren

Signup: https://brokenlens.xyz/forums/threads/a-story-signup.46085/
 
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If you signed up and you aren't mentioned as yet, don't worry because you will be. Throughout the chapters, we will be getting into the character's past and it usually involves the villain. We will know more about the characters and will explain some parts of events in the current Broken Lens plot. Next chapter will showcase an example of this.
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Woah really cool story :o I like how it goes back in time before brokenlens (Younshould add me to your story don’t have to but it seems lit k thx bye)
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ursula i dont like the legs u gave me. nor the voice. it sucks ;((
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Jafar wants to destroy me. Completely fine with that. XD HE WANTS REVENGE FOR WHATEVER I DID TO HIM.
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I can't wait for chapter 2 :D
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Did anyone catch any Disney hints, or some "easter eggs"?
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