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The Dark Star
In a village not so far away that you think from most Fairy Tales story's, lived a small yet a big community village across the Atlantic Ocean. The village they built was actually big a few years ago, sadly being raid from other villagers that didn't like them. Soon after the raid, they decided this time, they won't build the village that big again. Instead, they will build it small and as we go along in time, we can build this village bigger bit by bit than it was.
A few years past. Believe it or not, this village was the biggest village out of all over the world. But the village has a dark secret behind all of this. You see, a long time ago, after the raid all ended, a villager went exploring and looking for wood when suddenly, a star came out of nowhere and landed a few yards from where the villager saw it fall. So the village dropped all of his wood he had in his hands and rushed towards to the shining star.
The star, unfortunately, landed in a cave that looked deep from a view afar. The villager didn't know to either take the risk or to leave it and continue collecting wood for the village rebuild. He took a few minutes to think about it and finally, he decided to go into the cave and find the star. Unfortunately, he didn't know that that star was actually a dark star so the second he touched it, it started to glow. The star glow for a few seconds then flew up into the sky and started to take over.
The villagers saw the star and started to panic! "Omg, what is that thing?" One of the villagers said. "It looks like... Like a DARK STAR!" Everyone started to run around the village. But what the villagers didn't know is that the villager that awoken the dark star was a ninja. The Ninja fought the dark star with the blood sweet in the full moon. The Ninja won the match but the Ninja was so messed up, the villager needed to see a hospital and get surgery. The dark star was kept underground the villager and it was off limits to anyone to dig under the villager.
And until this day, it's still there unawoken.
A few years after, the biggest village was abandoned, unfortunately. The village became famous for the most haunted village in all of in the Atlantic Ocean. Nobody dared to get near that village cause if you do, you're never heard again. Well... This one kid went near it and he exposed the biggest thing in that village...
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5 Years later...
Dating a few years then, lived a young fellow boy name, Jimmy. Jimmy loved to explore places which most people wouldn't dare step foot into. Jimmy parents were aware of this and told him not to go to those places or one day, you'll get lost in on of those places he'll enter. But just like any other kid, he ignored her and continue to explore places no human will step forward.
Over the course of his life besides school that is, he loved to write down his adventure in his mini-book he keeps and marks down which places he already explored and which places to visit next. Now to make "comedy" into the story, some places we're so far, that he had to call an Uber to get to an uber-nation place! Get it? Okie I'll stop now lol
Anyways, like kids, wherever he went, he always collects something from that places in memories of adventuring that particular place he went to. Some places made his feet all wet like explore the mystics of an underwater temple. He has explored so many places that he had an extra room just for his collections he has. His mother told her "where did you get all this stuff?" He told him from his adventure he has been. His mother told him that he has a grand of an adventure in a sarcastic way. But from all of his adventure he has been to, this one will take all of them on top of his adventure.
This adventure will be like no other adventure in history!
6 months later...
ℳARℂℍ 7, 1987
Across the Atlantic Ocean
(Jimmy point of view)
I was getting ready for another grand day of adventure that awaits me out there. This day won't be like any other day of adventuring. My friends and I will go a few miles away and explore history most haunted village ever founded in the Atlantic Ocean. "The Village Of No Return." Legend has it that that village used to be the biggest village in the entire Atlantic Ocean and no other village came close in fields/yards. Sadly one day, a villager wonder around, collecting wood when he saw a shooting star falling from the sky.
He dropped all of his wood and went to the star. Unfortunately, that star was a dark star, causing destruction around the whole village. Little did they know that the villager that went to the star was a ninja. The dark star fought the Ninja in a battle. Fortunately the Ninja won but unfortunately, the Ninja was badly injured. He died 6 days later in the hospital. But the dark star was kept under the village and all the villager evacuated from the villager, becoming abandoned for many years. Later, Legend says it, that anyone that goes near the village, is never seen again.
"But Jimmy" Bris says while looking out the window, "Do you actually believe in all that stuff?" Jimmy stopped for a second. He looked down at his shoes. His heart started to pump a little fast than it normally does. "I mean...." He studies while trying to talk. "It really does sound legit." He says while looking at the village from far ahead in the car. "He does have a point," Jake says. (Jake is the one that's driving the car.) "The village does legit look dangerous as f- I mean french fries hehe has the Legend says.
Bris took a breath as she tries to think what to respond to it. "Watch YouR LanGuAge Jake or I'll hug yoU so HarD yoUr EyEs WilL poP ouT" Bris says. "I doubt that oof," Jake says while driving up to the parking lot. They all got off out of the car as they see what awaits them. "You know guys, I love adventure and everything but this one... I think this one we should pass." Jimmy says as he holds his book in his hands. "C'mon Jimmy, it's just an old village. Besides, that Legend was from a long time ago. It's probably fake by now."
