Story Chapter 1:love is in the air

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"Arrow! Its ray" he shouted at my window
"Yea ray" i shouted curiously "the carnival remember?" Ray said excited "oh yea ok im coming" i said even more excited,so then i raced down to the front door,but i get stopped bye my mother."where do you think your going?" Mother said softly "to the carnival,remember you said i could go" i said scared "yes be home by 10:30pm k?"
Mother said strictly. "but mama im not a 10 anymore im 15" i said whining "fine 11:30pm no later" mother said giving in "yes,sure ok bye mama" i said excitedly "bye"mother said smiling "HEY RAY OVER HERE" i shout loudly "hey,arrow lets go" ray said excited."yep,ill beat you there" i say as i zoom off "wait up!" Ray says sighing. Then when i get there the first person i see was shu "hey shu" as i zoom over to shu "hey arrow,how are you?"
Shu says happily.then ray finally catches up "ar-ar" then all of a sudden ray passes out "hey ray you look a bit tired" i say funnily "hey shu,wheres everybody else"
I say. "Well pixie is over there with wolfie,pins not here yet and everyone else is here already" shu says pointing to everyone here."well imma go say hi to da luv birds" i say with a wide smile. So then i walk over to wolfie and pixeh,right as there lips detached "oh,did i interrupt something?" I say joking "wha-what no no" pixie says nervously "ok,then" "hey imma go eat ok" wolfie says as he looks over at the meat."ok,oh arrow i want you to meet my friend snowy" she says less nervous "hi hi um um im im ar-arrow,sorry i just cant find the words to describe your beauty,not that you aren't beautiful its just that um,well can you exscuse me i just need to go wash my face" i say as i stammer "ok" snowy and pixie both say.
 
The chapter title should be "New Persons" or "Start of Shyness".
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"Arrow! Its ray" he shouted at my window
"Yea ray" i shouted curiously "the carnival remember?" Ray said excited "oh yea ok im coming" i said even more excited,so then i raced down to the front door,but i get stopped bye my mother."where do you think your going?" Mother said softly "to the carnival,remember you said i could go" i said scared "yes be home by 10:30pm k?"
Mother said strictly. "but mama im not a 10 anymore im 15" i said whining "fine 11:30pm no later" mother said giving in "yes,sure ok bye mama" i said excitedly "bye"mother said smiling "HEY RAY OVER HERE" i shout loudly "hey,arrow lets go" ray said excited."yep,ill beat you there" i say as i zoom off "wait up!" Ray says sighing. Then when i get there the first person i see was shu "hey shu" as i zoom over to shu "hey arrow,how are you?"
Shu says happily.then ray finally catches up "ar-ar" then all of a sudden ray passes out "hey ray you look a bit tired" i say funnily "hey shu,wheres everybody else"
I say. "Well pixie is over there with wolfie,pins not here yet and everyone else is here already" shu says pointing to everyone here."well imma go say hi to da luv birds" i say with a wide smile. So then i walk over to wolfie and pixeh,right as there lips detached "oh,did i interrupt something?" I say joking "wha-what no no" pixie says nervously "ok,then" "hey imma go eat ok" wolfie says as he looks over at the meat."ok,oh arrow i want you to meet my friend snowy" she says less nervous "hi hi um um im im ar-arrow,sorry i just cant find the words to describe your beauty,not that you aren't beautiful its just that um,well can you exscuse me i just need to go wash my face" i say as i stammer "ok" snowy and pixie both say.
OK...Good, but put capital letters and grammar.....xD
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