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5 Crystal's - Chapter 2

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Chapter 2- The Orange Stone
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The Mission For The 5 Crystal's

Recap on the story:

All 5 of them got separate and took each one a path in order to retrieve every 5 stone that there was to be found.
Now we get to path 2 in the story, which is filled with sweets and candy all around.

~The Sweets Beyond~ Path 2/5

This path was taken by no other but our great pumpkin, Cap! Cap unlike the other, liked the explore dangerous places that most people don't enjoy doing. Cap was a brave a super pumpkin (still a human) that collected stuff along his way. But other than that, let move on

Cap looked around as she started to get creeped out. Cap knew the background of the story and trust me, it wasn't a great screen to be in. Cap started to shiver by the second he took a step inside the candy road. A few minutes later, the road didn't seem to be that bad as the tale says. He didn't find anything scary or horrible around it. But of course, that was just his mind.

Along time ago. This candy place actually used to be a candy factory that made all kinds of sweets. Candy, chocolate, cake, you name it! The factory was so successful that they got there very own TV show just from making candy all around the world. Everyone every day will come inside a shop and buy their products by the minute. Making over more than $37,000 a day worldwide! But unfortunately, where there is a success, there's evil coming to take their place at the top.

This became the most successful place until the most targeted candy factory worldwide. One day, when the factory was about to launch there new product, a malfunction happened, thus causing everything to corrupt and explore the whole place. Fortunately, everyone got out in time but they couldn't say the same to the factory. Everywhere was spilled with cream, melted chocolate, sugar you name it. Building the factory was gonna cost a fortune. Even the big money they earn a day, couldn't fix the factory so they had to let it go and move on.

This making the place all sticky and smelly and getting shut down. And that's why, Our fellow cap will go down and see who been running this place and shutting them down once and for all and hopefully, getting the orange stone back safe.

Cap continued his journey in the sticky road that was leading him to wherever he was going. He spotted a spider. But the spider wasn't like any other spider he has seen before. The spider was colored in cream and his body was covered in sprinkles. Now, this is where we get into Cap's point of view.

I wanted to (I can't believe I'm saying this) actually... Eat the spider! Now that I think of, the spider is just covered in cream and sparkles so if we were to take those decorations off of it, it will just be a normal spider. I remember that everything in this land is covered with sweets, even insects so I tried my best not to eat then but that was a challenge for me due to the fact, they look eatable.

I felt like my legs were going to fall from all this walking I've been doing. It felt like hours that I've been walking but I felt like in reality, Its only been a few minutes that I've been walking. I walked a few more steps ahead as an I got off from the sugar grass I've been sitting on when I found myself a superfly I mean a butterfly. Dang, all this walking around and looking at sweets is really getting into me. Literally! Unfortunately for me, I didn't pack any food. I can't feel bad for myself since the others also didn't pack food. So they must also be starving from now.

That Sugarfly, wait dang it. Butterfly looked delicious but I knew, if you eat a butterfly, you'll get very sick and that's the last thing I wanted to get on this long trip. So I saved my hunger and moved on, hoping that along the way, I find something to eat at least. I walked for another 10 minutes, well that's what It felt like. I regret leaving my watch back home, I really do. I looked up at the sun, Realizing that there was no sun, only dark purple clouds above. This must because of the stones. I looked back and saw a dark purple storm above the Kingdom.

I knew that there wasn't a lot of time before the Kingdom gets completely destroy. I saw across me and it was a beautiful sky with white puffy clouds. So I knew that Klass was done and successfully returned the Red stone back. Now it was my turn to return the Orange stone back. I kept walking and right before I tripped to the ground (which was made of cheese crackers btw) I saw the dark light above the head. "All great" I complained. "I already know this isn't going to look cute," I said as I got up.

I didn't run to the light, just to spear some time. I actually notice at the moment that the trees were made out of licorice. I actually felt like going up to one and taking one but once again, you never know if this place is crawling with badness so I kept safe away from the trees and moved on. I actually heard that in Klass path, there were live eating trees so good luck to him oof.

