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Rock Candy
A few years ago, back in the old days, we had gone to a museum for a school trip. I was excited, and you even more so. The smile on your face was such a pretty sight to see. I hardly saw you smile anymore.
During our time in the museum, I stayed by you. I was watching you more than whatever you happened to be looking at. Your eyes held a kind of sparkle I found intriguing; I couldn’t quite look away from it. Eventually, you lead us to the gift shop. I finally took notice and looked around. My eyes landed on a rocky-looking candy which I had never had. Sadly I didn’t have money to buy the candy. You took notice of this, and being the gentleman you were, offered to buy it for me. After you bought the candy, and a few other things, I lead you outside.
It was a beautiful day that day. The reason I had brought you outside was because I had noticed a beach nearby. I asked you if you’d like to walk with me, and you agreed almost happily. That was my first time walking on a beach. I was happy it was with you, of all people. While walking, I took out the candy, and offered you one of the two. You accepted it, and we continued walking along the beach while eating the candy.
I would catch myself taking in your features. You looked lovely that day. Honesty, you looked lovely everyday. A loud shouting from over by the museum snapped my attention from you. It was our teacher, yelling at us to come back for it was time to leave. Walking back, you had a soft smile on your face. I’ve never seen such a smile on your face before.
I found myself thinking about it on the way home, days after the trip as well. Sadly, that would be last time I would ever see you smile. It would be the last time I would ever see you again. Oh, how I wish I could go back to then, where everything was perfect with me and you. I miss you, and I miss your smiles. I wonder where you are now. Do you think about this time as much as I do? Do I ever even cross your mind anymore? These questions will never be answered. I just hope you’re well, walking with a smile on your face, just like the last one I saw.
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Rock Candy
A few years ago, back in the old days, we had gone to a museum for a school trip. I was excited, and you even more so. The smile on your face was such a pretty sight to see. I hardly saw you smile anymore.
During our time in the museum, I stayed by you. I was watching you more than whatever you happened to be looking at. Your eyes held a kind of sparkle I found intriguing; I couldn’t quite look away from it. Eventually, you lead us to the gift shop. I finally took notice and looked around. My eyes landed on a rocky-looking candy which I had never had. Sadly I didn’t have money to buy the candy. You took notice of this, and being the gentleman you were, offered to buy it for me. After you bought the candy, and a few other things, I lead you outside.
It was a beautiful day that day. The reason I had brought you outside was because I had noticed a beach nearby. I asked you if you’d like to walk with me, and you agreed almost happily. That was my first time walking on a beach. I was happy it was with you, of all people. While walking, I took out the candy, and offered you one of the two. You accepted it, and we continued walking along the beach while eating the candy.
I would catch myself taking in your features. You looked lovely that day. Honesty, you looked lovely everyday. A loud shouting from over by the museum snapped my attention from you. It was our teacher, yelling at us to come back for it was time to leave. Walking back, you had a soft smile on your face. I’ve never seen such a smile on your face before.
I found myself thinking about it on the way home, days after the trip as well. Sadly, that would be last time I would ever see you smile. It would be the last time I would ever see you again. Oh, how I wish I could go back to then, where everything was perfect with me and you. I miss you, and I miss your smiles. I wonder where you are now. Do you think about this time as much as I do? Do I ever even cross your mind anymore? These questions will never be answered. I just hope you’re well, walking with a smile on your face, just like the last one I saw.