Story: Chp 2 New Friend

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Noobie!?! im not a noobie! I whipped around to see this very rude stranger was talking about. “Hi! Im hermione, I saw the watcher over there talk to you.” She giggled a bit “Im sure whatever it said made no sense, so I can help you around!” Before she could speak about anything else, I confronted her “Why did you call me a noobie? I may be new here but I am not any ‘noob’!” She looked a little confused and shocked at my outburst. Then she suddenly exclaimed,
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“Oh! Im so sorry, your new and I didn’t know your name so I called you a newbie N E W B I E! I didn’t mean any harm I swear!” I was a little embarassed at my quick accusations, but before I could have a chance to apologise she started to speak again. “So like the watcher said people do tap these NPCs to go to different games and such, and if you look in your inventory-” she popped open a gray rectangular box screen with little darker gray boxes, “theres these little dyes where you can do different things, orange is the game dye where you can open and go to any minigame you want with out even moving, the lime green one disables player visibility, the blaze rod is a staff you can shoot cool particles out of, the yellow one is where you can enable your walking particles, the blue one can spawn in your own pet!” Well that was pretty interesting to know, suddenly someone yelled “Hey!! herm come on lets go play some Team Sky Wars!” A girl that had purple hair with pointy ears to match dissappeared into an NPC. “Welp I gotta go but hey lets friend eachother!! whats your username?”
“My username? its-”

WELL thats the end of it folks!
Reply some (easy) usernames and ill put it in a poll!
Also ill need another player to draww so reply with a skin first and your going to be the next new player!!
 
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God my skin sucks
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Regular is for actions and sayings stuffs or showing emotions and blah
Italics are for thoughts
Prev:https://brokenlens.xyz/forums/threads/oof-story-new-server.57435/
Next: ???

Noobie!?! im not a noobie! I whipped around to see this very rude stranger was talking about. “Hi! Im hermione, I saw the watcher over there talk to you.” She giggled a bit “Im sure whatever it said made no sense, so I can help you around!” Before she could speak about anything else, I confronted her “Why did you call me a noobie? I may be new here but I am not any ‘noob’!” She looked a little confused and shocked at my outburst. Then she suddenly exclaimed,View attachment 89424
“Oh! Im so sorry, your new and I didn’t know your name so I called you a newbie N E W B I E! I didn’t mean any harm I swear!” I was a little embarassed at my quick accusations, but before I could have a chance to apologise she started to speak again. “So like the watcher said people do tap these NPCs to go to different games and such, and if you look in your inventory-” she popped open a gray rectangular box screen with little darker gray boxes, “theres these little dyes where you can do different things, orange is the game dye where you can open and go to any minigame you want with out even moving, the lime green one disables player visibility, the blaze rod is a staff you can shoot cool particles out of, the yellow one is where you can enable your walking particles, the blue one can spawn in your own pet!” Well that was pretty interesting to know, suddenly someone yelled “Hey!! herm come on lets go play some Team Sky Wars!” A girl that had purple hair with pointy ears to match dissappeared into an NPC. “Welp I gotta go but hey lets friend eachother!! whats your username?”
“My username? its-”

WELL thats the end of it folks!
Reply some (easy) usernames and ill put it in a poll!
Also ill need another player to draww so reply with a skin first and your going to be the next new player!!
The story is going great Pandee!!! I really like it!
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Regular is for actions and sayings stuffs or showing emotions and blah
Italics are for thoughts
Prev:https://brokenlens.xyz/forums/threads/oof-story-new-server.57435/
Next: ???

Noobie!?! im not a noobie! I whipped around to see this very rude stranger was talking about. “Hi! Im hermione, I saw the watcher over there talk to you.” She giggled a bit “Im sure whatever it said made no sense, so I can help you around!” Before she could speak about anything else, I confronted her “Why did you call me a noobie? I may be new here but I am not any ‘noob’!” She looked a little confused and shocked at my outburst. Then she suddenly exclaimed,View attachment 89424
“Oh! Im so sorry, your new and I didn’t know your name so I called you a newbie N E W B I E! I didn’t mean any harm I swear!” I was a little embarassed at my quick accusations, but before I could have a chance to apologise she started to speak again. “So like the watcher said people do tap these NPCs to go to different games and such, and if you look in your inventory-” she popped open a gray rectangular box screen with little darker gray boxes, “theres these little dyes where you can do different things, orange is the game dye where you can open and go to any minigame you want with out even moving, the lime green one disables player visibility, the blaze rod is a staff you can shoot cool particles out of, the yellow one is where you can enable your walking particles, the blue one can spawn in your own pet!” Well that was pretty interesting to know, suddenly someone yelled “Hey!! herm come on lets go play some Team Sky Wars!” A girl that had purple hair with pointy ears to match dissappeared into an NPC. “Welp I gotta go but hey lets friend eachother!! whats your username?”
“My username? its-”

