~ BrokenLens Story ~ Chapter 3 ~ The Darkness Is Coming

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~ BrokenLens Story ~ Chapter 3
The Darkness Is Coming

WARNING!!! This chapter may be too scary for you
Aunt Carol : "Now open your math book page 14 and do part 1 of number 1 until 10, my students."
Aunt Carol : "If you guys don't finish, I will spray you with my famous sriracha sauce, I will go now."

Aunt Carol go to take care of her 50 favorite children at her house. Although she is old, she is good at riding her motorcycle, because she loves yoga sports.

Benjy : "lol who cares about math, let's play some card games"
Strelitzia : " That's a great idea, let's go play some UNO game!"

They start to play UNO game, while some of them just talking to each other nonstop, some of them are quite and just sitting on their chair, Fheonix, Trenz, Liazalia, and Shive are talking about the Magic Stone thing.

Fheonix : "I keep thinking about Magic Stone you have said, Trenz"
Trenz : "The magic stone came from another world though.."
Liazalia : "Another world?? what's the place called?"
Trenz : "Dungeon, It's full of mysterious creatures and demons.."
Liazalia : "Ohh, that's creepy.."
Shive : "Actually, the Magic Stone broken into 5 pieces."
Trenz : "Oh well.. do you know where the broken pieces are?"
Shive : "1st piece is in Singapore city, 2nd piece is in Yokashima City, 3rd piece is in Jakarta city, 4th piece is in underwater cave, 5th piece.. I don't know yet.."
Fheonix : "I'll note those places"
Liazalia : "We need to find the pieces!"
Shive : "It's not easy.. we have to find people who are knowledgeable and master builder"
Fheonix : "I know the knowledgeable people, It's Hazard!"
Shive : "hmm.. not so sure.. any ideas?"
Liazalia : "How about Khriz? he's a master builder"
Shive : "Oh yea! I heard about him a lot"
Shive : "Maybe we can tell this to DarkRainbows, she's smart too"
Liazalia : "Let's ask her"

Four of them toward the DarkRainbows's table.

Shive : "Hey Dark, can we ask something?"
Dark-R : "Yes, of course"
Shive : "can you become a member of our team?"
Dark-R : "Why?"
Shive : "We need to discuss"
Dark-R : "About what?"
Shive : "About Magic Stone"
Dark-R : "Ohh, sure, why not? ^w^"
Shive : "Ok, let's discuss"

When they were in discussion about the Magic Stone, suddenly the building vibrate.

Benjy : "What's happening?"
Benjy : "It's earthquake.. o shii!
Lizzy : "I'm scareddd!!!!"

Books are falling down from the shelves, the curtains are shaking.
Suddenly a meteor hit the windows, and the windows break and the curtains are burning a bit. The meteor fell in front of Strelitzia's desk.

Strelitzia : "wth is that??? is that a meteor??"
Lauren : "That's a meteor, let's check it out!"

When they are checking the meteor, the meteor is cracked and exploded, than a mysterious creature comes out from the meteor.

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~ MONSTER ~

Sabah : "Mon...Mon....Monster, RUNNN!!"

They ran out of the classroom, but Fheonix still inside the class.

Liazalia : "Fhe, Fheo!!"
Fheonix : "Sis, Go!! I'll handle this monster with Trenz.. Now GO!"


Lia stepped out of the classroom, peered out the window.

MONSTER : "GGGGGRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!"


Fheonix pulls out a sword made of gold from his backpack and ask Trenz to attack him.

Fheonix : "HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!"

Fheonix attack the monster bravely without getting scared.

Trenz : *Bites the monster 6 Times with his sharp teeth" KRAUKKK! KRAUKKK! KRAUKKK!!
Fheonix : "Let's finish THIS MONSTER!!"
MONSTER : "GGGGGRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!"

Hard the skin of the monster made fheonix's sword broken.

Fheonix : "OH NO THIS CAN'T BE HAPPEN, MY SWORD BROKEN!"
Trenz : *Bites the monster back 2 times*


Trenz's fin is scratched by the monster's nails.

Fheonix : "NNOOOOOOOOOO!!"


Liazalia was very angry and entered to the class.

Fheonix : "Sis, Noo! It's too dangerous!"
Liazalia : "Danger? I'm not scared of the monster!"

Lia took scissors from her backpack and shouted to distract.

Liazalia : "HEEYYYYY YOU UGLY MONSTER!!"
Fheonix : "Lia, Shhhhhh!"

The monster looked at Liazalia.

Liazalia : "I'm not scared of you!"
MONSTER : "GGGGGGRRRRRRRRRR!"
Liazalia : "I'm not SCARED OF YOU!"
MONSTER : "GGGGGRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!"
Liazalia : "I'M NOT SCARED OF YOU!!!"
MONSTER : "GGGRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!"
Liazalia : "TAKE THISS!!!!"

Lia throws her scissors and right into the heart of the monster.

MONSTER : "NYYYYEEEEEKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!!!!"

The monster died slowly.

Fheonix : "Sis.... you just killed the monster just with scissor..."
Liazalia : "I know right, I'm a good shooters!"
Fheonix : "Trenz!!"
Liazalia : "Oh my gosh... TRENZ!!!!"

CHARACTERS IN THIS CHAPTER
@Fheonix

@DarkRainbows
@Verified Fangirl
@iSabPvP
@KhrizKGM
@Itz_CoolieShive
@Strelitzia
@BenjyPlayzYT
@AuntCarol
@XxLiazaliaxX
@_TrenzKGM_
@ElementalLizzy

~ CHAPTER 4 COMING SOON ~
 
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~ BrokenLens Story ~ Chapter 3
The Darkness Is Coming

WARNING!!! This chapter may be too scary for you
Aunt Carol : "Now open your math book page 14 and do part 1 of number 1 until 10, my students."
Aunt Carol : "If you guys don't finish, I will spray you with my famous sriracha sauce, I will go now."

