Rate my building :D #1

What better .3.?

  • Cake

    Votes: 3 20.0%

  • Kitchen Table

    Votes: 12 80.0%
  • Total voters
    15
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Ok ok I know I don't do these kind of stuff on the forum's cause I usually only like to write story and role-plays but I wanted to try something new!

This is all for fun and I want to see how my building skills are. Now I build 2 this time. The theme is kitchen table and cake!

So here are the building. ( Warning! There bad xD )

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Time took to build: 5 minutes

Used: White wool and orange wool

Info: I think it's a 7 x 7 block idk but has you see, it's a cake xD The cake has filling inside so it can look all puffy on the outside. Ok ok fine it's bad but I think @CakeTheDutchAD Would like this :3

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Time took to build: 15 minutes

Used: 3 kind of wool, 3 kind of slaps, Cake, Water

Info: This one was one of the best build I build since forever. I took the idea from my art project painting and turn it Into a building. It has a plant for the food. The cake is on it, Some water next to it with a straw, a flower for the table, a napkin, and a fork.

If you want, I can build stuff that you want and I'll build it .3. but these ^ are all so far and ya that all.
 
Ericthewriter said:
Ok ok I know I don't do these kind of stuff on the forum's cause I usually only like to write story and role-plays but I wanted to try something new!

This is all for fun and I want to see how my building skills are. Now I build 2 this time. The theme is kitchen table and cake!

So here are the building. ( Warning! There bad xD )

View attachment 52368
Time took to build: 5 minutes

Used: White wool and orange wool

Info: I think it's a 7 x 7 block idk but has you see, it's a cake xD The cake has filling inside so it can look all puffy on the outside. Ok ok fine it's bad but I think @CakeTheDutchAD Would like this :3

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Time took to build: 15 minutes

Used: 3 kind of wool, 3 kind of slaps, Cake, Water

Info: This one was one of the best build I build since forever. I took the idea from my art project painting and turn it Into a building. It has a plant for the food. The cake is on it, Some water next to it with a straw, a flower for the table, a napkin, and a fork.

If you want, I can build stuff that you want and I'll build it .3. but these ^ are all so far and ya that all.
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Great job!! I think they look nice^•^
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Eh... I'd say around 6.5/10. The cake should be circular and have more block choices. Make the frosting built on top of the orange part, not IN it, to make it look nicer. You may have to build a bigger cake to do this.

For the table, some things are bigger than they should, like that ginormous freaking flower. And the stem is too thicc. Make the table legs not at the very edge of the corners, but a few blocks inwards. You can also build a cake out of wool instead of real cakes.

Hey, I'm not a professional, please don't take this too seriously. Ask Grian or somethin' for pro tips.
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Icy_Hatake said:
Psst dropping by to say change the title .3.
Its rate not rant....

Better than what I could build .3.
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Ok xD and thanks
ViperXlink said:
It's an ok


p/s. Your pfp is an animation character from a famous malaysia's cartoon called boboiboy
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Wow :o Nice to know thanks :3
BlueWillow said:
Eh... I'd say around 6.5/10. The cake should be circular and have more block choices. Make the frosting built on top of the orange part, not IN it, to make it look nicer. You may have to build a bigger cake to do this.

For the table, some things are bigger than they should, like that ginormous freaking flower. And the stem is too thicc. Make the table legs not at the very edge of the corners, but a few blocks inwards. You can also build a cake out of wool instead of real cakes.

Hey, I'm not a professional, please don't take this too seriously. Ask Grian or somethin' for pro tips.
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@_@ Yup I know that cake one wasn't the best but I like the table one and thanks for the tips :3.
CakeTheDutchAD said:
OOH ISH GUUD I WANNA EAT IT .3.
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PandeeDEATH said:
XD me wanneat let cake
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Eat her not me xD Take that has a jock please .3.
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Ericthewriter said:
Ok ok I know I don't do these kind of stuff on the forum's cause I usually only like to write story and role-plays but I wanted to try something new!

This is all for fun and I want to see how my building skills are. Now I build 2 this time. The theme is kitchen table and cake!

So here are the building. ( Warning! There bad xD )

View attachment 52368
Time took to build: 5 minutes

Used: White wool and orange wool

Info: I think it's a 7 x 7 block idk but has you see, it's a cake xD The cake has filling inside so it can look all puffy on the outside. Ok ok fine it's bad but I think @CakeTheDutchAD Would like this :3

View attachment 52370
Time took to build: 15 minutes

Used: 3 kind of wool, 3 kind of slaps, Cake, Water

Info: This one was one of the best build I build since forever. I took the idea from my art project painting and turn it Into a building. It has a plant for the food. The cake is on it, Some water next to it with a straw, a flower for the table, a napkin, and a fork.

If you want, I can build stuff that you want and I'll build it .3. but these ^ are all so far and ya that all.
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2/10
3/10
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1) dont use the same color for da cake part and da sprinkles
make it more 3D-not just a flat cube
2) more detail-use stair and slabs to get tinier details
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Could've used a larger variety of blocks, the cake looks in imaginitve and boring, but I have super high standards in building lol, I'd give it a 3/10. And the table could use more shaping and creativity, I'd give that a 2/10. I don't mean to be super harsh or condescending in any way.
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GunnedToDeath said:
Could've used a larger variety of blocks, the cake looks in imaginitve and boring, but I have super high standards in building lol, I'd give it a 3/10. And the table could use more shaping and creativity, I'd give that a 2/10. I don't mean to be super harsh or condescending in any way.
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We did basically same grading ^^
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