School | Murder Mystery Map *New Changes*

[Phoe]

O ye i suggest u to add pots stound class rooms, most school have pots fir stuff like pencils n sh*t

Also maybe afd more greenery to make iy less bland?

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[CarlyDove]

@HaiitsllamaYas oops lol llama i tagged the wrong comment i was meant to reply to the dude abve thhis dude lol ill tag u again lol

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[CarlyDove]

hmm looks nice so far but i think it does need some improvements,
for example the baskets in the basketball court look a bit weird
and maybe try using banners for the theater curtains(they r supposed to be curtains right?).
Also this might be more of a personal prefference thing but i dont think end rod looks good for the table legs maybe fences or if u want a bit of color u can use stained glass
And it think it needs a bit more texture on the walls like how u done on the first picture with the 2 brown blocks
Btw i checked ur map and i think the tunnels are too much not sure tho since i dont play mm

Thanks for the feedback i really appreciate you suggestions
@HaiitsllamaYas Llama what do you think?

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[lachlan40]

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[Sleepyhead101]

Hey Im Carly (Carly_Dove) I'm a player on Brokenlens and me and my friend Llama (HaiItsLlamaYas) have just finished making a Murder Mystery Map to submit for Brokenlens.
All images, screenshots and Changes are below

The map is called School
Which features:
* A Main Hall
* 2 Classrooms one is a normal everyday classroom the other in a Science Lab
* Cafeteria
* 2 Separate Seating Areas
* Cafeteria Kitchen
* Girl and Boy Bathrooms
* Gym Court
* Gym Change Rooms
* Theater
* Theater Dressing Room and Closet
* Principals Office
* Staff Room
* Libary
* Computer Room
* A Old Abandoned Room..??

*Changes*
- All tunnels have now been removed (Due to the fact that it would be difficult for the murderer or anyone in general)
- End rods used as table legs have now been changed to fences
- A new version of the world was uploaded
- The Pile of Basketballs in the Gym were removed (Due to them looking weird)

Here are all the screenshots Enjoy (Please Note the Screen shots haven't been updated to the recent changes, they may be updated in the future if you would like to see whats new. Also the screen shot of the tunnels was removed)

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Nice job ====)
My suggestions:
- Add more classrooms
- Would recommend green for the boards.
- Don't forget lockers

Other than that, I would like to praise you for successfully getting out of the old cliches (bricks and red and several abnormally huge gyms as well as national flags everywhere). You used a whole new block palette this time. ADD THIS TO MM NOW

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