Murder Mystery (Murder Mansion) Map submission

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Name: Murder Mansion
By: SlayinCornCob
For: Murder Mystery
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Small is good big is so hard for murderer to win this is bigger than the hotel with slab stairs
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xXphoenixXx said:
No I mean if the killer killed 1 person probably everyone knows who it is (Without telling skin)
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I gotta agree with phoenix bc if the map is small then the murder has a disadvantage of keeping their identity a secret and the cop can just kill them fast
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How?? Theres a lot of places to go to not just an empty space full of people if you think my map is garbage then just dont talk cuz you also make me feel like garbage
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SlayCC said:
How?? Theres a lot of places to go to not just an empty space full of people if you think my map is garbage then just dont talk cuz you also make me feel like garbage
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We never said it was garbage u idiot -.- and we aren't making you feel like garbage
There's a word called criticism
Also we are only saying it's small, it is well build (beside the dirt walls in the side) so don't assume stuff and get a brain
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xXphoenixXx said:
We never said it was garbage u idiot -.- and we aren't making you feel like garbage
There's a word called criticism
Also we are only saying it's full, it is well build (beside the dirt walls in the side) so don't assume stuff and get a brain
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EXCUSE ME I TOUGHT PEOPLE LIKE YOU WAS NICE BUT YOU ARENT PEOPLE IN BRKNLNS FOURMS ARE SUPPOSED TO HELP NOT BE SUCH A ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ AND MAKE EVERYONE FEEL BAD ABOUT THEIR SELVES
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SlayCC said:
EXCUSE ME I TOUGHT PEOPLE LIKE YOU WAS NICE BUT YOU ARENT PEOPLE IN BRKNLNS FOURMS ARE SUPPOSED TO HELP NOT BE SUCH A ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ AND MAKE EVERYONE FEEL BAD ABOUT THEIR SELVES
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I don't try to make people feel and for themsrkves , also I was giving useful critism THE U MADE UP LIES SAYING WE DAID U WERE GARBAGE
THE TWO THINGS I HATE MOST ARE
1) PEOPLE WHO LIE
2) CHEATERS
AND YOU'RE #1
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It's called constructive criticism. When you create something and show it to others, you are saying that they can tell you what they think of it. TO HELP YOU. How can you improve without knowing what was wrong?
Think of a test in school. Lets take two students doing the test, Alice and Bob. The teacher grades Alice's work and she has very few mistakes. When Alice gets the test back, she is happy with her mark, but will make sure she doesn't make those mistakes next time. When the teacher marks Bob's test, he obviously hasn't studied, so he has very many questions wrong or blank. He's incredibly unhappy with his mark on the test when he gets it back, but did the teacher do it out of cruelty? No. She did it so that he would know what he needs to study harder next time. And when she goes through it in class, she is telling Bob and Alice how to improve where they went wrong.
That's what constructive criticism is. You present your work to people, and they tell you what is good and what is bad. The house is built very nicely - the detailing is very nice, the colours work together fairly well - but the map is too small for Murder Mystery, and the dirt wall is a bit unnatural looking. Now, you know that next time you submit a Murder Mystery map, you should make it larger, and if the boundary is a dirt wall, it needs to look more natural than that.
If nobody ever told you how to improve at things, you would never get anywhere in life. You can't just expect that everything you create will be universally loved, just like that. If you applied for a job and didnt fill out forms or whatever properly, would you get the job? Obviously not, even if you were qualified.
I know this was long, so if you're still reading it, I'm wrapping up now. Nobody said your map was garbage. It just needs some work. And even then, maps aren't always accepted. When you create something and people criticize it, they are HELPING you, not trying to hurt you. If you can't handle that, perhaps you shouldn't show anything until you've matured a bit. Also, you're talking about how insulting people isn't nice and then immediately go on to say that @xXphoenixXx is an awful person and a '♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥'... bit hypocritical there.
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HermioneJG said:
It's called constructive criticism. When you create something and show it to others, you are saying that they can tell you what they think of it. TO HELP YOU. How can you improve without knowing what was wrong?
Think of a test in school. Lets take two students doing the test, Alice and Bob. The teacher grades Alice's work and she has very few mistakes. When Alice gets the test back, she is happy with her mark, but will make sure she doesn't make those mistakes next time. When the teacher marks Bob's test, he obviously hasn't studied, so he has very many questions wrong or blank. He's incredibly unhappy with his mark on the test when he gets it back, but did the teacher do it out of cruelty? No. She did it so that he would know what he needs to study harder next time. And when she goes through it in class, she is telling Bob and Alice how to improve where they went wrong.
That's what constructive criticism is. You present your work to people, and they tell you what is good and what is bad. The house is built very nicely - the detailing is very nice, the colours work together fairly well - but the map is too small for Murder Mystery, and the dirt wall is a bit unnatural looking. Now, you know that next time you submit a Murder Mystery map, you should make it larger, and if the boundary is a dirt wall, it needs to look more natural than that.
If nobody ever told you how to improve at things, you would never get anywhere in life. You can't just expect that everything you create will be universally loved, just like that. If you applied for a job and didnt fill out forms or whatever properly, would you get the job? Obviously not, even if you were qualified.
I know this was long, so if you're still reading it, I'm wrapping up now. Nobody said your map was garbage. It just needs some work. And even then, maps aren't always accepted. When you create something and people criticize it, they are HELPING you, not trying to hurt you. If you can't handle that, perhaps you shouldn't show anything until you've matured a bit. Also, you're talking about how insulting people isn't nice and then immediately go on to say that @xXphoenixXx is an awful person and a '♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥'... bit hypocritical there.
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Well I did call him a idiot so that's partly my fault, I have a short fuse
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xXphoenixXx said:
Well I did call him a idiot so that's partly my fault, I have a short fuse
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Yeah, but that wasn't related to the map itself, that was about his immature reaction to your criticism.
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SlayCC said:
EXCUSE ME I TOUGHT PEOPLE LIKE YOU WAS NICE BUT YOU ARENT PEOPLE IN BRKNLNS FOURMS ARE SUPPOSED TO HELP NOT BE SUCH A ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ AND MAKE EVERYONE FEEL BAD ABOUT THEIR SELVES
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@xXphoenixXx im sorry im just easily triggred I wont do it again
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