BenitezClλnce4
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An Explorer is safe from what they're running away from... for now. But the torch burned out from the running, so they reignited it. They coughed from the smoke, and sat onto the floor, opening a book. The torch suddenly burned out, so they decided to reignite it again.
But as soon as the torch was lit, the pages of the book flipped by themselves, and the Explorer heard creepy sounds. They looked behind, and they saw an enderman. They began to ran away from it as fast as they can, terrified, with the torch in their right hand, and the book in their left.
But as soon as they were about to reach the exit, the enderman teleported in front of them, attacking and killing them moments later.
[EXPLORER] was slain by an Enderman.
The recorder got dropped, damaging the vinyl record. There's no solid evidence of their location on where they died. There's nothing but the broken record.
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160 Words, 883 Characters
Time Taken: 5-30 minutes
First revision at: October 20, 2020 11:00PM (GMT +8 Philippine Standard Time)
Changes: Fixed some lines, with a help of my friend, and added a sentence.
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But as soon as the torch was lit, the pages of the book flipped by themselves, and the Explorer heard creepy sounds. They looked behind, and they saw an enderman. They began to ran away from it as fast as they can, terrified, with the torch in their right hand, and the book in their left.
But as soon as they were about to reach the exit, the enderman teleported in front of them, attacking and killing them moments later.
[EXPLORER] was slain by an Enderman.
The recorder got dropped, damaging the vinyl record. There's no solid evidence of their location on where they died. There's nothing but the broken record.
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160 Words, 883 Characters
Time Taken: 5-30 minutes
First revision at: October 20, 2020 11:00PM (GMT +8 Philippine Standard Time)
Changes: Fixed some lines, with a help of my friend, and added a sentence.
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