WELL thats the end of it folks!
Reply some (easy) usernames and ill put it in a poll!
Also ill need another player to draww so reply with a skin first and your going to be the next new player!!
Corrections because I'm getting uncomfortable reading unorganized text

"Noobie? I'm NOT a noobie!" I raged in my head.
I whipped around to see this very rude stranger.
"Hi! I'm Hermione! I saw the Watcher over there talk to you."
She giggled a bit, "I'm pretty sure whatever it said made no sense so I can help you around!"
I confronted her before she could resume by saying, "Why did you call me a newbie? I may be new here but I'm NOT any "noob!"
Hermione was confused and shocked by my outburst. She then clarified.
"Oh! I'm so sorry, you're new and I didn't know your name so I called you a newbie! N-E-W-B-I-E! I didn't mean any harm, I swear!"
I was embarrased by my haste assumptions but before I apologized, she went on.
"So like the watcher said: people do tap these NPCs to go to different games and such. If you look in your inventory..."
She popped open a gray menu with buttons with labels.
"...theres these little dyes where you can do different things. Orange is the game dye where you can open and go to any minigame you want with out even moving. The lime green one disables player visibility. The blaze rod is a staff you can shoot cool particles out of. The yellow one is where you can enable your walking particles. Lastly, the blue one can spawn in your own pet!"
Interesting to know.
"Hey, Herm! Come on let's play some Team Skywars!" A purple haired girl with pointed ears yelled.
Herm told me, "Well I gotta go, but hey! Let's friend eachother! What's your username?"
I replied, "My username is-"

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Alright bring me the weird responses.
Plus I can guess who the "purple haired girl with pointed ears" is

And uh, if you can, put me in. You know the skin to use I hope.
(Or ya know, I can draw the portrait for you)
If you do, remember: SERIOUS, HONEST, SPONTANEOUS, and SOMEWHAT STUPID personality traits.
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Corrections because I'm getting uncomfortable reading unorganized text

"Noobie? I'm NOT a noobie!" I raged in my head.
I whipped around to see this very rude stranger.
"Hi! I'm Hermione! I saw the Watcher over there talk to you."
She giggled a bit, "I'm pretty sure whatever it said made no sense so I can help you around!"
I confronted her before she could resume by saying, "Why did you call me a newbie? I may be new here but I'm NOT any "noob!"
Hermione was confused and shocked by my outburst. She then clarified.
"Oh! I'm so sorry, you're new and I didn't know your name so I called you a newbie! N-E-W-B-I-E! I didn't mean any harm, I swear!"
I was embarrased by my haste assumptions but before I apologized, she went on.
"So like the watcher said: people do tap these NPCs to go to different games and such. If you look in your inventory..."
She popped open a gray menu with buttons with labels.
"...theres these little dyes where you can do different things. Orange is the game dye where you can open and go to any minigame you want with out even moving. The lime green one disables player visibility. The blaze rod is a staff you can shoot cool particles out of. The yellow one is where you can enable your walking particles. Lastly, the blue one can spawn in your own pet!"
Interesting to know.
"Hey, Herm! Come on let's play some Team Skywars!" A purple haired girl with pointed ears yelled.
Herm told me, "Well I gotta go, but hey! Let's friend eachother! What's your username?"
I replied, "My username is-"

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Alright bring me the weird responses.
Plus I can guess who the "purple haired girl with pointed ears" is

And uh, if you can, put me in. You know the skin to use I hope.
(Or ya know, I can draw the portrait for you)
If you do, remember: SERIOUS, HONEST, SPONTANEOUS, and SOMEWHAT STUPID personality traits.
It's pretty obvious though :p
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When no ones sharing any usernames so your slowly flipping out
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Suggestion:
If this series is not a collection of one-off stories and there's actually lore and the posts are chronological, I suggest doing a bit of labeling.

p.s.
Username: KnightWalker49 (just look up my username on skinstealer or something)
Let's see if you can capture the essence of my character XD
(If you want my character's basic info to help with story writing, message me privately!)
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