A few minutes later, After all those candy animals and tasty eating trees, I finally got to the dark light. But once I got there, I couldn't believe what I saw. It was puffin! I couldn't see that coming a long way! Of course, she's ruling this land!

If you guys don't know puffin, here's the back story of her.

Back in school, Puffin and I went to the same Middle school at the time. She was the most popular girl in all 7 and 8 grade. Mostly because she gave free candy at lunch to everyone if you had her for 5 periods. Anyways, unfortunately, I wasn't "cool" enough to be her friend but I heard updates and rumors about her daily. One day, she raged at the school, depending on the school to give everyone a Halloween party in the game on the end of October. Unfortunately like every school does, they denied her.

This making Puffin rage. Strange thing is, after that day, she was never to see again. Not even her parents knew where she was. 1 month later, the gym teacher found a note in her locker saying "I will one day, rule the world with candy and you will all pay for it." The school board asked for a search for her. Nothing was found over the 8 months they reached.

It was until today that we or I see her again. And I knew, in order to get the Orange gem back, I'll have to face war agents her. There were guards surrounding the cake castle from every corner, making it harder to get passed them. Now like any move here, I'll have to make a plan up and calculate the moves of it. Unfortunately for this small pumpkin, I'm not good at math. I always failed my exams back in High school. But I'll try my best to come up and defeat the cake Queen.

I went a few steps back, grabbed some licorice from the trees, some candy webs from the spiders, a cracker pencil and started to create my plan of "How To Break Into The Candy Castle 101!¡!"It was times like this when I really needed a pal to carry me but I was on my own on this one so let's think. If you were stuck in a path where you need to make a plan in order to stop a Cake Queen, what will you do? What is the first thing that comes to mind? Cause I'm out of ideas oof.

A few minutes later after thinking for a few minutes, I was actually making great progress on my plan until I notice that the spotlight was getting near me, which I'm thinking that they're on to me. I took a few more steps away from the spotlight and hid behind a tree. Luckily, I saw that the spotlight gave up so it went back it's normal range but just to be safe, I hid behind the tree for the safety case. It felt like hours that I was making this plan, My forehead was sweating so much, that some got on my plan. My hand had a lot of bumps from all the writing I was doing.

Sooner or later, I was done my soon to be the best plan I've ever done. I saw the dream in my head that I'll be a hero on this day. Everyone cheering on us for what bravery we were. But I needed to snap out of my daydream and do the reality before the exception came along.

I set up my plan. Here's how it goes.
First, I'll throw a piece of cheese into the bridge of the Castle, the guards and hopefully the spotlight guards will notice as well, will get distracted by it. Second, the guards will come close to it and getting once again, distracted by it. Third, I'll bow shoot the light guards down, making the spotlight powerless. Lastly, I'll come rushing towards the castle and pushing the guards in boiling Cream, melting them to the deaths and breaking in into the castle.

I gotta say, for a kid at my age, I was going to manage to do this giant plain all by myself. I'm impressed. I started by aiming towards the bridge, I missed a few time, unfortunately, but I'm a lot of cheese and the guards weren't seeing them so I guess that was good. It took me a few tries to get it on the bridge but luckily, I managed to throw it onto the bridge, making the guards and the spotlight guards notice as plan. The guards went towards it, making my plan work. I grabbed my licorice bow and aimed for the two spotlights that were guarding the gates. I got the first one first shot but I missed one time for the second spotlight.

Luckily, none of the guards notice, giving me another try. I did it as except. And as my plan worked, the guards were still distracted by the cheese. Unfortunately, the guards suspect that the cheese came from the woods so I had to act fast. I rushed towards them and before they got their swords out, I pushed them all in the boiling cream, As a success, the plan worked out great but there was one tiny problem. The gate was shut. I didn't plan that part well.
 
