I Created A Map For MurderMystery!

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I Created A Map For Murder Mystery!

It Must Be Worth It Cuz i worked hard on this map :)

Hears The ScreenShot


BTW How Can I Give It To You Guys?
 

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I think its a bit bland. The trees are bad and you should make custom trees instead of just bone mealing ugly minecraft trees. The map is a bit flat and the wall is very plain. I suggest adding more details to the whole map. I dont think they wont use it yet because its a bit plain but its not a bad try. You can send it to them by attaching a zip file of the map.
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This map cant be for mm but i think it will be better for hs but u need to add more blocks if u want for hs xd thats my opininon
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But i think it cant be for hs too lol cus its a lil bit small
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I do agree with Slay that it is a bit bland and that the trees could use some improvements. Making custom trees would be a very nice touch to your build. Also, I’d recommend detailing the wall more. You can use other stones and make it have more depth, curve and ‘hilly’. As for the ground, have dirt/podzol paths would be good too.
Could you add some more screenshots of the structures you built? Thank you.
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AJSamama said:
I Created A Map For Murder Mystery!

It Must Be Worth It Cuz i worked hard on this map :)

Hears The ScreenShot


BTW How Can I Give It To You Guys?
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Too small, too bland.
I prefer natural walls over a huge brutalist thing. Just because Wild West use that type of border doesn't mean it looks good.
Also, some sloping in the land would be nice.
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A lot of people have already stated the things I have to say.
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ZoeyLynne said:
I do agree with Slay that it is a bit bland and that the trees could use some improvements. Making custom trees would be a very nice touch to your build. Also, I’d recommend detailing the wall more. You can use other stones and make it have more depth, curve and ‘hilly’. As for the ground, have dirt/podzol paths would be good too.
Could you add some more screenshots of the structures you built? Thank you.
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I Uploded A Tread Again And I Add Something... But The Costume Trees Is Bad :(
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