[The Story of Peter]

[Mr_CupQuake]

Hi
I am trying to say that i will make a story all about a child that makes him proven that his all wrong.

Let's get started c;
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Once upon a time, there was a kid that has born on Johnson's family, they name the kid Peter. When Peter grew up, His parents started hating him (saying that he make all a mistake).

Then, Peter goes to his room and said on his mind. ‘‘I wish i was not borned on this world, i wish i was borned on the right family not on this crap", Peter said.

(The next day)

Hey mom, It's your birthday what is your biggest wish mom? Then her mom replied ‘‘My biggest wish is you will die and if that happens i will be finally happy" Peter's mom said.

(Peter ran on his room and lock the doors)

[Peter gets a piece of paper and a ballpen and he wrotes “Mom, your biggest wish will finally be come true. I am glad you will be happy if i am gone, Thanks mom. I really love you but i really need to do this for your happiness”.]

And then he go down stairs and her mom said, “Peter we will go to the mall”. Peter replied back “Okay mom! ”.

And then, When his parents has already left their house.
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To be continue..

“Are you reading this? ” If yes, You should say “I want Part 2”.

 

[seacosmos]

Hi
I am trying to say that i will make a story all about a child that makes him proven that his all wrong.

Let's get started c;
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Once upon a time, there was a kid that has born on Johnson's family, they name the kid Peter. When Peter grew up, His parents started hating him (saying that he make all a mistake).

Then, Peter goes to his room and said on his mind. ‘‘I wish i was not borned on this world, i wish i was borned on the right family not on this crap", Peter said.

(The next day)

Hey mom, It's your birthday what is your biggest wish mom? Then her mom replied ‘‘My biggest wish is you will die and if that happens i will be finally happy" Peter's mom said.

(Peter ran on his room and lock the doors)

[Peter gets a piece of paper and a ballpen and he wrotes “Mom, your biggest wish will finally be come true. I am glad you will be happy if i am gone, Thanks mom. I really love you but i really need to do this for your happiness”.]

And then he go down stairs and her mom said, “Peter we will go to the mall”. Peter replied back “Okay mom! ”.

And then, When his parents has already left their house.
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To be continue..

“Are you reading this? ” If yes, You should say “I want Part 2”.

This could use some editing but I like it. I want a part 2 please ;3

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[Pandeee]

I want part twoo!!
I wanna see this ending!
Gives me some inspiration ?3?

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[Shive]

I hope suicide is not involved. Suicide is not an appropriate topic for young readers. If anything, stay clear of suicide.

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[Mr_CupQuake]

I hope suicide is not involved. Suicide is not an appropriate topic for young readers. If anything, stay clear of suicide.

I am not involving suicide ._.

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[Shive]

I am not involving suicide ._.

Then, yes. I want Part 2

I love your writing!

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[Mr_CupQuake]

Alert: Part 2 is realesed!

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