Fortunately for me, The button was on the wall so if I aim my bow right, I'll open the gate to the Candy Castle and defeat the Cake Queen once and for all and retrieve the orange rock back. It took me a few tries but after like 24 shots, I finally made it open. I gotta say, Puffin aka the Cake Queen make this palace a beautiful place. But I wasn't here to explore this place, I was here to get my Kingdom stone back and end the cake land from here.

It took me a few minutes to see where the door to puffin room was but I finally found it. All the way on the tip-top of the castle. I gotta admit, I did see something shining orange on top of the castle but I didn't expect it to be the orange so I went to do my stuff and ya. When I got there, I could here puffin talking to herself but what disappointed me the most is that I needed a key that looked like a cake in order to get in.

Now, where to tarnation will I get a key that looks like a cake? I wonder for a second and finally got it. That's it! Right before I got up here, I saw a key room in the cake room. I bet there's where I can get the Cake key and finish this. I had to go downstairs running all I can to reach it. Fortunately for me, it was right there in my eyesight. But I felt like it was too read that it was right there. So I could tell if it was a trap or so. I took the risk and good enough, It wasn't.

I went straight up to puffins room and sure enough, it fit. I entered that room like a boxer reader to let all of his straight out. Puffin gasped as I entered the room. "Omg, Are you Cap? That kid I told you were not cool enough to be my friend? She said as she flew back.

"Yes, Puffin it's me! Cap! And I came to take you down and get my Orange stone back! Puffin eyes widen within the second. "You challenge me? That's cute Cap!" Might as well jump into the pit of Boiling Cream right now." "I'll do it once I sent you where you belong," Cap said back.

Puffin was started to get irritated by the way Cap was talking. "Alright then. You and me now!"

Now Unfortunately for Cap, Puffin had a magic cake wand that summons sugar animals, but deadly once. So when Cap tried to attack her, she summoned sugar animals. Minutes past and it didn't look good for poor cap. He didn't know what to do. He was on the ground all ready to give up. "Tired already? Aww, C'mon! I was just getting started!"

Cap was about to give up until an idea came to his head. Cap stand up like a proud person and said "Puffin. What is your last name?" Cap smiled.

"My last name? I can't say!" Cap smiled again as he said it again, "Puffin! Tell me your last name!" Puffin started to get angry. "Cap stay back!" Cap said it again and that time, Cap got puffin. Puffin demolished the wall as she tried to escape. Luckily for Cap, he had a rope made out of licorice. He pulled her back from the sky but accidentally let it go. "oops.."

She felt in the pit of Boiling cream. As she melted, she said "This is NOT OVER! YOU HEAR ME!" After she said that, she boiled to death like the others. The curse has been lifted! The sky turned blue again! The candy started to disappeared and everything went back to normal. He saw everything from above as Cap grabbed the Orange stone.

The stone flew him back to the Kingdom wear yet, there was a purple sky and more Goblins to raid them. Cap immediately rushed towards the Town Hall with his Orange town where everyone was. CAP! Everyone said. You survived! They said. "Of course I did! I'm cap!" He said. "Very fun Cap," The king said. "Klass came back early after you." The King said "Ya, I notice that from the sky" Cap said.

"Welp let's just see how the others do out there!" The King said. "Indeed." Klass and Cap said.

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Chapter 2/5 of the story done :p
Hope you enjoyed it!

Time to write and edit: 1 Hour 42 Minutes

Character: 13,576

People in the story:
@Capitaine64
@Pufflin
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How is cakeland a curse I will boil you all in my pot of boiling cream >;D
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cap, why did it take you tWeNtY-fOuR shots

also, i would n e v e r find a spider tasty looking, like cmoN. i bet you could see there hairiness through all that sugar and sparkle xd
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Amazing!! I love how much effort you put into this and how detailed it is, Your stories never let me down!
You're amazing writer Eric keep it up:D and seriously that's a lot of words XD
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Im sorry I didn’t reply before but I had so much things to do ;-;

This story is just amazing Eric :D
I am impatient to read what happens after xD
I love it <3 thank you
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How is cakeland a curse I will boil you all in my pot of boiling cream >;D
nuuu I defeated you >;D
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