Hi, I need comments of my diss track (SWEARING INVOLVED)

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let me paint you a picture son

your dad was a ♥♥♥♥♥ since WWI

Still trying to tell matin is evil

While we know you’re miserable

Wrote a little book, Got em fired up

Take your good grades, Got em fired up

Took your bow and a arrow pointing at yor head, Got em fired up

Took your ♥♥♥♥ and a vigina and fired up

You dumb mother ♥♥♥♥er didn’t napoleon LET YOU KNOW?

When you saw Russian football (quick) better pack some freaking winter clothes.

Have lots of loans, Just eating bones and (slow )rage quitting in battle-dome



you blow dude you arrogant ♥♥♥♥♥, you second hand genes and turtle neck

ill drill a hole in your boney head, with apple’s very own beach ball of death

Hippie, nearly given up on birth, go get your net worth 2 aids research.

combine your little toys I still crush that, cheeting pencil, magic marble, iMovie stuff bro like that



Oh sorry I didn’t quite catch that, fourtune 500 4 you kissed a girl

running C++ saying hello world, caught you singing bout a daisy girl

I got a mind larger then Einstein can ever be, beat your ♥♥♥ n a chest and Jeopardy

I stomp on your grates and your friends too

I'm on Linux ♥♥♥♥♥, I thought you GNU

my CPU’s hot but my core runs cold

beat you will seventeen lines of code

I think different from the engine of the days of old

Hasta la vista, like the Terminator told ya



Excuse me? WHat’s with your voice, I can’t freakin tell

you sound like wall-E having s♥♥ with the speak and spell!



You've got no idea what you're messin' with here boy

I've got 12 inch rims on my chair that's how I roll y'all

You look like someone glued a mustache on a troll doll

I'll be stretchin' out the rhyme like gravity stretches time

When you try to put your little pea brain against this kind of mind



I'm the best

I'm the Snoop Dogg of Science

I'll be dropping mad apples on your head from the shoulders of giants



There are ten million million million million million million million million million particles in the universe that we can observe
Your mama took the ugly ones and put them into one nerd

You wanna bring the heat with the mushroom clouds you're making
I'm about to bake raps from scratch like Carl Sagan
not it ain't that my work is based on you
I'm a super-computer you're like a TI-82





Someone who loathes you,

♥♥♥♥♥ now stand up and rhyme

I only thawed you out so I could beat your ♥♥♥ a second time

Roar like Chewbacca The voice of Mufasa

I'm on the leader of your limp dicked Luftwaffe

I strike back hard against a Nazi

Brain toss your ♥♥♥ in the air, Yahtzee!

Ask Indiana Jones who the ♥♥♥♥ I am

I spit sick s♥♥♥ so focused I break your concentration camp

I'm a certified Sith Lord, you runt So suck on deez…

Uh deez what sir? Deez robot nuts!

I'm gonna enjoy watching you die

So let me do it with my own eyes

You look stressed Vader you appear to be in pain

You need to take a vacation here, take a trip on my train

I mean you leading an army of white men? Disgraceful!

Even your mic skills still aren't fully operational

You got one ♥♥♥♥♥ pregnant then gave in to the hate

Now you're 6'6 and black but can't get a date

want a Lightsaber? You need a Life Saver

Use some of your force to fix your freaking respirator

You think you're powerful since you make people cry with your finger neck pinches?

You couldn't even get your own son into the family business!

Everything you do is an epic fail

Now stand at attention and Sieg freaking Heil!

What's wrong Ani? Can't take anymore? Not surprising coming from the Emperor's ♥♥♥♥♥ Yeah! Ya take that. What's the matter? Where is the DJ? Why are you laughing?
 
let me paint you a picture son

your dad was a b**** since WWI

Still trying to tell matin is evil

While we know you’re miserable

Wrote a little book, Got em fired up

Take your good grades, Got em fired up

Took your bow and a arrow pointing at yor head, Got em fired up

Took your ♥♥♥♥ and a vigina and fired up

You dumb mother f***er didn’t napoleon LET YOU KNOW?

When you saw Russian football (quick) better pack some freaking winter clothes.

Have lots of loans, Just eating bones and (slow )rage quitting in battle-dome



you blow dude you arrogant ♥♥♥♥♥, you second hand genes and turtle neck

ill drill a hole in your boney head, with apple’s very own beach ball of death

Hippie, nearly given up on birth, go get your net worth 2 aids research.

combine your little toys I still crush that, cheeting pencil, magic marble, iMovie stuff bro like that



Oh sorry I didn’t quite catch that, fourtune 500 4 you kissed a girl

running C++ saying hello world, caught you singing bout a daisy girl

I got a mind larger then Einstein can ever be, beat your a** n a chest and Jeopardy

I stomp on your grates and your friends too

I'm on Linux b****, I thought you GNU

my CPU’s hot but my core runs cold

beat you will seventeen lines of code

I think different from the engine of the days of old

Hasta la vista, like the Terminator told ya



Excuse me? WHat’s with your voice, I can’t freakin tell

you sound like wall-E having s** with the speak and spell!



You've got no idea what you're messin' with here boy

I've got 12 inch rims on my chair that's how I roll y'all

You look like someone glued a mustache on a troll doll

I'll be stretchin' out the rhyme like gravity stretches time

When you try to put your little pea brain against this kind of mind



I'm the best

I'm the Snoop Dogg of Science

I'll be dropping mad apples on your head from the shoulders of giants



There are ten million million million million million million million million million particles in the universe that we can observe
Your mama took the ugly ones and put them into one nerd

You wanna bring the heat with the mushroom clouds you're making
I'm about to bake raps from scratch like Carl Sagan
not it ain't that my work is based on you
I'm a super-computer you're like a TI-82





Someone who loathes you,

b**** now stand up and rhyme

I only thawed you out so I could beat your a** a second time

Roar like Chewbacca The voice of Mufasa

I'm on the leader of your limp dicked Luftwaffe

I strike back hard against a Nazi

Brain toss your a** in the air, Yahtzee!

Ask Indiana Jones who the f*** I am

I spit sick s*** so focused I break your concentration camp

I'm a certified Sith Lord, you runt So suck on deez…

Uh deez what sir? Deez robot nuts!

I'm gonna enjoy watching you die

So let me do it with my own eyes

You look stressed Vader you appear to be in pain

You need to take a vacation here, take a trip on my train

I mean you leading an army of white men? Disgraceful!

Even your mic skills still aren't fully operational

You got one b**** pregnant then gave in to the hate

Now you're 6'6 and black but can't get a date

want a Lightsaber? You need a Life Saver

Use some of your force to fix your freaking respirator

You think you're powerful since you make people cry with your finger neck pinches?

You couldn't even get your own son into the family business!

Everything you do is an epic fail

Now stand at attention and Sieg freaking Heil!

What's wrong Ani? Can't take anymore? Not surprising coming from the Emperor's ♥♥♥♥♥ Yeah! Ya take that. What's the matter? Where is the DJ? Why are you laughing?
you should become an artist
this is epicc
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These aren't your lyrics, you stole them from epic rap battles of history or whatever
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These aren't your lyrics, you stole them from epic rap battles of history or whatever
Leave him alone

He just lacks originality.
That's it.
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