"Ya, fake. Ya right." Jimmy whispered. Bris open the door slowly as Jake and Jimmy follow her. "You think the Legend is still true as it today?" Jimmy asked Bris has he voice cracked. "Eh, It does sound legit even to someone doesn't believe it caught. So yay? I guess the Legend has it today is still true.
"You guys are all cry baby's ugh!" "I'm going downstairs to explore. "Umm. Shouldn't we stuck together in case of something happening?" Jimmy says. "There's a thing called a phone now get out of my way, I'm going in." Before Bris and Jimmy Could've said something, he was long gone in the basement. Bris went to explore the places while Jimmy went off and explore the whole village. Strangely enough, every single village was painted plain blue and the roof was painted all red all around. Believe it or not, every row you went to, was the same thing. "If I lived here back then, I will 99.9% get mixed up with the wrong house lmao." Jimmy went back to the house where Bris was exploring the kitchen.
"Look at this dumb" Bris smerk. "If I lived here, I'll probably be left the village by the time they raised the places or better yet escape the minute I got here. Jimmy and Bris explored the place a little more. Jimmy was going in the hallway until he tripped on a book. "Ouch! What the-. Hey!" Jimmy picked up the book. Bris!" Jimmy called. "Come, look at this!" Bris ran from the hallway to find him. "What is it, Jimmy?" Look at this page! Jimmy turns to page 78 of the book. "Read it!" Bris reads it:
"Stating one of the biggest villages to ever been build was attacked by the death star, causing more than 1,000 deaths and counting on August 12, 1943. The villagers stated that the death star will be buried in this village and it will be abandoned so no one will ever step foot to the village. The Dark star could be awoken at any time but it should not or else, no one knows what it would do to the world."
Copyright ©1950 DreamBooks Company
"Oh, my," They both said at the same time. "Jinx!" Jimmy says. "Dang it!" Bris giggled. "Anyways, so this places is still haunted! And the Dark star could be under our feet right now!" Jimmy screams. "Now now calm down," Bris says as she bites her teeth. "What I'm more concerned is that the Dark Star is still alive but sleeping and could possibly be awoken at any time!" Bris says. "Omg!" Jimmy yells. "What! What is it?" Bris says. "Jake!" Jimmy says.
"What about Jake?" Bris says."He went down in the basement!" if this place is filled with crakes, it's possible that Jake could've entered that hole and possibly leading to the Dark star and possibly waking it up!" Jimmy says. Bris eyes got wider than she ever done it before "Omg you're right!" We gotta get down there!" "You think?" Jimmy says. "Oh shush~"
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The Dark Star
In a village not so far away that you think from most Fairy Tales story's, lived a small yet a big community village across the Atlantic Ocean. The village they built was actually big a few years ago, sadly being raid from other villagers that didn't like them. Soon after the raid, they decided this time, they won't build the village that big again. Instead, they will build it small and as we go along in time, we can build this village bigger bit by bit than it was.
A few years past. Believe it or not, this village was the biggest village out of all over the world. But the village has a dark secret behind all of this. You see, a long time ago, after the raid all ended, a villager went exploring and looking for wood when suddenly, a star came out of nowhere and landed a few yards from where the villager saw it fall. So the village dropped all of his wood he had in his hands and rushed towards to the shining star.
The star, unfortunately, landed in a cave that looked deep from a view afar. The villager didn't know to either take the risk or to leave it and continue collecting wood for the village rebuild. He took a few minutes to think about it and finally, he decided to go into the cave and find the star. Unfortunately, he didn't know that that star was actually a dark star so the second he touched it, it started to glow. The star glow for a few seconds then flew up into the sky and started to take over.
The villagers saw the star and started to panic! "Omg, what is that thing?" One of the villagers said. "It looks like... Like a DARK STAR!" Everyone started to run around the village. But what the villagers didn't know is that the villager that awoken the dark star was a ninja. The Ninja fought the dark star with the blood sweet in the full moon. The Ninja won the match but the Ninja was so messed up, the villager needed to see a hospital and get surgery. The dark star was kept underground the villager and it was off limits to anyone to dig under the villager.
And until this day, it's still there unawoken.
A few years after, the biggest village was abandoned, unfortunately. The village became famous for the most haunted village in all of in the Atlantic Ocean. Nobody dared to get near that village cause if you do, you're never heard again. Well... This one kid went near it and he exposed the biggest thing in that village...
...
5 Years later...
Dating a few years then, lived a young fellow boy name, Jimmy. Jimmy loved to explore places which most people wouldn't dare step foot into. Jimmy parents were aware of this and told him not to go to those places or one day, you'll get lost in on of those places he'll enter. But just like any other kid, he ignored her and continue to explore places no human will step forward.
