DarkRainbows
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- Jan 29, 2017
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BACKGROUND STORY
The town of Brokenlens had too many people and were constantly at war with Lifeboat. Everyone loathed them. Of course Brokenlens were winning but the innocent Lifeboat citizens refuged in BrokenLens city. Of course Brokenlens being the nicer city they took them and accepted them as their own. Soon enough there were too many people, they couldn't kick them out, so they created a competition. TeamSkywars.
@iucjeil POV
The wind whistled in my ears as I sprinted as fast I can. I wanted to be the best. I wanted to stay. The autumn leaves and sticks crunched beneath my feet until I halted to a stop infront of a piece of paper stuck to wall of the Great Hall. This was no ordinary piece of paper. It was the ticket to me staying at home. Brokenlens. Hurriedly, I grabbed my pen from my denim shorts and wrote my name under the RED team. Red was my lucky colour. My eyes skimmed the RED team and I saw who were my team mates. @JcGarcia_29. Of course I was paired with the boy who is always unrealistically cheerful, great. My eyes skimmed the rest of my team. @LEOLOVESLIONS. Seriously. First too happy and now depressed, what I am supposed to do. The last member of my team was @KendraHawk. At least she was okay. I had never talked to her but from what I heard she is shy but annoys people a lot. My only hope is Kendra.
Oh my lord...we are going to lose.
@LeonaPlayz POV
The cold bit at my skin making goosebumps appear and I involuntarily start shivering. I am happy with my team. We are definitely going to win. No doubt about it. I was lucky enough to be in the blue team who happened to have some great team mates including @SpikeFeedYouTub, @Steva177 and @Cyber45. My feet crunched over the orange and brown leaves giving me a strange aura of calmness. A twig snapped to my right and I saw @iucjeil frowing with displeasure. I smirked with pride. Looks like red team is down only purple and pink left.
This was going to be a piece of cake.
WHAT DO YOU THINK OF THE SNEAK PEEK? Tell me what I could improve please! Any feed back is appreciated. The real chapter 1 will be out soon
Have a nice day
The town of Brokenlens had too many people and were constantly at war with Lifeboat. Everyone loathed them. Of course Brokenlens were winning but the innocent Lifeboat citizens refuged in BrokenLens city. Of course Brokenlens being the nicer city they took them and accepted them as their own. Soon enough there were too many people, they couldn't kick them out, so they created a competition. TeamSkywars.
@iucjeil POV
The wind whistled in my ears as I sprinted as fast I can. I wanted to be the best. I wanted to stay. The autumn leaves and sticks crunched beneath my feet until I halted to a stop infront of a piece of paper stuck to wall of the Great Hall. This was no ordinary piece of paper. It was the ticket to me staying at home. Brokenlens. Hurriedly, I grabbed my pen from my denim shorts and wrote my name under the RED team. Red was my lucky colour. My eyes skimmed the RED team and I saw who were my team mates. @JcGarcia_29. Of course I was paired with the boy who is always unrealistically cheerful, great. My eyes skimmed the rest of my team. @LEOLOVESLIONS. Seriously. First too happy and now depressed, what I am supposed to do. The last member of my team was @KendraHawk. At least she was okay. I had never talked to her but from what I heard she is shy but annoys people a lot. My only hope is Kendra.
Oh my lord...we are going to lose.
@LeonaPlayz POV
The cold bit at my skin making goosebumps appear and I involuntarily start shivering. I am happy with my team. We are definitely going to win. No doubt about it. I was lucky enough to be in the blue team who happened to have some great team mates including @SpikeFeedYouTub, @Steva177 and @Cyber45. My feet crunched over the orange and brown leaves giving me a strange aura of calmness. A twig snapped to my right and I saw @iucjeil frowing with displeasure. I smirked with pride. Looks like red team is down only purple and pink left.
This was going to be a piece of cake.
WHAT DO YOU THINK OF THE SNEAK PEEK? Tell me what I could improve please! Any feed back is appreciated. The real chapter 1 will be out soon
Have a nice day
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I have no idea..I always mess up...THANKS KENDRA ILL FIX IT FOR THE REAL VERSION
