Psyche and Eros (Greek) (Im obssesed with greek so I made a story)

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Psyche was beautiful, pretty, nice and caring. Cough based on @XxLiazaliaxX Cough
Psyches two older sisters were nice to Psyche, But said mean things about her to others. One day she woke up to find a crowd outside her house. This happend everyday, Soon people from Spartan, Athens and Tartos heard about Conquets beautiful princess, Psyches mother and father were King Samito and Queen Samantha, One day Samito came to her room and saw her crying, He asked what was wrong, Psyche replied with - "I fear I am so beautiful nobody will ask to marry me, They will be too scared father!'
Part 1 - NoochM
Part 2 23 Februay 4:00PM
Part 3 24 February 6:00PM
Final Part 4 February 25 9;00AM
 
NoochM said:
Psyche was beautiful, pretty, nice and caring. Cough based on @XxLiazaliaxX Cough
Psyches two older sisters were nice to Psyche, But said mean things about her to others. One day she woke up to find a crowd outside her house. This happend everyday, Soon people from Spartan, Athens and Tartos heard about Conquets beautiful princess, Psyches mother and father were King Samito and Queen Samantha, One day Samito came to her room and saw her crying, He asked what was wrong, Psyche replied with - "I fear I am so beautiful nobody will ask to marry me, They will be too scared father!'
Part 1 - NoochM
Part 2 23 Februay 4:00PM
Part 3 24 February 6:00PM
Final Part 4 February 25 9;00AM
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So many mistakes in your story, no offence

I already read this 100 times in Percy Jackson and the Greek Heroes
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NoochM said:
Psyche was beautiful, pretty, nice and caring. Cough based on @XxLiazaliaxX Cough
Psyches two older sisters were nice to Psyche, But said mean things about her to others. One day she woke up to find a crowd outside her house. This happend everyday, Soon people from Spartan, Athens and Tartos heard about Conquets beautiful princess, Psyches mother and father were King Samito and Queen Samantha, One day Samito came to her room and saw her crying, He asked what was wrong, Psyche replied with - "I fear I am so beautiful nobody will ask to marry me, They will be too scared father!'
Part 1 - NoochM
Part 2 23 Februay 4:00PM
Part 3 24 February 6:00PM
Final Part 4 February 25 9;00AM
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Top sip for the coughing thing do *cough (sentence) cough* not cough (sentence) cough
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KendraHawk said:
No, you do *cough* (sentence) *cough* not *cough (sentence) cough*
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Eh depends how u say it like u might cough take a break and cough again like yours or if your me I do it fast
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xXphoenixXx said:
Eh depends how u say it like u might cough take a break and cough again like yours or if your me I do it fast
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No, because you put these --> * around actions like *sips water*, and a sentence isn't a doing word. It would be like this if you did it your way vvv

*cough XxLiazaliaxX cough* and Lia isn't an action
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KendraHawk said:
No, because you put these --> * around actions like *sips water*, and a sentence isn't a doing word. It would be like this if you did it your way vvv

*cough XxLiazaliaxX cough* and Lia isn't an action
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I guess but don't u also use whispers as
*(sentence)* and so it's outa *cough* *(sentence)* *cough* or what I said
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DAMM
KendraHawk said:
So many mistakes in your story, no offence

I already read this 100 times in Percy Jackson and the Greek Heroes
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DAMMIT U HAVE THAT BOOK TOO XD
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Name all then grrrr
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Um I have them all also._. My fav was the second book, percy jackaon sea of monsters.
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F
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Name all book kendra
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KendraHawk said:
You don't use these --> * in any sentence, only if you're bad at writing or if you're roleplaying.
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Yeah you do, I believe in minecraft diaries below ep 40 season 1 im pretty sure they were using
*(sentence) * as whispers
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