Over the course of his life besides school that is, he loved to write down his adventure in his mini-book he keeps and marks down which places he already explored and which places to visit next. Now to make "comedy" into the story, some places we're so far, that he had to call an Uber to get to an uber-nation place! Get it? Okie I'll stop now lol
Anyways, like kids, wherever he went, he always collects something from that places in memories of adventuring that particular place he went to. Some places made his feet all wet like explore the mystics of an underwater temple. He has explored so many places that he had an extra room just for his collections he has. His mother told her "where did you get all this stuff?" He told him from his adventure he has been. His mother told him that he has a grand of an adventure in a sarcastic way. But from all of his adventure he has been to, this one will take all of them on top of his adventure.
This adventure will be like no other adventure in history!
6 months later...
ℳARℂℍ 7, 1987
Across the Atlantic Ocean
(Jimmy point of view)
I was getting ready for another grand day of adventure that awaits me out there. This day won't be like any other day of adventuring. My friends and I will go a few miles away and explore history most haunted village ever founded in the Atlantic Ocean. "The Village Of No Return." Legend has it that that village used to be the biggest village in the entire Atlantic Ocean and no other village came close in fields/yards. Sadly one day, a villager wonder around, collecting wood when he saw a shooting star falling from the sky.
He dropped all of his wood and went to the star. Unfortunately, that star was a dark star, causing destruction around the whole village. Little did they know that the villager that went to the star was a ninja. The dark star fought the Ninja in a battle. Fortunately the Ninja won but unfortunately, the Ninja was badly injured. He died 6 days later in the hospital. But the dark star was kept under the village and all the villager evacuated from the villager, becoming abandoned for many years. Later, Legend says it, that anyone that goes near the village, is never seen again.
"But Jimmy" Bris says while looking out the window, "Do you actually believe in all that stuff?" Jimmy stopped for a second. He looked down at his shoes. His heart started to pump a little fast than it normally does. "I mean...." He studies while trying to talk. "It really does sound legit." He says while looking at the village from far ahead in the car. "He does have a point," Jake says. (Jake is the one that's driving the car.) "The village does legit look dangerous as f- I mean french fries hehe has the Legend says.
Bris took a breath as she tries to think what to respond to it. "Watch YouR LanGuAge Jake or I'll hug yoU so HarD yoUr EyEs WilL poP ouT" Bris says. "I doubt that oof," Jake says while driving up to the parking lot. They all got off out of the car as they see what awaits them. "You know guys, I love adventure and everything but this one... I think this one we should pass." Jimmy says as he holds his book in his hands. "C'mon Jimmy, it's just an old village. Besides, that Legend was from a long time ago. It's probably fake by now."
"Ya, fake. Ya right." Jimmy whispered. Bris open the door slowly as Jake and Jimmy follow her. "You think the Legend is still true as it today?" Jimmy asked Bris has he voice cracked. "Eh, It does sound legit even to someone doesn't believe it caught. So yay? I guess the Legend has it today is still true.
"You guys are all cry baby's ugh!" "I'm going downstairs to explore. "Umm. Shouldn't we stuck together in case of something happening?" Jimmy says. "There's a thing called a phone now get out of my way, I'm going in." Before Bris and Jimmy Could've said something, he was long gone in the basement. Bris went to explore the places while Jimmy went off and explore the whole village. Strangely enough, every single village was painted plain blue and the roof was painted all red all around. Believe it or not, every row you went to, was the same thing. "If I lived here back then, I will 99.9% get mixed up with the wrong house lmao." Jimmy went back to the house where Bris was exploring the kitchen.
"Look at this dumb" Bris smerk. "If I lived here, I'll probably be left the village by the time they raised the places or better yet escape the minute I got here. Jimmy and Bris explored the place a little more. Jimmy was going in the hallway until he tripped on a book. "Ouch! What the-. Hey!" Jimmy picked up the book. Bris!" Jimmy called. "Come, look at this!" Bris ran from the hallway to find him. "What is it, Jimmy?" Look at this page! Jimmy turns to page 78 of the book. "Read it!" Bris reads it:
"Stating one of the biggest villages to ever been build was attacked by the death star, causing more than 1,000 deaths and counting on August 12, 1943. The villagers stated that the death star will be buried in this village and it will be abandoned so no one will ever step foot to the village. The Dark star could be awoken at any time but it should not or else, no one knows what it would do to the world."
Copyright ©1950 DreamBooks Company
"Oh, my," They both said at the same time. "Jinx!" Jimmy says. "Dang it!" Bris giggled. "Anyways, so this places is still haunted! And the Dark star could be under our feet right now!" Jimmy screams. "Now now calm down," Bris says as she bites her teeth. "What I'm more concerned is that the Dark Star is still alive but sleeping and could possibly be awoken at any time!" Bris says. "Omg!" Jimmy yells. "What! What is it?" Bris says. "Jake!" Jimmy says.
"What about Jake?" Bris says."He went down in the basement!" if this place is filled with crakes, it's possible that Jake could've entered that hole and possibly leading to the Dark star and possibly waking it up!" Jimmy says. Bris eyes got wider than she ever done it before "Omg you're right!" We gotta get down there!" "You think?" Jimmy says. "Oh shush~"