Aunt Carol go to take care of her 50 favorite children at her house. Although she is old, she is good at riding her motorcycle, because she loves yoga sports.

Benjy : "lol who cares about math, let's play some card games"
Strelitzia : " That's a great idea, let's go play some UNO game!"

They start to play UNO game, while some of them just talking to each other nonstop, some of them are quite and just sitting on their chair, Fheonix, Trenz, Liazalia, and Shive are talking about the Magic Stone thing.

Fheonix : "I keep thinking about Magic Stone you have said, Trenz"
Trenz : "The magic stone came from another world though.."
Liazalia : "Another world?? what's the place called?"
Trenz : "Dungeon, It's full of mysterious creatures and demons.."
Liazalia : "Ohh, that's creepy.."
Shive : "Actually, the Magic Stone broken into 5 pieces."
Trenz : "Oh well.. do you know where the broken pieces are?"
Shive : "1st piece is in Singapore city, 2nd piece is in Yokashima City, 3rd piece is in Jakarta city, 4th piece is in underwater cave, 5th piece.. I don't know yet.."
Fheonix : "I'll note those places"
Liazalia : "We need to find the pieces!"
Shive : "It's not easy.. we have to find people who are knowledgeable and master builder"
Fheonix : "I know the knowledgeable people, It's Hazard!"
Shive : "hmm.. not so sure.. any ideas?"
Liazalia : "How about Khriz? he's a master builder"
Shive : "Oh yea! I heard about him a lot"
Shive : "Maybe we can tell this to DarkRainbows, she's smart too"
Liazalia : "Let's ask her"

Four of them toward the DarkRainbows's table.

Shive : "Hey Dark, can we ask something?"
Dark-R : "Yes, of course"
Shive : "can you become a member of our team?"
Dark-R : "Why?"
Shive : "We need to discuss"
Dark-R : "About what?"
Shive : "About Magic Stone"
Dark-R : "Ohh, sure, why not? ^w^"
Shive : "Ok, let's discuss"

When they were in discussion about the Magic Stone, suddenly the building vibrate.

Benjy : "What's happening?"
Benjy : "It's earthquake.. o shii!
Lizzy : "I'm scareddd!!!!"

Books are falling down from the shelves, the curtains are shaking.
Suddenly a meteor hit the windows, and the windows break and the curtains are burning a bit. The meteor fell in front of Strelitzia's desk.

Strelitzia : "wth is that??? is that a meteor??"
Lauren : "That's a meteor, let's check it out!"

When they are checking the meteor, the meteor is cracked and exploded, than a mysterious creature comes out from the meteor.

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~ MONSTER ~

Sabah : "Mon...Mon....Monster, RUNNN!!"

They ran out of the classroom, but Fheonix still inside the class.

Liazalia : "Fhe, Fheo!!"
Fheonix : "Sis, Go!! I'll handle this monster with Trenz.. Now GO!"


Lia stepped out of the classroom, peered out the window.

MONSTER : "GGGGGRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!"


Fheonix pulls out a sword made of gold from his backpack and ask Trenz to attack him.

Fheonix : "HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!"

Fheonix attack the monster bravely without getting scared.

Trenz : *Bites the monster 6 Times with his sharp teeth" KRAUKKK! KRAUKKK! KRAUKKK!!
Fheonix : "Let's finish THIS MONSTER!!"
MONSTER : "GGGGGRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!"

Hard the skin of the monster made fheonix's sword broken.

Fheonix : "OH NO THIS CAN'T BE HAPPEN, MY SWORD BROKEN!"
Trenz : *Bites the monster back 2 times*


Trenz's fin is scratched by the monster's nails.

Fheonix : "NNOOOOOOOOOO!!"


Liazalia was very angry and entered to the class.

Fheonix : "Sis, Noo! It's too dangerous!"
Liazalia : "Danger? I'm not scared of the monster!"

Lia took scissors from her backpack and shouted to distract.

Liazalia : "HEEYYYYY YOU UGLY MONSTER!!"
Fheonix : "Lia, Shhhhhh!"

The monster looked at Liazalia.

Liazalia : "I'm not scared of you!"
MONSTER : "GGGGGGRRRRRRRRRR!"
Liazalia : "I'm not SCARED OF YOU!"
MONSTER : "GGGGGRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!"
Liazalia : "I'M NOT SCARED OF YOU!!!"
MONSTER : "GGGRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!"
Liazalia : "TAKE THISS!!!!"

Lia throws her scissors and right into the heart of the monster.

MONSTER : "NYYYYEEEEEKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!!!!"

The monster died slowly.

Fheonix : "Sis.... you just killed the monster just with scissor..."
Liazalia : "I know right, I'm a good shooters!"
Fheonix : "Trenz!!"
Liazalia : "Oh my gosh... TRENZ!!!!"

CHARACTERS IN THIS CHAPTER
@Fheonix

@DarkRainbows
@Verified Fangirl
@iSabPvP
@KhrizKGM
@Itz_CoolieShive
@Strelitzia
@BenjyPlayzYT
@AuntCarol
@XxLiazaliaxX
@_TrenzKGM_
@ElementalLizzy

~ CHAPTER 4 COMING SOON ~
Amazing!!!! ;^; <-- Tears Of Joy
That Was Beautiful!
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it only took me 1/2 an hour to read xD
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I'm in love with this work, I like how the most random thing killed the monster xD
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OHMYGOD A NEOMORPH
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